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SaJJad - Last of The Class (Sentus Diss)

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SaJJad - Last of The Class (Sentus Diss)

Postby Xray » Apr 15th, '11, 15:12

The diss y'all been waiting for. Ya boy Heist on the beat.

I'm the acid man, I crack up motherfuckers like Amsterdamn
Get you so lift up I'm the answer man
Yo I'm killing all your patience like a cancer camp
I'm letting shots at ya legs like a gangster fan
Homie your soul get to removing like a dancer can
A propaganda scam like Micheal Jacksons fam
Yo a beast against a vermin, uncertain of plan
Wrap heads of the kings with a tourban in sand
Cut necks of these kids who think as urban bands
Homie you're mad cause your raps'll never burden chants
Robby's a maniac if you think there's even chance
You rap like a fag, I got demon fans
Even Satan isn't glad that you rap so bad
Even Ross called saying "yo give my style back"
Pig, stop fucking running so fast
And take this motherfucking donut for your dad
Your upper-class ass get an an uppercut so wack
Motherfuckers thinking like the Mafia attacked
I'll put holes in your body like taking injections
Rose on your buddies life, taste the perception
Rob firelighters from the nearest store
And burn a Pyromaniac with my closest Coal
Yo I'll stab you so deep reach your dearest core
Till your own fucking mother wouldn't feel you close anymore (what)
Make your guts crawl, I am going for a wet kill
Like Leatherface get your whole fucking head pealed
Plotting all your moves like a movie editor
Infrared beam catch you moving like a Predator
Robby has a biting hobby but you couldn't Rob a Heist
Copy ass, cop a jack, but you couldn't Copywrite
These white lights I'm giving you like wifi bro
My advice I'm forgiven, you don't wanna fight bro
I snap twigs off, y'all on my toothpick dick
Like a fucking ghetto broad, I'll snap your coffin off
And twist all of your fingers till your nails hoppin off
Smack ya with you derringers till it eclipse
Your whole little clit bitch lingers and twist your face
With metal plates from motherfucking Jeff Hardy's wrestle cage
Fuck ya rage, that wouldn't matter
You're fucking with samurai blades, I am able to splatter
Your brain like cain, cause even Adam came from pain
I'm entering game, like burglarizing with no shame
To my name, murder in plain, a burglarer came, to burden my fame
Homie at night I am slicker than a fox, y'all triggerin' a fog
I betchya thought that my onslaught was just a figure of god
Homie this ninja so hard like Nicki Minaj gave my motherfucking dick a message
When the tech spit, I'll leave you dolmations
There's no protection, rounds turn even
I'll cut you in pieces and package you in weed bags
Weird fags get delivered your dilemma from deli's on telly bruh
What motherfucker


You don't want a war with Heist
Nah, you don't want a motherfucking war with Heist
You need to fucking realize
This is fucking death you're fucking with


Hook X2
Fucking with Sajjad you (die die)
Brass nuckles on your ass like (die die)
Last of my class homie (why why)
Trust me Robby don't want it with Heist (nah)

Outro


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Re: SaJJad - Last of The Class (Sentus Diss)

Postby B.A.D. » Apr 15th, '11, 15:22

hahaha holy shit :laughing: :laughing:

yo, what the fuck happened to your voice?? sounds extremely different man, but I mean EXTREMELY different lol. Its sounds good I guess...

but yeah this was fire, I honestly didnt liked the beat too much, but damn you ripped it, the flow is insane, the structure is amazing, the rhymes and technique is beautifull. well handed.

"Robby has a biting hobby but you couldn't Rob a Heist
Copy ass, cop a jack, but you couldn't Copywrite"

made me go :o :worship:

excelent man. I dont understand why dont you record more often bro, you have a lot of passion in there. Get advantage of that.

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Re: SaJJad - Last of The Class (Sentus Diss)

Postby Devil'sAdvocate » Apr 15th, '11, 16:17

RAPE!!!!
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Re: SaJJad - Last of The Class (Sentus Diss)

Postby Slimm » Apr 15th, '11, 16:32

Well, that was pretty fucking dope.
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Re: SaJJad - Last of The Class (Sentus Diss)

Postby dR3 » Apr 15th, '11, 16:39

You went in dude, didn't expect this to turn out this good.
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Re: SaJJad - Last of The Class (Sentus Diss)

Postby Steve Spag » Apr 15th, '11, 16:52

Pretty good track man. I think your pronunciation could be better at times but for the most part it's pretty dope. Your accent is good aswell, it matches the beat well. Rhymes were alright, I think you could have went harder but some of it was pretty good.

The best part was;
Make your guts crawl, I am going for a wet kill
Like Leatherface get your whole fucking head pealed
Plotting all your moves like a movie editor
Infrared beam catch you moving like a Predator
Robby has a biting hobby but you couldn't Rob a Heist
Copy ass, cop a jack, but you couldn't Copywrite
These white lights I'm giving you like wifi bro
My advice I'm forgiven, you don't wanna fight bro


^^
Flow was incredible at that spot!

