Nefarious & Vettori - When I Talk

[Vettori]

http://www.zshare.net/audio/87049419981c6623/

Nefarious on the verses, me on the hook.

We just did this in 30 minutes

[Vettori]

BUMPPPPP

[classthe_king]

Beat is hot, chorus is pretty good except for when the volume goes out, I don't know why you did that?

Verses are dope but they're way too low, you can barely hear them, expecially compared to your loud chorus, they need to match up better.

[Vettori]

Yea i did that by mistake..every now and then i tend to fuck up when im mixing..Lol
But ill keep closer watch next time.

thanks for checkin it

[Vettori]

Link to feed (since i forgot)

viewtopic.php?f=38&t=108293

& Bump

[Solace]

This is very well done aside from the mixing issues with the volume, Nefarious is pretty sickk and the hook is great.

[Vettori]

thanks

[Emadyville]

Hook is dope, but the volume shit at the one spot it dips, which was mentioned is all I have as a "complaint" but it's dope sounds great and the lyrics were cool, honestly hooks fuckin

Yeah his verses could be louder, don't need to say it again cause it was mentioned but

And he killed every verse, damn I'm guessing he isn't a member on here?

Dope shit

Btw this beats sick as hell, you or him make it or...?

[Vettori]

I forget who produced it. haha he knows.

he is a member on here

Juts hasnt been active..

We'll soon be commin back to life

[Vettori]

bump

thaks again to everyone who checked this already and left feedback

[ThomasAguanis]

I didn't care for the intro but those 3 seconds don't really matter. This beat is dope. The hook is fades out/in a bit but there's nothing really wrong with it aside from the volume issue people mentioned above. It's a good hook. Nefarious rips his verses. He's very consistent throughout each one. I don't have any complaints here. His flow fit the beat and his rhyming was on point. Overall, this is a good song with a great showing from both artists. Keep it up

[Vettori]

thank you for Taking time to listen

[Jaz]

Technically - 9/10

Hook: Solid. Catchy thanks to the delivery, and not totally empty.
Concepts: Solid.
Lyricism: Very nice. Multis are evident, but don't sacrifice the delivery. Wordplay and metaphors, not so much, but they are there occasionally.

Musically 9.5/10
Production: I like the beat.. Catches my ear very well.
Catchiness: Hook seems like it could catch. Flow and delivery are catchy too.
Delivery/Flow: Pretty sick. The multis stand out well thanks to the delivery.. and the flow is strong.

OVERALL: 9.4 - Very nice. I'd like to collab some time.

[Xray]

lol at going from 9 to 9.5 to 9.4. Very professional review lol.

Nefarious was dope fam, only problem I have with his stuff is his voice still sounds young. I'm gonna take a wild guess and say he practises his verses out loud a lot before he records and it takes some of his voice away so it makes it sound more high pitched. < Something that happens to me, but idk I could be wrong lol. But if I'm right, I think it's best if he drinks a lot of water before he starts recording, and preferably eat something, or do whatever necessary to get his full voice back before he records.

Because his voice sounds high pitched and deep at the same time, that's why I'm thinking maybe that's the issue. Other than that, I really liked his verses, his lyrics were perfect. Obvious mixing issues, because I think you listened to it way too loud when you mixed it so you didn't realize his vocals are way lower than the beat. Hook was alright, I think if you rapped a more hardcore lyric it would of fit more. Good stuff bro, good to see you back on your grind.

[Vettori]

Thanks alot for breaking that down..Your right too, ive just been learning about Warm water and the effects it has on your voicebox.. Eating as well...

Yea man finally got my own place and this time around im trying to do shit right,

Thx ill fee something you did when i'm online next...Just got piled with tons of work..gonna be Busy >.<