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Postby rap_gurl » Apr 12th, '06, 14:19

both were real good.
"I do say things that I think will shock people. But I don't do things to shock people. I'm not trying to be the next Tupac, but I don't know how long I'm going to be on this planet. So while I'm here, I might as well make the most of it."
-- Eminem
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Postby Shadyluva » Apr 12th, '06, 20:34

both of them r really good...nobody can really say that they were bad becuz it has 2 deal wit sum1s death and wutz comin out is how u really feel :(

this is unreal...i still cant believe this
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lifee is GREAT
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Proof R.I.P.

Postby Erick » Apr 12th, '06, 23:19


Proof was one of a kind.
He's is one that I play and still rewind,
he will always be remembered in my mind.
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Postby Inzanity » Apr 12th, '06, 23:37

I wasn't goning to post this but watever I guess I will

A Letter To A Fallen Soldier

Gun shot to the head
Such an unexpected death
A Detroit hero takin' away from the world
But the pain will heal as time unfurls
After all death is part of life
I just never dreamed I'd see you in your casket
I never dreamed "Searching for Jerry Garcia" would be ur last hit

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You died on the same road you grew up on
8 Mile Road in Detroit Michigan
So Rest In Peace DeShaun Holton
We'll miss ya man

course
Understand my letter to a fallen soldier
Just cause' ur gone ur career isn't over
So I'ma pour out liquor for a fallen soldier
As I shed my last tears bro
I'll say my last goodbye to a fallen hero

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Gun shots rained in the end of the night
takin' an innocent life
But like Jay-z said to Aaliyah I'ma say to Proof
We're not remembering ur death we're celebratin' ur life and thats the truth
You were a young soul takin' before his time
And whoever shot u will pay for this crime
As ur soul is put to rest with the other fallen soldiers of our generation
Tupac, Biggie, Aaliyah, Left Eye, Jam Master Jay, Big L, Bugz too many to name in one statement

pre-course
You died on the same road you grew up on
8 Mile Road in Detroit Michigan
So Rest In Peace Big Proof
We'll miss ya man

course
Understand my letter to a fallen soldier
Just cause' ur gone ur career isn't over
So I'ma pour out liquor for a fallen soldier
As I shed my last tears bro
I'll say my last goodbye to a fallen hero

verse 3
You died at the break of a new day
I never dreamed God would take u away
I turned on the news
to discover the death of u
my soul split in half my eyes got all teary
The head line said Rest In Peace Dirty Harry

pre-course
You died on the same road you grew up on
8 Mile Road in Detroit Michigan
So Rest In Peace Dirty Harry
We'll miss ya man

course
Understand my letter to a fallen soldier
Just cause' ur gone ur career isn't over
So I'ma pour out liquor for a fallen soldier
As I shed my last tears bro
I'll say my last goodbye to a fallen hero


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Yep!

Postby Erick » Apr 12th, '06, 23:53

Sarah wrote:^ :shocked: You're back!? lol

Um....pretty nice, short but nice

I heard this terrible news and couldn't recist,
Proof dying is like the clap of a fist,
right in my face, like my defence didn't excist?!
I'm sad, not only by Eminem he will be missed...
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No no no...

Postby Erick » Apr 13th, '06, 00:01

Sarah wrote:Empty Promises that was real nice. Great work :D :flower:

No promises whatsoever...
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Re: No no no...

Postby Inzanity » Apr 13th, '06, 01:47

Erick wrote:
Sarah wrote:Empty Promises that was real nice. Great work :D :flower:

No promises whatsoever...
:shifty:


sure there are promises Erick there just empty lol anyway thanx Sarah
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Postby Erick » Apr 13th, '06, 02:22

:shifty:
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Re: ...

Postby Inzanity » Apr 13th, '06, 03:27

Erick wrote::shifty:


lol
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Postby ThomasAguanis » Apr 13th, '06, 04:05

both were very good :(
you're both improving a lot
B.K.A. The King of Kale A.K.A. The Superfood Sensai
I still rap better than you.

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Better be sure...

Postby Erick » Apr 13th, '06, 04:49

Angie wrote::unsure: is that the gay eric? i never got 2 meet him :confusion:

Angie, I think I am the one you mean,
been called gay here before, haven't you seen?
But it was all bullshit, like movies from Charlie Sheen!
Have you forgotten Proof died, where have you been!?
I came to show my respects, please don't start a scene!
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Apr 13th, '06, 05:21

all very nice man i wish i could spit like it :worship: never had the guts to let anyone hear my stuff :( still havent :confusion: :(
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?!

Postby Erick » Apr 13th, '06, 05:44

TruEmFan wrote:do you have a soundclick?

i like ur freestyling :D

TruEmFan at this sad day you made me grin,
no soundclicks sorry, but maybe my next of kin!
A little angry dizzin' Erick that will always win,
even from Sarah who then will be 80, in just a spin!
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Re: ?!

Postby Erick » Apr 13th, '06, 07:19

Sarah wrote:Do you talk normal or do you always write rhymes when you say something? :confusion:

Sarah, you don't sound all that appreciative,
I thought in this place I had to write creative,
at least that's what I understood, but I'm no native,
doesn't it say 'creative writing'? Doesn't that mean 'write creative'!?
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Hey!

Postby Erick » Apr 13th, '06, 19:25

g_killa wrote:yo erick u back for good?

Hey man!, long time no prewritten crap,
but in respect of Proof I had to open my yap.
It's sad to know my feet will no more tap,
to the brilliance of Proof's distinctive rap...
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