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Re: Alone On A Valentine's Day

Postby Steve Spag » Feb 15th, '11, 01:49

Not bad man, the intro is really amazing but when it got into the verses it seemed sort of empty, if you know what I mean. The tempo is perfect although I think it would sound better in a deeper tone.

Keep it up man!
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Re: Alone On A Valentine's Day

Postby mdemaz » Feb 15th, '11, 02:55

I was alone too..
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Re: Alone On A Valentine's Day

Postby mdemaz » Feb 15th, '11, 03:09

Starts off well, then goes into a slump, then blazes up again then boom!
The pianos are always going to be epic tbh...
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Re: Alone On A Valentine's Day

Postby Emadyville » Feb 16th, '11, 07:14

I love it, the simple feel to it makes me feel like the lyrics would stand out really well. Love the hook, transitions in the verses are nice, overall this is dope and could def take on many different types of feels in terms of concepts and lyrics.

great work, always delivering man keep it up :worship:
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Re: Alone On A Valentine's Day

Postby Tornado » Feb 16th, '11, 15:42

Strings don't feel real and i couldn't hear no bass to it. The intro sounded awesome but overall, it felt abit empty
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