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Some battle verses that I freestyled

Postby Inzanity » Aug 26th, '05, 18:20

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Nice

Postby Vettori » Aug 26th, '05, 18:55

That was better, and i liked it, too much may i add, but it was good, But it tends, to sound to me like bragging, Who exactly are you dissin in this ? lolz
It was good tho, ur slowly makin a name for urself,
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Re: Nice

Postby Inzanity » Aug 26th, '05, 20:39

Faith99 wrote:That was better, and i liked it, too much may i add, but it was good, But it tends, to sound to me like bragging, Who exactly are you dissin in this ? lolz
It was good tho, ur slowly makin a name for urself,
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I was dissing a bunch of different people
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Woops

Postby Vettori » Aug 26th, '05, 21:03

Wasnt paying attention to title of post, srry man but ya ur good,
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Postby eminemcaparica » Aug 26th, '05, 21:24

good work
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