Scrubz - Talk is cheap

[CorrosionCover]

Bahahahaha... Bahahahaha... Bahahaha. Does that accurately describe how incredibly ridiculous you are?

Playing like you didn't get heated because I made you look foolish. Bitch, you spent half of this "diss" defending yourself.. "i ain't no netcee!!!@@ honest!!1@".... Lmaoooo

As soon as I heard this I chuckled at how amazingly simplistic your whole act is.


But alright, we can play.... You better come harder than this, sunshine.

Drop you're own shit instead of flaming others work... Or at least flame it in your diss.

[Block]

Bahahahaha... Bahahahaha... Bahahaha. Does that accurately describe how incredibly ridiculous you are?

Playing like you didn't get heated because I made you look foolish. Bitch, you spent half of this "diss" defending yourself.. "i ain't no netcee!!!@@ honest!!1@".... Lmaoooo

As soon as I heard this I chuckled at how amazingly simplistic your whole act is.


But alright, we can play.... You better come harder than this, sunshine.

Well it took you long enough to acknowledge this! Get to writing, get to recording. I'm really quite psyched to hear what you have to say. If you rappin atleast half as good as you do running yOur mouth we should have a good battle... That's even if you reply. better save your insults booth instead of typing the out... You gonna need em'.

Ya I didn't even know this existed until my name was mentioned because youre a pussy and don't say peoples names in a diss.. Like you're scared of it. Lmaoo.

I'm going to need them? You didn't even insult me. By dropping this you insulted yourself. This is definitely one of the worst disses ever.

You think we're"beefing" because I made you look foolish and embarrassed you? Sensitive ass kids. If we were beefing it wouldn't be over the internet.

Don't act like I didn't piss you off. If I hadn't, you wouldn't have dedicated this shit hole of a song to me.


Lmaoooo faggot.

[Scrubz]

Bahahahaha... Bahahahaha... Bahahaha. Does that accurately describe how incredibly ridiculous you are?

Playing like you didn't get heated because I made you look foolish. Bitch, you spent half of this "diss" defending yourself.. "i ain't no netcee!!!@@ honest!!1@".... Lmaoooo

As soon as I heard this I chuckled at how amazingly simplistic your whole act is.


But alright, we can play.... You better come harder than this, sunshine.

Well it took you long enough to acknowledge this! Get to writing, get to recording. I'm really quite psyched to hear what you have to say. If you rappin atleast half as good as you do running yOur mouth we should have a good battle... That's even if you reply. better save your insults booth instead of typing the out... You gonna need em'.

Ya I didn't even know this existed until my name was mentioned because youre a pussy and don't say peoples names in a diss.. Like you're scared of it. Lmaoo. yes im scared of an e-thug who waste his time trying to make fun of someone on the internet , nah i didnt drop ur name in the song cuz you dont deserve the notoriety. My hommie spagg asked so i responded, all you needed to do was glance at the lyrics to know it was to you.

I'm going to need them? You didn't even insult me. By dropping this you insulted yourself. This is definitely one of the worst disses ever. Hmm, everyone eles opinion says other wise.

You think we're"beefing" because I made you look foolish and embarrassed you?Sensitive ass kids. If we were beefing it wouldn't be over the internet. you know were i live, bring the beef.

Don't act like I didn't piss you off. If I hadn't, you wouldn't have dedicated this shit hole of a song to me. It didnt piss me off, it just gave me some practice. Sorta like a punching bag.


Lmaoooo faggot.

Answer back or stfu, the only one looking foolish is you hommie.

[Block]

Answer back or stfu, the only one looking foolish is you hommie.

Really, kid? Really?

>get angry enough to make diss track because k block makes me look like a douche
>make terrible diss track without mentioning names or even attempting to use punchlines
>insult self in diss and claim not to be a netcee
>get laughed at by the person I dissed


you're a fucking idiot

[Scrubz]

Answer back or stfu, the only one looking foolish is you hommie.

Really, kid? Really?

>get angry enough to make diss track because k block makes me look like a douche
>make terrible diss track without mentioning names or even attempting to use punchlines
>insult self in diss and claim not to be a netcee
>get laughed at by the person I dissed


you're a fucking idiot

... And your still typing... respond or stfu.

[Block]

Answer back or stfu, the only one looking foolish is you hommie.

Really, kid? Really?

>get angry enough to make diss track because k block makes me look like a douche
>make terrible diss track without mentioning names or even attempting to use punchlines
>insult self in diss and claim not to be a netcee
>get laughed at by the person I dissed


you're a fucking idiot

... And your still typing... respond or stfu.

