Eminem's First Tracks When He Got Sober

[BILI]

He did Ballin one day after Wee-Wee,and if I remember correctly it was 2008,one was 06.02, and one was 07.02

[slimsoxshady]

he talks about Adam Lambert on Elevator so it's got to be from 2009 (around the time relapse 1 got released) rather than 2008

[Master Chief]

[He used that 'Never Enough' boring ass rhyme scheme. He had one rhyme that was alright - 'mother raise me/(a)nother baby' in the first verse. Even the 3rd verse's rhymes were nothing special ("countin sheep/now theres beef/houses teeth" etc was the best part)

It honestly wasn't that much better than the over two songs rhyme-wise (except CWYWF second verse - sounds more like his pill stuff), especially as he wasn't writing to any particualr concept.

I reckon those stupid ass leaks that BILI mentioned are from 2008 as well. Em just fucking about to get back into the shape of writing/recording. All Em produced as well so I assume there from that era.

Haters getting mad, they done had enough of shady
You slay me, nothing you say matters and nothing can shame me
Rappers try to play me, they use Hailie as a ukulele
Woopsa that a fucking daisy
That's a no-no even she knows dada's fucking crazy
Fucking animal, cookoo, bananas, fucking A B
Maybe it's because I never had a mother raise me
Fuck around and throw a baby at another baby

Yeah, for every time you ride down the street
Or hideout, drive by my house and beep
Like now motherfucker, try now to sleep
Lie down fucker (BAAA!), try countin' sheep
And you're tryna find out, why now there's beef?
Mase in your face bitch, cry now pussy
This is my house, all nine thousand feet
So you can suck my dick with Amy Winehouse's teeth

I know some rhymes in the first verse have syllables that don't line up but oh well. It was better rhyming-wise than I had thought it was originally tbh.

[slimsoxshady]

^ great rhymes
hence why i think it's 2009 rather than early 2008

[MikeNUFC]

[He used that 'Never Enough' boring ass rhyme scheme. He had one rhyme that was alright - 'mother raise me/(a)nother baby' in the first verse. Even the 3rd verse's rhymes were nothing special ("countin sheep/now theres beef/houses teeth" etc was the best part)

It honestly wasn't that much better than the over two songs rhyme-wise (except CWYWF second verse - sounds more like his pill stuff), especially as he wasn't writing to any particualr concept.

I reckon those stupid ass leaks that BILI mentioned are from 2008 as well. Em just fucking about to get back into the shape of writing/recording. All Em produced as well so I assume there from that era.

Haters getting mad, they done had enough of shady
You slay me, nothing you say matters and nothing can shame me
Rappers try to play me, they use Hailie as a ukulele
Woopsa that a fucking daisy
That's a no-no even she knows dada's fucking crazy
Fucking animal, cookoo, bananas, fucking A B
Maybe it's because I never had a mother raise me
Fuck around and throw a baby at another baby

Yeah, for every time you ride down the street
Or hideout, drive by my house and beep
Like now motherfucker, try now to sleep
Lie down fucker (BAAA!), try countin' sheep
And you're tryna find out, why now there's beef?
Mase in your face bitch, cry now pussy
This is my house, all nine thousand feet
So you can suck my dick with Amy Winehouse's teeth

I know some rhymes in the first verse have syllables that don't line up but oh well. It was better rhyming-wise than I had thought it was originally tbh.

3rd verse is better than I first thought.

The first verse is still average. You can't have 6 and 8 syllables rhyming lol. It's just shady/shame me. the rest is still boring rhyming because of the dull as fuck rhyme scheme. Plus it's all gibberish.

It's before the Relapse sessions, I'll say that much. But yeah probably after first sessions.

[Master Chief]

Holy shit, I counted that wrong. I thought it was rhyming 8 syllables with 7

Yeah, nevermind on that one lol.

[M-Pyre]

From what I remember it's decent. I assume when you say it doesn't have that good of rhyming, you're referring to the part where he rhymes those Hailie and play me rhyme, right?

I'm pretty sure before those series of rhymes he has a set of mother/fucking/another and such rhymes. Don't know if you caught them.

Overall, I'd say it's way better rhyming-wise than those two songs so that's why I have my doubts.

He used that 'Never Enough' boring ass rhyme scheme. He had one rhyme that was alright - 'mother raise me/(a)nother baby' in the first verse. Even the 3rd verse's rhymes were nothing special ("countin sheep/now theres beef/houses teeth" etc was the best part)

It honestly wasn't that much better than the over two songs rhyme-wise (except CWYWF second verse - sounds more like his pill stuff), especially as he wasn't writing to any particualr concept.

I reckon those stupid ass leaks that BILI mentioned are from 2008 as well. Em just fucking about to get back into the shape of writing/recording. All Em produced as well so I assume there from that era.

LOL, you must be trolling!

elevator is on par with the eminem show rhyme wise.

just the first part alone, check it.