Overall I say it's a pretty strong diss but I still think you could have went harder.
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Check my new song bro, return the favour and holler back, let me know what ya think!
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Re: SaJJad - Last of The Class (Sentus Diss)

Postby Maybe » Apr 15th, '11, 17:01

Wow, that was fucking insane. I'm surprised that you went this hard, because when I first clicked the link I expected you to joke around with some silly punchlines. For a legitimate diss, this was as good as it gets. The personals I understood were just plain amazing, and the flow was nearly flawless throughout the whole entire piece. Your emotion was great, and the "new" voice was fitting for this type of track.

I couldn't be more impressed... God damn. I personally have no beef with class, but I hope he responds because this whole thing could be fun to follow.
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Re: SaJJad - Last of The Class (Sentus Diss)

Postby Block » Apr 15th, '11, 17:46

I really am impressed. The flow was great. I don't know exactly what you did to your voice, but it sounds 10x clearer and it sounds dope as shit now. Even with your accent, somehow the accent sounds dope haha.

I'm not on either side. Watching this unfold will be entertaining, though. Good shit, man. Some nice punches and personals, as well.
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Re: SaJJad - Last of The Class (Sentus Diss)

Postby yoshi » Apr 15th, '11, 17:58

I'll cut you in pieces and package you in weed bags

^ that line cracked me up :flutter:


Awesome flow, that's the first thing that came to my mind while listening. And the beat, at first I thought it wasn't that good, like a little bit repetitive, but then it grew on me and I loved it. I like how it just plays in the background because it makes you concentrate fully on what you're sayin - I love it. I don't know much about the personal aspect, because I wasn't really following it - I wasn't here I guess, but people say it's the shit, so I guess it really is the shit :8)



To sum up: this took me into a whole new level of groupiness, for real.
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Re: SaJJad - Last of The Class (Sentus Diss)

Postby Sam. » Apr 15th, '11, 18:48

I don't know where to start man ,damn i knew some thing was on the way but this and this much and in this way never even imagined it ,hats off to you ,ripped it sorry sorry let me rephrase that RAPED it completely .

This is the 2nd time or prolly the 3rd time i am hearing your audio so i cant really tell the difference that your voice has changed or not :sweating: but man what ever i heard it and it was HOT as a volcano .. :worship:

As i descended down reading the lyrics ,the more i read it the more i was amazed at the quality and quantity of the punchlines :o i cant quote anything in particular 'cuz i liked them all ,damn fucking personal ,you should have participated in the rap tourney bro :worship: :worship: :b: .

I think i am not gonna even wait for class to respond dawg cuz this shit is just WOW !

This actually makes me more eager to listen to your new album when ever it drops . :b:
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Re: SaJJad - Last of The Class (Sentus Diss)

Postby Sam. » Apr 15th, '11, 18:50

:o double post to say that this thread is hereby bookmarked .
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Re: SaJJad - Last of The Class (Sentus Diss)

Postby BILI » Apr 15th, '11, 19:56

Dope diss is dope :y:
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Re: SaJJad - Last of The Class (Sentus Diss)

Postby Solace » Apr 15th, '11, 20:01

Your mixing is very good. Your voice has improved. I like your delivery. This would've been really great but to me something is weird about your flow. Though others are liking it, I felt sometimes the rhyme scheme changed at the wrong point. You hadn't done that before at all. Not all parts were like that though. The outro with you talking got very annoying quick, should've just had the beat play the track out completely. You sounded mad hungry on this. A lot of the beginning was trash imo though, no offense but I couldn't stand this part:

I'm the acid man, I crack up motherfuckers like Amsterdamn
Get you so lift up I'm the answer man
Yo I'm killing all your patience like a cancer camp
I'm letting shots at ya legs like a gangster fan
Homie your soul get to removing like a dancer can
A propaganda scam like Micheal Jacksons fam

Yo a beast against a vermin, uncertain of plan
Wrap heads of the kings with a tourban in sand
Cut necks of these kids who think as urban bands
Homie you're mad cause your raps'll never burden chants
Robby's a maniac if you think there's even chance
You rap like a fag, I got demon fans
Even Satan isn't glad that you rap so bad
Even Ross called saying "yo give my style back"
Pig, stop fucking running so fast
And take this motherfucking donut for your dad
Your upper-class ass get an an uppercut so wack
Motherfuckers thinking like the Mafia attacked


They were just fillers and boring as hell. Bolded lines were enjoyable and had a sweet flow but had no content. I liked the hook/chorus thing. Your Sticcy Z diss was still better though. :whistle:
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Re: SaJJad - Last of The Class (Sentus Diss)

Postby classthe_king » Apr 15th, '11, 20:20

After reading through the lyrics this was legitamately one of the worst disses I've ever read. You didn't even have one personal. You're only decent line was about me biting copywrite but you bit copywrite while doing it

"You try and sound like pete neslon but you can't even copywrite"

Ironic much?

Seriously though, this was embarrassing, you dissed yourself more than you dissed me. Why would you say that your dick was the size of a toothpick?
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: SaJJad - Last of The Class (Sentus Diss)

Postby Mr. Chambers » Apr 15th, '11, 20:48

For what it was it was ok. Your flow was solid tho at times you missed the correct hits. Your delivery was top notch. The beat wa dope to start out, but by the end it got very repetitive. Your lyrics were good, and they got straight to the point which is good for these type of tracks.

But I wouldnt count class out yet. He kinda has to respond IMO cuz the shit was good. I'm interested to hear what he comes up with.
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