Unfaithful Friends?

[mcZu]

Link of feedback: viewtopic.php?f=24&t=109686

Beat written to: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3vB4QiDvV_Q

All Night Long thinking about my lost path
Waking up to Nate Dogg’s death
It was all over the news, a late conquest
Uttering out may God bless
His soul and let’s not forget the people in Japan
Saying a prayer for Libya, Bahrain
Sitting on the train, another plain day
But who would’ve known that the drama would
Bridge the gap between black and white like Obama could (Did he?..)

Stuck in that grey area, her face scarier
The laced barriers, got torn apart
It’s funny how.. One night tore apart
A long lasting relationship
Emotions indulged in mutiny
They relate to this.. feeling of you and me
Should end, and end up in you screwing me
No unity, I’m human, Jeet*..
A few believe, that platonic relations are a lovers act
But confronting me with that will make my tectonic plates overlap
My face focused fast, you could see ma
I had the whole group feeling like Fukushima

Two years of friendship, now she calling me an asshole?
It’s a fact, though, but capsizing that quick? Faux..
And claiming I changed, while the time stood still
I could kill the moment and should seal..
But I view the bigger picture without a lens
I guess it’s true that there is an ‘end’ in friends
But there is also an ‘us’ in trust, trust..
If you must break ties at least choose a cause
‘cause, I was there when you cried
I offered you solace when you tried
To give up on life, I was there when you thrived
I didn’t want to lose another friend, so when drunk I couldn’t let you drive
And now you want to step aside? Aside..
Of you killing the fruit of our friendship, time the pesticide
There’s a side of me at whatever end
Sometimes you resemble a fair-weather friend
Whether friends or not, you know hearts
Never neglect each other, it’s like a loophole card
I’d still catch a grenade for you, no need for Bruno Mars..


*Jeet is the nickname I use for this friend. Plus I didn't want to use her full name...

[B.A.D.]

I dont comment that often on this section but that was great man, excellent piece

[mcZu]

Thanks for the comment, bro. Appreciate it.

[mcZu]

^Thanks man, appreciate it. And yeah, I still record, mainly in Dutch nowadsy, though. I'm working on some English projects though, I just haven't posted anything on here in a while, didn't feel like it. But Xray and I are cooking something up together. I need a new mic though...

[Maybe]

Very different. The content was interesting, but what made this stand out was the weird way you rhymed and worded things. It made the whole piece a giant poem/story/song, rather than just a song. Great job!

Also, feel free to comment on any of my stuff cause for some reason I'm getting slept on like a flight to Japan.

[mcZu]

^Thanks for the feed, appreciate it!

[Block]

This was real direct, yet still seemed to be constructed as poetically as possible. Great read and would make a great song.

[mcZu]

Thanks Block, appreciate it.