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New WesT Song!

Postby WesTMusiK » Feb 26th, '11, 03:23

Well, not really a full song but check out the new snippet for a song I'm working on called "Back Again".

Let me know what you think, guys!

Back Again (Snippet): http://www.usershare.net/ydkl48ywpjhs

Link of feedback: http://www.forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=38&t=108637&p=1530374#p1530374
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Re: New WesT Song!

Postby Scrubz » Feb 26th, '11, 03:31

So I dont like the whole idea of snippets, to me it ruins the song down the road. So the flow and delivery was good for the most part you just have a bad habit of forcing to many words in a bar and that kinda ruins the flOw. I like the content and the beat was hot. Deff wanna hear the full song.
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Re: New WesT Song!

Postby Scrubz » Feb 26th, '11, 03:33

Oh and peep my new shit homie! Wanna hear what u think.
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Re: New WesT Song!

Postby Solace » Feb 26th, '11, 18:56

I really enjoy your delivery/voice. It's pretty sick. Some parts your flow was a little rushed but I'm not so picky about that, so it's okay. The chorus is really sick. The verse is pretty good too, I really enjoyed this. I'll peep the full one bro when it's released :sweating:
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Re: New WesT Song!

Postby WesTMusiK » Feb 27th, '11, 01:28

Thanks for the feedback, guys!

@***** Yeah this place is addicting, hahah. And thanks man.
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So why do I miss you? I'm walking on these eggshells
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Re: New WesT Song!

Postby Vettori » Feb 27th, '11, 01:32

The first verse you need to lower the energy...
lower voice, would be nicer... like its not a bad thing, but it didnt change anywhere, was one Pitch

The lyrics need work. you need better multi's

and rhymes need to rhyme more, Yur syllable game is weak.....No offense just My opinion.

Try to put more work into creating the verse, and even recording it... Quality wasnt bad, but like i said maybe a differant tone of voice would be more appropriate,
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