Scrubz - Talk is cheap

[Scrubz]

As usual I produced this one, had a little inspiration. Talk is cheap...



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I feed you, so please feed me
Lyrics:

(Verse 1)
Some say I'm corny, some say I'm garbage
Some say I need to go a little bit harder
Some say I got it while others think I don't
Let me change your mind with the microphone around ur throat
The chord- has got you choked up, hangin like a dead man
Ain't a fuckin netcee , quit while your ahead man
I'm not dropin names, you know who you are
You fuckin punk pussy bitch wanna be super star
Ya you getting no play like I do every day
Your words got no say I put you on lay awAy
Cuz I'm waitin for the day that I hear your rebuttal
Fuck I'm waitin for the day that you stir up some trouble
Never be in my huddle, never be in my league
So when you call your self a critic man I get it I see
-if you can't do then bitch to those who can
And I be the latter, -you a nobody man

(Hook)
When you gonna learn pussy talk is cheap
You gonna get burned, ain't no tounge and cheek
Call me Ed Lewis cuz ya getting put to sleep
Whith my Lulaby say good bye ca-peesh
When you gonna learn pussy talk is cheap
You gonna get burned, ain't no tounge and cheek
Call me Ed Lewis cuz ya getting put to sleep
Whith my Lulaby say good bye Peace

(verse 2)
I don't really get it man you can't take a joke
I was being humorous there's no need to solk
In-sted you got defensive started to provoke
And awoke the champ you getting beat until you broke
And I - don't even know you, I probably never will
But your colors always show thru with every word you spill
-sayin what I feel now who's keepin it real
You say you doin all your shows, well... Big deal
If you a rapper for real go on and write up some rhymes
If it's the mic ya conceal then it's your time to shine
Cuz I'm givin you an open opportunity to find
The best- punchlines, that come- to your mind
It may- take you some time, you may- say that your rusty
Your better off not responding Hommie just trust me
Lucky me im the furn-us I get the the heat turned up
Roast like a pub that you are till you burn up

(Hook)
When you gonna learn pussy talk is cheap
You gonna get burned, ain't no tounge and cheek
Call me Ed Lewis cuz ya getting put to sleep
Whith my Lulaby say good bye ca-peesh
When you gonna learn pussy talk is cheap
You gonna get burned, ain't no tounge and cheek
Call me Ed Lewis cuz ya getting put to sleep
Whith my Lulaby say good bye Peace

[Jay Tunes]

man... this is dope!

Flow - technically perfect... few bumps but didnt affect the feeling of your verses.
Lyrics - (GET EMMM!) Awesome dude real nice lyrics and good multis.
Other - Your accent is different, not bad though, bot too noticeable either only thing so so was the hook... it felt a boring to me, and it didnt stand out ... like stick in my head a lil like hooks should be, but man that is all, this was a good track!

[Tranquil]

First off, i liked the lyrics. "Let me change your mind with the microphone around ur throat" loved that line, that line raised my attention a lil. On the other hand, i actually really like the lyrics, i like the concept, mostly because the concept "Talk is cheap" is true. Your flow was pretty smooth throughout the track, there were maybe 3 little times were the flow fell off a tiny bit, but other than that it was on point. 5/5 man

[Scrubz]

Thanks both of you. Jay I agree the hook didn't really stand out, but the focal point were the verses to get the point across. And yeah there were a couple hiccups, I don't think it was the scheme but more of me when I recorded. Practice makes perfect! Again that you for the feed back!

[DƎRDYPK]

your vocals are mixed a lil too loud but it isn't too bad
keep dropping bro you know what your doing

[Static]

Wow, that was amazing! Awesome beat, lyrics, multies and flow! Your voice is pretty dope too!
Nothing to complain about really, keep doing what you're doing!

[Xray]

That was pretty nice man. Besides the lyrics being a little too simple, I really liked the verses. Your delivery was dope, and your flow was there. You have some great mixing going on man, keep it up. As a diss, I feel you could of did better, personals were kinda there but it wasn't anything impacting. The beat was dope too, but the hook was just horrible. Everything went wrong there, the mixing to it's lyrics...just an overall bad hook. Work on your lyrics more and you'd be mad dope.

I'm staying out of this beef though, don't got a problem with either of you. Peace.

[Scrubz]

@PK: hmm I thought that the mixing was perfect haha.
@static: thank you man! I'm really glad you liked it
@xray: yeah, the hook was kinda an after thought, and didn't put enough effort into the lyrics, delivery and the way it was mixed. If this was something that was goin on a album, i would never let this slide. This track was a spur of the moment, done in one day type shit. Not making excuses because i agree. Thanks for your imput, il make sure it dosnt happen next song I drop!

Thank y'all for your time!

[Steve Spag]

Cool track man, who were you dissing? The flow was pretty good although it seems like you were uncomfortable while spitting at some points, but for the most part it's pretty consistent. Lyrics were good, nothing tooo crazy but it's sick for what it is. I'm likin' this track!

[Tornado]

Good track overall. Lyrics are simple but to the point but it's no Biggie. The only thing, like X said, the Hook didn't work that well, felt empty and it's stop-start in a bad way. Beat is meh, but for a diss type track, it's smple and allows what you say to take notice. Sorry i ain't been feeding your shitt, your one of a few newer artists that's making good shit.

7/10

[CorrosionCover]

"Cuz I'm givin you an open opportunity to find
The best- punchlines, that come- to your mind
It may- take you some time, you may- say that your rusty
Your better off not responding Hommie just trust me "

This is my favourite moment.

Track is good :
flow is smooth,
lyrics are nice, meaningful - fuck the complexity,
chorus is decent, quite catchy,

The only think i was missing there was some anger. Not every diss must contain anger, but well this could be a good candidate.

Keep bringing us dope shit

[Tash8]

i enjoyed it man, really did.. thought the hook was cool...your flow coulda been more fluid so keep working on that...but overall man though that was cool..quality was pretty good. Good Job, keep it up.

would appreciate your feedback on this or This, please n thanks.

[Scrubz]

@steve- thanks man, I'm glad your feelin it. Dissin kblock btw.
@tornado- again I understand the hook, thank you for takin the time out to feed and appreciate the kind words!
@cc- thanks hommie, I hear you on the anger the thing is I'm not agry over it, the beef actually makes me laugh so that's why I didn't go the angry route, no need. Thank you for the feed!!!
@Tash- thanks for the advice and feed, really appreciate it and will listen and feed both of tho's later tonight!

[Block]

Bahahahaha... Bahahahaha... Bahahaha. Does that accurately describe how incredibly ridiculous you are?

Playing like you didn't get heated because I made you look foolish. Bitch, you spent half of this "diss" defending yourself.. "i ain't no netcee!!!@@ honest!!1@".... Lmaoooo

As soon as I heard this I chuckled at how amazingly simplistic your whole act is.


But alright, we can play.... You better come harder than this, sunshine.

[Scrubz]

Bahahahaha... Bahahahaha... Bahahaha. Does that accurately describe how incredibly ridiculous you are?

Playing like you didn't get heated because I made you look foolish. Bitch, you spent half of this "diss" defending yourself.. "i ain't no netcee!!!@@ honest!!1@".... Lmaoooo

As soon as I heard this I chuckled at how amazingly simplistic your whole act is.


But alright, we can play.... You better come harder than this, sunshine.

Well it took you long enough to acknowledge this! Get to writing, get to recording. I'm really quite psyched to hear what you have to say. If you rappin atleast half as good as you do running yOur mouth we should have a good battle... That's even if you reply. better save your insults booth instead of typing the out... You gonna need em'.