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Inception-based keystyle

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Inception-based keystyle

Postby ArsheyHaq » Mar 26th, '11, 19:27

I don't wanna get too in-depth,
but I think that I'm too inept,
to be goin' through with inceptions/
goin' in and out of dreams screws with perception/
what's true? what's deception?/
too confused to choose and accept one/
it's like my brain signals are losin' reception/
last thing I remember I hit the snooze and I slept in.../
oh, shit! I'm bein' pursued by projections!/
don't have a clue what to do for protection/

yeah, unfinished, but thought it was pretty decent so far..maybe I might turn it into a collab?
What do you guys think?



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Re: Inception-based keystyle

Postby DƎRDYPK » Mar 26th, '11, 19:45

pretty decent
& did you say
Based keystyle?
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Re: Inception-based keystyle

Postby WakeUpShow » Mar 26th, '11, 20:03

I swear to God, you are one of the greatest writers I've seen on this forum in a while. Keep up the good work.
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Re: Inception-based keystyle

Postby ArsheyHaq » Mar 27th, '11, 09:01

Cosh wrote:I swear to God, you are one of the greatest writers I've seen on this forum in a while. Keep up the good work.


Damn..thanks lol that means a lot! I've been kinda doubtin' myself lately, cuz it's so hard to get any type of feedback on this board haha
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