Jay Tunes - So Fresh (Feedback)

[Tash8]

aite man, here's what I think. i like the beat, i like the hook it's cool n catchy. I understand the purpose of this track and for what it is it's ok but if ur gonna do something simple like this I wanna hear some sick rhymes that no one expects...I like ur flow it's very unique, I like ur delivery. just dress up ur rhymes a little more fantasy and you'll be all good man, promise.

[Rekluse]

Good shit, had good flow and lyrics..even tho the hook was auto-tuned and shit it made for a catchy type song ..keep at it, chill song to listen to

[Tornado]

This track sounds like a Young Money type of track clone. Don't get me wrong, listening to you, given the right production and subject, you could make good tracks cos your flow and delievery are halfway there (but on this track, it felt monotone, no emotion). but it felt listening, you haven't found your individual style yet, but i'd refrain from usuing generic beats and lyrics like that

[Static]

As someone else said, I hate the term "swag", but that's okey! And the hook way okey, could've been better without auto-tune too. But otherwise, I enjoyed that song alot! The beat was simple and awesome!
Your flow is damn good too, I love it! Great lyrics too! Keep at it man, you're great!

[Jay Tunes]

thanks for the feed

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

your flow is very good in 1st verse....2nd verse is more like you rushin when 1st verse sounded more controlled....feelin ur swag....one of the tracks u do and just havin fun wit it..
its not bad tracks and not a good track...somthin in between...
but def a good practise for your flow and overall...so
if you able to pull of such a flow you able to do a constant and basic flow aswell

[Mr. Chambers]

ok i see the potential, but with this song it was just so, boring. i caught myself drifting off thinking about getting my hoodie cuz i was cold as your rapping. not to diss you, but it just wasn't anything entertaining. i mean technically it was pretty solid, but it just didn't offer no depth or any type of replaying value for me, and only thing i can really "Feed" you on, is try to become more creative with your content. if your going to do "Swag" tracks, then include punchlines, metaphors, or different flow switch ups to keep it changing, otherwise its just going to get repetitive.

[Vettori]

This beats dope....Urgh FUck the tag...Lol
Hate autotune no comment

Verses werè dope...I think the mixing needs work But it is good..some reverb maybe on your vocals..
Avoid Fillers.

Not my type of song...but for what it was i can appreciate the work you put in...

hopefully your next track is differant