Belly of the Beast

[B.A.D.]

this was purely amazing man, I am really digging your style thus far man.

you need to work on that flow man, cuz, it doesnt flows (I mean, it goes good with the beat and everything) but its too robotic. same pace, monotone. nohting that makes you go , u know. (flowise). you need to find one man, a unique flow that goes good with your flow. you need to feel the music. dont talk, sing man.

the rest is 5 stars. honestly man, the hook = Bravo , the lyrics excell in all aspects. here you are demonstrating yourself that you dont need to rhyme weird words and be all technical and use 100% methaphors and all that bullshit to be good. you just have to spit from the heart they way it should be good to come out. fuck that lyrical complexity canibus bullshit, thats Overrated. this is quality

the beat is amazing aswell... and the cover #swaggajack lmao, j/k, I likes it. only the parental advisory sign is too big.

quality of vocals is really good, just too loud. and the layovers are way too loud aswell. the rest is good, I dont know what you are doing but sounds remarkably clean.

excelent job man, and I'm looking forward for more.

[Solace]

Dafuck@me forgetting this topic lolz I got quite an amount of feedd...

Thanks Wasunt, WesT, PK and MahMoud, your opinions are appreciated!

@Xray,
I lol'd@dead persons verse 'cause it's true hahaha. I get what you're saying, but I don't agree with it. I like the expression of pain and misery, though it's not like my life is horrible but you stretch the truth for all to be able to chill and relate. I wasn't really planning on doing another song like this unless if I simply redid this track, so I'm sure you'd be glad to hear that. I just did this song quickly in an hour for practice. And yeah, I took the idea from Big Ax-D ofc. Mad props on the long feed, even if it was all just from the lyrics.

Word to Chambers. I hope I just don't fall into some sort of musical cliche.

@KBlock, yeah I'm 15 at the moment but I'll be turning 16 this April 5th. The instrumental I used is Atmosphere's "Abusing of the Rib" so I'd assume it's Ant. Thanks for the kind words.

@Big Ax, damn you seem to really think it's good. Yeah I never seem to realize how fucked my vocals are until I post it and listen a couple more times then I go like " " at myself lol. Idk how they're sounding clean 'cause it's a 20 buck desktop mic I got from the source so lol. Glad you enjoy my writing. Thanks for checking this

[Jay Tunes]

lyrics - goood, just think your rhyming was weird was weird sometimes, like just rhyming two bars at a time.. or half rhyming.. ehh
flow - with what i said ^ i think you get me, it wasnt bad.
quality - goood!!!!!!! mastering u should add some bass or something bc it sounds a lil too robotic, but if thats your style dont change it! i still think its nice.

now that hook.... - i have the same problem man half the time i cant make them stand out/catchy... your hook sounded just like another verse, u have to change up the flow.. damn i wish i would listen to my own advice

nice cover #keepitupbro

[Tash8]

i'm impressed, that was a real unique style very different and I like it. You don't sound depressed but still gives off that emotion cause of the lyrics. I like it. Good Work.

would appreciate your feedback on this or This, please n thanks.

[B.A.D.]

you need consistency bro, come on, record more tracks like this

[Solace]

lol y r ppl feeding dis styll

@Ax, viewtopic.php?f=38&t=109284 is a step up in my opinion

@tash, thanks dude, ill get at it when im able to (im just dropping by cause i want a lil homework break)

@jay, thanks for feeding this track as well, lmao@listen to your own advice,