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Vetttori & Sage - I Can See

Postby Vettori » Feb 23rd, '11, 06:20

http://www.zshare.net/audio/869657766ae415a4/

Finally got my own place, heres the first song we recorded. Got about 5 others in the works.





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I Can see

VT &
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S -Ive been thinkin outside of the box,Im not sinkin in my thoughts im givin all that i got
to stick it all in a spot,That i go all in and drop.Without remourse any chorus any syllable thought
It's such a typical Plot, your gettin rich stickin nickles in slots.

V -You won't want shit when it drops. Punchin you with my Fist so hard, My wrist it'll pop
Won't ever miss when i aim, This at your Top!

S -this missle is locked, and this will hit you harder then you fallin off a cliff into rocks
Just wait untill we meet to see what kind of shit you can talk
so this is it my only mission you can listen or talk
It won't end by decision im submittin the lock.

V -End up in a place, Where there growing a crowd
Watch what i soley become because i know im aloud
Take your one real moment, yea go and be proud
Have no anchors holdin me back or slowin me down.

S -This is my moment ima show em, That im holdin my ground
For every problem i got goin, ill be mowing em down
Im out of options,ima take you out, im goin to town,

V -If you tread in deeper water than your going to drown.

S -Proving my prides even harder then supplying my trust
Move it aside ,teetor tottor When they relying on us,

V -Music is shy someone should tell this world to fly on a bus
An expression that makes you better understand your mind it just sucks.


CHORUS
-I Can only hope that i will be
better then i know that i can be,
I can No Longer hold back
They already know that,
All our eyes open know that i can See (X2)

S -yea yea, And now im climbin to peaks,
But if you think that you can catch me then keep minding your feet

V -Words freeze, It won't let you when your tryin to speak
My minds free but my body keeps tryin to sleep.

S -Ive gotta break through the surface take what i deserve it's time to Wake up and make up
for the days i was feeling nervous,Time to shape up make it worth it
Slay em make em pay its perfect,say however you can word it, Murder I will not observe it.


CHORUS
-I Can only hope that i will be
better then i know that i can be,
I can No Longer hold back
They already know that,
All our eyes open know that i can See (X2)

V -This trains riding forever so weèll never stop making tracks.
If you feel that your drive is better, Take control of the wheel
Pain inside me will never become a thing of my past,
You can see that my eyes are redder and my soul isnt real.

S -This shits a whole differant feel.I believe its better that you know just how to Cope with your fear
Ive noticed,youve been hopin you can hold in your tears.
While im approaching youvè been focused on a soul that appears

V -See the reflection of the bus off All the buildings i pass,
regrets and the loss of one thing thoughts of rebuilding my past
Knowing it cant happen, so i rap, try to fill in the gaps.
Still in my mind, felt like dying now that feeling is Back.
Said now that feelin is back.

I can I can only

CHORUS
-I Can only hope that i will be
better then i know that i can be,
I can No Longer hold back
They already know that,
All our eyes open know that i can See (X2)
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Re: Vetttori & Sage - I Can See

Postby Solace » Feb 24th, '11, 00:09

This track is fucking beast, I'm not going to lie. You say Sage is new at it but he's pretty impressive, I wasn't expecting something this good. The entire track feels so energetic and pump up, it's crazy. I really can't find any flaws, you know I always love your tracks. This bumps hard. Maybe I'm just in a really good mood or something but I think it's great, keep at it. I also loved the flow change ups and the chorus was really well done with the adlibs :y:
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Re: Vetttori & Sage - I Can See

Postby Vettori » Feb 24th, '11, 00:22

THANKS ALOT HOMIE........ SHIIIIIT :worship:
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Re: Vetttori & Sage - I Can See

Postby Steve Spag » Feb 24th, '11, 00:29

Fireeee!
Honestly, this track is too good to get the proper recognition it deserves. I mean, you really got your shit down pat bro. I still can't get away from that Em feeling, but it works for you.

Great track as usual man, you hardly ever let a fan down!
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Re: Vetttori & Sage - I Can See

Postby Vettori » Feb 24th, '11, 00:36

Thank you man, those words are motivating.
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Re: Vetttori & Sage - I Can See

Postby Scrubz » Feb 24th, '11, 00:52

MY only complaint is that wack ass z share, it takes like 5 min just to dl it. hulkshare ftw! Beat was pretty cool, quality was great. Hype track bro got me pumped. Flow was on point lyrics were dope. Nothin to complain about. Hit up my track, scrubz self description. and if u ever need beats or collab just pm and check out sound click in my sig

Great shit homie! :worship:
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Re: Vetttori & Sage - I Can See

Postby Vettori » Feb 24th, '11, 08:29

Thank you for checking.
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Re: Vetttori & Sage - I Can See

Postby Mr. Chambers » Feb 24th, '11, 17:43

sage was pretty cool. he was more like an amp'd up spag tbh. lyrics were pretty impressive for his first time. as was the delivery
you were actually pretty fresh. this is the first song i've heard from you that didn't like make me think of eminem. so propz i hope you stick in this lane cuz i can respect it alot more.

overall pretty sick track...lots of energy. liked the back and forth shit yall had going on. be looking forward to future shit
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Re: Vetttori & Sage - I Can See

Postby Vettori » Feb 24th, '11, 17:54

Thank you I appreciate every word.
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Re: Vetttori & Sage - I Can See

Postby Robbie G » Feb 24th, '11, 18:21

I liked the energy on the track and the lyrics seemed pretty good. I had a hard time understanding you at some points, not sure if ti was the mixing or quality.

Good track though :y:
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Re: Vetttori & Sage - I Can See

Postby Vettori » Feb 24th, '11, 18:32

Thanks, yea there wer'e alot of repeating words going on example (down X3)
so it just made some parts unclear...Ill drop lyrics shortly

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Re: Vetttori & Sage - I Can See

Postby Wallace » Feb 24th, '11, 21:28

Everythin is good. Well crafted lyrics, beat is not amazin but fits well. Track really has energy :8)

Liked the changes and trades of the spitters in the rhyme scheme, long and short verses and the off beat prevented it from soundin easy.

Much better than the other track "when your not there".
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Re: Vetttori & Sage - I Can See

Postby Vettori » Feb 24th, '11, 21:31

Thanks again :P

Im feeling eager to make a better song now.
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Re: Vetttori & Sage - I Can See

Postby dR3 » Feb 24th, '11, 21:49

Damn, what did I just listen to?

I love everything about this track lol, the beat, your flow-switches, the energy, the hook... Both did great as far as the lyrics go too.

I can definitely see myself bumping this. Keep it up!
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Re: Vetttori & Sage - I Can See

Postby Vettori » Feb 24th, '11, 21:50

Thank you till the end of time. :D
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