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Alright last shot at a punchline...

Postby WakeUpShow » Feb 5th, '11, 21:20

does anyone think this is good. i used it in my drop in CW.

Battle me and taste defeat like Rex Ryan.
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Re: Alright last shot at a punchline...

Postby classthe_king » Feb 5th, '11, 21:24

Actually that made me lol
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Re: Alright last shot at a punchline...

Postby mcZu » Feb 5th, '11, 21:25

That's dope. But the plays on ''defeat'' are played out, you gotta be a more creative. But it's good.
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Re: Alright last shot at a punchline...

Postby classthe_king » Feb 5th, '11, 21:47

mcZu wrote:That's dope. But the plays on ''defeat'' are played out, you gotta be a more creative. But it's good.


It was a new punch with a current event.

It's not like he said

You can taste defeat...shoes
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Re: Alright last shot at a punchline...

Postby mcZu » Feb 5th, '11, 21:52

I know, I did say it's dope. But it's still played out. There is nothing wrong with the punch, but the concept has been done numerous times before... Even if it has a current event embedded in it.
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Re: Alright last shot at a punchline...

Postby WakeUpShow » Feb 5th, '11, 21:53

thanks guys and i did get the defeat part from Vinnie Paz, but I thought this was funnier lol.
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Re: Alright last shot at a punchline...

Postby BILI » Feb 5th, '11, 21:53

I dont get it,lol,prolly cause I dont know who that Rex dude is. :unsure:
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Re: Alright last shot at a punchline...

Postby WakeUpShow » Feb 5th, '11, 21:56

BILI wrote:I dont get it,lol,prolly cause I dont know who that Rex dude is. :unsure:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FeOonqxHN6I
he's an american football coach with a foot fetish haha
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Re: Alright last shot at a punchline...

Postby BILI » Feb 5th, '11, 21:57

Cosh wrote:
BILI wrote:I dont get it,lol,prolly cause I dont know who that Rex dude is. :unsure:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FeOonqxHN6I
he's an american football coach with a foot fetish haha

AAA...nice,get it now :y:
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Re: Alright last shot at a punchline...

Postby mcZu » Feb 5th, '11, 23:54

Kick it, punt.
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Re: Alright last shot at a punchline...

Postby Block » Feb 6th, '11, 01:26

too much bragging, you should be the silent type..
Put your foot in your mouth.. Rex ryan's wife.

See the double entendre? Much better than the overly played defeat lines.
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Re: Alright last shot at a punchline...

Postby WakeUpShow » Feb 6th, '11, 06:13

k block wrote:too much bragging, you should be the silent type..
Put your foot in your mouth.. Rex ryan's wife.

See the double entendre? Much better than the overly played defeat lines.

:laughing: :laughing: :worship: that's awesome
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Re: Alright last shot at a punchline...

Postby Block » Feb 6th, '11, 07:03

***** wrote:i hate those young money punchlines :(


Me too, lol. I just had a joe budden flow going on and it sounded good.
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Re: Alright last shot at a punchline...

Postby Block » Feb 6th, '11, 07:04

Genocide wrote:
k block wrote:too much bragging, you should be the silent type..
Put your foot in your mouth.. Rex ryan's wife.

See the double entendre? Much better than the overly played defeat lines.

Nice.

Every time I see your name, the chorus to D Block plays in my head, but I hear "welcome to k block"

:coffee:

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