I'm laughing at you.. Can't you see that? IS this not enough of a response for you? You're terrible Judging by your replies and desperation for a response, I'm going to guess you're in desperate need of attention.

I mean, I can give you some pointers if you'd like. Would you like me to critique your work so you can get better and maybe write something almost listenable? I can teach you how to construct witty punchlines and metaphores / wordplay... Get at me, bro.

[Rekluse]

K-blocks a bitch, lets hear somethin or else we know you suck and dont have talent...all you did was type, we all can do that...scrubz made this beat and killed it ...and what did you do again?

[Mr. Chambers]

ok beat was type sick. i liked it

flow was kinda hit and miss. i heard you speed up words, and i heard you slow down syllables to hit the snare. which is a shame cuz if you had the right flow this song would be epic on so many levels. The delivery was cool. thats never really a problem with you. lyrics were ok. nothing amazing just a typical "ahh i'm angry be afraid of me" type shit. but it was cool. chorus was cool. sounded like a real 90's hip hop type chorus. i dunno it was just kinda there. i think you could do better then this but for what it was it was ok.

[Scrubz]

ok beat was type sick. i liked it

flow was kinda hit and miss. i heard you speed up words, and i heard you slow down syllables to hit the snare. which is a shame cuz if you had the right flow this song would be epic on so many levels. The delivery was cool. thats never really a problem with you. lyrics were ok. nothing amazing just a typical "ahh i'm angry be afraid of me" type shit. but it was cool. chorus was cool. sounded like a real 90's hip hop type chorus. i dunno it was just kinda there. i think you could do better then this but for what it was it was ok.

Thanks chambers, flow has been the number one priority for me when i write. That being said i think it has improved alot. Im glad you didnt hate it lol. Good looks on the feed, i'l hit you back when i get a minute.

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

good quality man...hook turned out nice tho it feels empty somehow...liked your verses..especially towards the end of each verse u did great...if it was on purpose..then good structure thru out the song

[Scrubz]

good quality man...hook turned out nice tho it feels empty somehow...liked your verses..especially towards the end of each verse u did great...if it was on purpose..then good structure thru out the song

Thanks bro! The reason the hook sounds like that is cuz I panned each track to the far left and far right. I think I need to have a layer in the middle for sure, to make it sound "fuller".
Glad u liked the verses and yes I did structure them so that it picked up once the horns and shit droped half way threw.

I'm nOt sure if u drop music but if you do I will deff feed it. Thanks again.

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

yeah i do drop music..but right now i keep my material on hold..anyway

what im doin with my hooks..i usually have 3 layers....Left,Center,Right....and Pan Left 21-37, Pan Left 21-37...depends on each track again but yeah
just my 2cents..hope i could help out

[B.A.D.]

first off, the beat needs better mixing bro, you need to add a bass line, and more power to the kick and snare. plus a couple hats wouldn't hut. the main melody is also too loud. but yeah, the bass line is very important.

You need to improve your flow, this one just doesnt go 100% right, like on the first verse and the hook, it seems misplaced, like late starting on every line. second verse gets better.

you got to step it up lyrically a bit, and get your technique goin on. specially for a diss, cuz this is just not good for that.

as a normal song, its dope. I liked it, specially the hook. but you need to fix some aspects of it.

[WesTMusiK]

Pretty dope track, homie! You got some sick lines in there, but I wasnt really feeling the hook all that much but the verses made me keep interest.

Overall ... 4/5 ... Would've been higher if the hook caught my eye a bit more. But dope track, man!

[Scrubz]

@chris: thank you for the advice, I actually just used it on a hook I recorded yesterday and it sounds great. Nice and full!
@cream: thank you man, really glad you liked it! My eP will be dropping 4/19 and will be releasing 2 singles befor hand so it would be great to get ur opinion on them.
@ax: I will keep working on lyrics and completely perfecting the flow, I'm gonna get a "wow that was perfect" response outta you soon!!! Lmao
@west: thank you hommie! And yeah the one thing that most of y'all agree on is the hook could have been better by tweaking it and I agree. Thanks for checking in man. Il get yOu back.

This feed was hard to judge cuz were some say my flow lacked, other said it was great. Usually flow is straight forward but I guess not here haha. Some said lyrics were simple, others liked em, some said the hook suck while other dug it. So I will work on everything! Thanks to everyone who took there time to feed!

Oh and my first ep will be droping 4/19, look for 2 singles leading up to that date!