Chambers Monday Freestyle (Produced by 2deep)

[Mr. Chambers]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P_yL_POMp3o

called "Why Do You Hate Me?"

check it out...

link of feedback: viewtopic.php?f=38&t=108543

[Longway]

Not bad at all especially considering its a freestyle your flow was very well put together. Keep em coming bro

[Mr. Chambers]

^good looks...wasn't a freestyle tho...its just a weekly thing i do and dunno what else to call it lol

[Mr. Chambers]

my shit got pushed way down

[Scrubz]

my shit got pushed way down

Ahhhh Tommy 2 timer, I expected better! I though the vocals were loud, an the deliver was a little lazy. The thing that surprised me the most was your flow, it was shaky at parts to say the least. I enjoyed the second verse much more than the first tho. Lyrics were decent, felt like I've herd it before tho. Not specifically, but as a whole. More so the subject matter not the lyrics. Hook was decent, simple but catchy. There were some sick multi's though, you did have a bunch of sick lines but the flow was off on some of them so they didn't stick out.

I know you can do better than this, just an off song IMO. Keep it up.

[B.A.D.]

hmm, the quality is almost there, cuz it now sounds clean but a bit too loud... if you put your vocals exaclt 1.0 db lower I reckon it will sound perfect. so try it out and see what happens, if its still loud, go -1.5 db. but not too much, so the beat wont overshadow you.

the thing I enjoyed the best were the lyrics, ***Damn!!!. you improve the way you write with every new song you write, and I'm not speaking about complexity or technique, but how you incorporate real talk, exactly what you want to say, and you still get it with extra ability. few people around here I see that can do that perfect, Kez would be another great example.

what to perfect?, well, maybe the hook, its all over the place u know?, it flows good, and the idea is nice. but there a couple things that dont sound good. like the exact transition of the "why do you hate me" IF bla bla u know?.

and man, the OUTRO IS

what up!!!

[JBM]

It was ok. The flow was alright and the lyrics are decent but u do stick to the same subjects. The hook was bad. It was a good idea but needed to be exectuted better.

I've been checking out your monday "freestyles" and there hasnt been much improvment.(personally i liked the earlier ones better) Maybe you just wanna take more time with your tracks man coz i don't think your gona get better by rushing these out.

Just my opinion. Keep it up.

[Tranquil]

I actually wrote feed for this but i deleted the notepad file that i wrote it in

This is a solid track. Im liking these little weekly tracks, its a great way to keep people checking you shit and keeping your name out there. Kanye hit the jackpot in doing this

The hook is loved it! The verses were good aswell, had me bobbing my head all the way through

I LOVED the outro!

Im gonna come.... in your areana and im gon fuck your shit up

hahaha, im hyped for whatever you and Ax-D are cooking up

[Mr. Chambers]

for people saying "not much change in subjects", i'm working on an album and mixtape. Why would i use those type of tracks for a weekly thing?
i can guarantee my album will have very little if any at all of these tracks. but since this is such a big deal i'll do something different next week.

but tbh, i did a club track (please don't go remix, What's my name? remix, ect), deep track (follow my trail).
more "gangsta" type tracks...lol

but its cool...i'll try to do some different things with next week's track. But i appreciate those who can actually give me their opinion on the series as a whole.

can i ask what you want to hear me do?

[Scrubz]

for people saying "not much change in subjects", i'm working on an album and mixtape. Why would i use those type of tracks for a weekly thing?
i can guarantee my album will have very little if any at all of these tracks. but since this is such a big deal i'll do something different next week.

but tbh, i did a club track (please don't go remix, What's my name? remix, ect), deep track (follow my trail).
more "gangsta" type tracks...lol

but its cool...i'll try to do some different things with next week's track. But i appreciate those who can actually give me their opinion on the series as a whole.

can i ask what you want to hear me do?

Well that's uP to your creativity, it's tough writing a fully themed song I have trouble as well.
And also I get that it's just a "freestyle" track and it's gonna be no were near as nice as ur mixtaPe but I'm still gonna judge it how I see it.

The freestyle thing is a double edge sword, on one had it's great practice for you but for us it gets a lil boring. Even in this one I think you seemed a little board IMO.

Maybe you should try just doing one FIRE verse each week, just a thought.

[WesTMusiK]

Damn dude, I'm really liking this one.

The flow was dope as shit, the rhymes were dope aswell.

Your delivery wasn't the best, but far from the worst .. Nothing really bad just could use work. (I'm in the same boat)

I can't lie. I played it twice, haha.

Overall, though. Solid-ass track, can't wait for more. 4.5/5. Keep it up, homie.

[Steve Spag]

Damn dude, I'm really liking this one.

The flow was dope as shit, the rhymes were dope aswell.

Your delivery wasn't the best, but far from the worst .. Nothing really bad just could use work. (I'm in the same boat)

I can't lie. I played it twice, haha.

Overall, though. Solid-ass track, can't wait for more. 4.5/5. Keep it up, homie.

2nd that. Good track man.

[Jay Tunes]

hoook - worse part of the track

lyrics - were good.
flow - was not bad, just felt like some bars were too long/short sometimes so it threw it off a lil.
quality - was ok... a lil too loud for my speakrs

maybe u should add some background sound?
keep it up tho, you got a good voice.

[Tornado]

Felt the only thing missing was a bit more energy on your verses and the chorus could be a bit more clearer, i don't know exactly how to descrile but to me it sounded cluttered a bit. This is one of my favorite Freestyles from you so keep it going

[Drama Setter]

lol, that scrubs scene gave me chuckles ,and freestyle was cool as always