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2 of my DOPEST tracks...

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2 of my DOPEST tracks...

Postby DFrizzy44 » Apr 4th, '11, 05:27

Hey guys, just wanted some feedback on some of the music I've been making... I'm a long-time viewer of this board, but I just now joined!

Here's a few of the newer tracks I've made...
My Moment (Ft. B Weezy)
http://soundcloud.com/frizzy-1/my-moment


Make It Through
http://soundcloud.com/frizzy-1/make-it-through

My older stuff is found on there too!
Thanks for listening and let me know what u guys think!
I've only been making music and writing for 3 months!

Feedback: viewtopic.php?f=38&t=111128
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Re: 2 of my DOPEST tracks...

Postby B.A.D. » Apr 4th, '11, 12:55

you need to read the rules bro
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Re: 2 of my DOPEST tracks...

Postby DFrizzy44 » Apr 4th, '11, 17:33

lol what did i mess up on?
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Re: 2 of my DOPEST tracks...

Postby B.A.D. » Apr 5th, '11, 03:31

you need to provide a feeback link when posting a thread here :y:
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Re: 2 of my DOPEST tracks...

Postby Vettori » Apr 7th, '11, 23:18

Not a fan of the autotune. Sounds like quality is /can be good. On the fencewith it..

ahh when you use layers it sounds better on the hook, Much better on the verses..Good written, well thought. You need energy. you could sound doper. Drop the autotune crap..i hate it

Lol thats my personal opinion..

the second verse (singing part) pretty good. some of your content isn't great, but you sound cool. Work on content/ Wordplay
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