Haters getting mad, they done had enough of shady (haters, mad, had, shady) inverted!
You slay me, nothing you say matters enough that you shame me (you slay me, matters, you shame me)
Rappers try to play me, they use Hailie as a ukulele (rappers, to play me, they use hailie as a, ukulele)
Woopsa that a fucking daisy (that, fucking daisy)
That's a no-no who even she knows dada's fucking crazy (dada's fucking crazy)
Fucking animal, cookoo, bananas, fucking A B (animals, banana's, fucking A.B)
Maybe it's because I never had a mother raise me (maybe, had a mother raise me)
Fuck around and throw a baby at another baby (baby at another baby)


You're standing adjacent to Jason's last slut, they're facing (last slut, they're facing )
Together makes 'em, a fucking bad combination (bad combination)
I lashed at the doctor in my last operation (lashed at the doctor, last operation)
Shoved the weiner snitzel up his ass, hopped away some- (ass, hopped away some)
Body please stop the patient, get the cops to mase him (stop the patient, cops to mase him)
Homie, I'm the shizer, pass Doctor Dre some (pass Doctor Dre some)
I can't leave the game, I just can't walk away son (can't walk away son)
No not-a now, not a chance, not today son (chance, not today son)
I can't believe I leave for one breif second (believe, leave, brief second)
And you pussys queef all over the rap game, naked (pussys qeeuf, rap game naked)
And use a leaf to clean up the crap stains, feck it (leaf, clean, crap stains, feck it)
I just keep saying the same exact saying, check it (keep saying, same exact saying, check it)

and there is allot more, but I'm not feeling like posting it all

edit: ahh, I see someone beat me to it. good job

[slimsoxshady]

stop saying Elevator is from the early Relapse sessions
this queer lost in final round of American Idol the day after Relapse came out

[MikeNUFC]

@slimsox - I think he added those 'faggot' lines in for Refill release.

Haters getting mad, they done had enough of shady (haters, mad, had, shady) inverted!

Ultimate reach. 2 and 3 syllables respectively between both rhyming words.

You slay me, nothing you say matters enough that you shame me (you slay me, matters, you shame me)

The fuck? He's rhyming "shame me" with "shady". Which is a boring rhyme scheme. Same with "slay/shame".

Rappers try to play me, they use Hailie as a ukulele (rappers, to play me, they use hailie as a, ukulele)

Rappers rhymes with matters. Wow, amazing stuff.

Rest is just a part of boring rhyme scheme.

Woopsa that a fucking daisy (that, fucking daisy)
That's a no-no who even she knows dada's fucking crazy (dada's fucking crazy)
Fucking animal, cookoo, bananas, fucking A B (animals, banana's, fucking A.B)
Maybe it's because I never had a mother raise me (maybe, had a mother raise me)
Fuck around and throw a baby at another baby (baby at another baby)

This is good stuff but it's complete gibberish - forcing rhymes. "fucking A B" - what does that even mean?

The fuck are you trying to rhyme 'animals' with?

I said the 3rd verse was good, cbf to argue with that.

[M-Pyre]

@slimsox - I think he added those 'faggot' lines in for Refill release.

Haters getting mad, they done had enough of shady (haters, mad, had, shady) inverted!

Ultimate reach. 2 and 3 syllables respectively between both rhyming words.

You slay me, nothing you say matters enough that you shame me (you slay me, matters, you shame me)

The fuck? He's rhyming "shame me" with "shady". Which is a boring rhyme scheme. Same with "slay/shame".

Rappers try to play me, they use Hailie as a ukulele (rappers, to play me, they use hailie as a, ukulele)

Rappers rhymes with matters. Wow, amazing stuff.

Rest is just a part of boring rhyme scheme.

Woopsa that a fucking daisy (that, fucking daisy)
That's a no-no who even she knows dada's fucking crazy (dada's fucking crazy)
Fucking animal, cookoo, bananas, fucking A B (animals, banana's, fucking A.B)
Maybe it's because I never had a mother raise me (maybe, had a mother raise me)
Fuck around and throw a baby at another baby (baby at another baby)

This is good stuff but it's complete gibberish - forcing rhymes. "fucking A B" - what does that even mean?

The fuck are you trying to rhyme 'animals' with?

I said the 3rd verse was good, cbf to argue with that.

you know how some people are tone-deaf? it might be that you are (on some levels) rhyme deaf. if you listen to the song with a rappers ear, then you should be able to point all the syllables he is trying to rhyme. at least, I can hear it and thats what matters anyway

edit: that was the second verse I posted after the first one. if thats what you meant

[MikeNUFC]

you know how some people are tone-deaf? it might be that you are (on some levels) rhyme deaf. if you listen to the song with a rappers ear, then you should be able to point all the syllables he is trying rhyming. at least, I can hear it and thats what matters anyway

I got the rhymes. They're just not that good and that rhyme scheme is played out. The rhymes at the end are long and pretty impressive but what he's saying is pretty much gibberish.

And no, it's not on par with The Eminem Show, not even close. The amount of rhymes, maybe, but overall quality, no.

[slimsoxshady]

@slimsox - I think he added those 'faggot' lines in for Refill release.

i would agree with you if i hadn't heard that interview with Em about We Made You where he said he doesn't alter songs once he records them...it's like a painting as he described it

[xxTrigger1989xx]

Elevator is awesome...that's how Relapse should have been (voice wise).

[M-Pyre]

you know how some people are tone-deaf? it might be that you are (on some levels) rhyme deaf. if you listen to the song with a rappers ear, then you should be able to point all the syllables he is trying rhyming. at least, I can hear it and thats what matters anyway

I got the rhymes. They're just not that good and that rhyme scheme is played out. The rhymes at the end are long and pretty impressive but what he's saying is pretty much gibberish.

And no, it's not on par with The Eminem Show, not even close. The amount of rhymes, maybe, but overall quality, no.

like I said...

"rhyme wise"

[EminemInsider]

Not only did Eminem have the "pill" voice in Elevator, but some of the content was downright embarrassing.

"They use Hailie as a ukulele....whoops-a-dadda fuckin' daisey....fuckin' A, B?"

That's Vicodinem type stuff. Had to have been early 2008 recordings. I'll believe he time traveled to the future to learn about Adam Lambert before I believe he recorded that entire song in 2009.