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Sentus- Game Over

Postby classthe_king » Apr 2nd, '11, 20:49

This verse is like 3 months old, back before I had new quality so it's whatever. Probably the last random punchline 16 you'll hear from me.




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Re: Sentus- Game Over

Postby iain08 » Apr 3rd, '11, 01:18

What's that piano melody from...? It's so familiar. It's a sick beat though, and I liked your verse a lot. The 'bite me' and 'come out the closet' lines were sick.

"stupid motherfucker must've lost your mind" The way you flowed this remided me of another song, but no idea which one.
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Re: Sentus- Game Over

Postby VenomBlackViper » Apr 3rd, '11, 01:55

This was dope, especially the bite me, closet & hide lines. Why no more random punchline 16s though?
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Re: Sentus- Game Over

Postby WakeUpShow » Apr 3rd, '11, 02:19

i liked the shroom and closet line. but your flow has gotten much worse.
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Re: Sentus- Game Over

Postby B.A.D. » Apr 3rd, '11, 03:04

even if its old I can see improvement there, like your flow is slowly getting better and you start to get more comfortable on your tracks. I liked the lyrics, couple of nice punches but nothing major.

you should post a song with that new quality u talking about, would be interesting to hear you with a better quality.
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Re: Sentus- Game Over

Postby Xray » Apr 3rd, '11, 03:08

You just wrote your own death sentence.
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Over a billion bullets shooting from the chopper's arm
Carry a motherfucker head that I shred in Nam
I speak literally, figuratively, the prophet gone


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Re: Sentus- Game Over

Postby Robbie G » Apr 3rd, '11, 03:58

iain08 wrote:"stupid motherfucker must've lost your mind" The way you flowed this remided me of another song, but no idea which one.


Go to Sleep?

I liked the song, nothing too special though. I wanna hear a full track.
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Re: Sentus- Game Over

Postby Solace » Apr 3rd, '11, 04:11

Big Ax-D wrote:you should post a song with that new quality u talking about, would be interesting to hear you with a better quality.

His new quality is great
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Re: Sentus- Game Over

Postby classthe_king » Apr 3rd, '11, 04:51

iain08 wrote:What's that piano melody from...? It's so familiar. It's a sick beat though, and I liked your verse a lot. The 'bite me' and 'come out the closet' lines were sick.

"stupid motherfucker must've lost your mind" The way you flowed this remided me of another song, but no idea which one.


Crazy Train, and I don't know what you're thinking of

VenomBlackViper wrote:This was dope, especially the bite me, closet & hide lines. Why no more random punchline 16s though?


I don't know, I'm just getting bored with them

Cosh wrote:i liked the shroom and closet line. but your flow has gotten much worse.


classthe_king wrote:This verse is like 3 months old


Big Ax-D wrote:even if its old I can see improvement there, like your flow is slowly getting better and you start to get more comfortable on your tracks. I liked the lyrics, couple of nice punches but nothing major.

you should post a song with that new quality u talking about, would be interesting to hear you with a better quality.


I made the only new song with new quality while I was banned, you can listen to it here
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xxJrvPtcU4M

Xray wrote:You just wrote your own death sentence.


lol @ you thinking you could ever write something that comes close to this

Robbie G wrote:I liked the song, nothing too special though. I wanna hear a full track.


I'm goona do that verse for you when I can but my inspiration has seriously been shit recently.
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Re: Sentus- Game Over

Postby WakeUpShow » Apr 5th, '11, 21:36

woah, your flow on Who Shot Ya was niiiiiice
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Re: Sentus- Game Over

Postby Scrubz » Apr 6th, '11, 00:22

This was pretty good. Really like the flow and it was pretty solid minus a few hick ups. You hads the good punchlines, the Paul blart line made me lol. Delivery was ehh but that was the only down side really and it deff didn't ruin the song IMO. Don't stop writin homie, you will get past the block.
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Re: Sentus- Game Over

Postby Mahmoud48 » Apr 6th, '11, 00:56

mall cop/paul bart :shakehead:
ODD FUTURE ASAP OVOXO BLACK HIPPY GOOD MUSIC
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Re: Sentus- Game Over

Postby B.A.D. » Apr 6th, '11, 04:20

classthe_king wrote:
Big Ax-D wrote:even if its old I can see improvement there, like your flow is slowly getting better and you start to get more comfortable on your tracks. I liked the lyrics, couple of nice punches but nothing major.

you should post a song with that new quality u talking about, would be interesting to hear you with a better quality.


I made the only new song with new quality while I was banned, you can listen to it here
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xxJrvPtcU4M


sounds really good :y: and sick track
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Re: Sentus- Game Over

Postby classthe_king » Apr 9th, '11, 19:38

Thanks for the feed guys
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Re: Sentus- Game Over

Postby Mr. Chambers » Apr 12th, '11, 19:07

it was cool, like i said before it gets kind of tiring to hear the same shit, but i also know you working on a tape so i'll be interested on how that comes out.

your flow is decent, still needs work but its getting there and your delivery, tho unique could still use some more practice. but your lyrics are pretty good. its just really too short...
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