SaJJad - Last of The Class (Sentus Diss)

[macdaddy019967]

The copyright line was my favorite as well
the diss was good imo
im just waiting to see how class responds to this
should be dope

[Xray]

I'm glad so far everybody liked it, greatly appreciate everybody's kind comments.

Your mixing is very good. Your voice has improved. I like your delivery. This would've been really great but to me something is weird about your flow. Though others are liking it, I felt sometimes the rhyme scheme changed at the wrong point. You hadn't done that before at all. Not all parts were like that though. The outro with you talking got very annoying quick, should've just had the beat play the track out completely. You sounded mad hungry on this. A lot of the beginning was trash imo though, no offense but I couldn't stand this part:

I'm the acid man, I crack up motherfuckers like Amsterdamn
Get you so lift up I'm the answer man
Yo I'm killing all your patience like a cancer camp
I'm letting shots at ya legs like a gangster fan
Homie your soul get to removing like a dancer can
A propaganda scam like Micheal Jacksons fam
Yo a beast against a vermin, uncertain of plan
Wrap heads of the kings with a tourban in sand
Cut necks of these kids who think as urban bands
Homie you're mad cause your raps'll never burden chants
Robby's a maniac if you think there's even chance
You rap like a fag, I got demon fans
Even Satan isn't glad that you rap so bad
Even Ross called saying "yo give my style back"
Pig, stop fucking running so fast
And take this motherfucking donut for your dad
Your upper-class ass get an an uppercut so wack
Motherfuckers thinking like the Mafia attacked

They were just fillers and boring as hell. Bolded lines were enjoyable and had a sweet flow but had no content. I liked the hook/chorus thing. Your Sticcy Z diss was still better though.

Umm dude it's 50 bars, it's not a 16 verse lol. Ofcourse the rhyme scheme is going to change. And my flow was like butter for the most part, maybe it was too good and it surprised you that's why it was "weird" for you. lol @ Sticcy Z diss was better, that shit is like 10 steps back lyrically, hell even my delivery is 10 steps back, I barely even had multi's in that. So nice try trying to back up your buddy haha. Completely expected it.

[Xray]

Omg I can't believe you dissed me so hard, asshole. I can't believe you stepped it like that, I am so god damn jealous of your rapping, I feel like I have a 50 Cent flow compared to you.

"You try and sound like pete neslon but you can't even copywrite"

Ironic much?

Seriously though, this was embarrassing, you dissed yourself more than you dissed me. Why would you say that your dick was the size of a toothpick?

It's okay sweatheart, you are mad, I get it, so you want to PMS. Go ahead keep talking like a bitch in text while I destroy you on audio. Everybody knows you are shook to respond, and you probably won't, I mean you can't. What you gonna do? Get Coleon on track? Give you some courage? HAHAHAHA. Great, now I have to beat up two disabled kids AGAIN that can't even flow right.

You obviously can't interprete lyrics for shit. "I snap twigs off, y'all on my toothpick dick
like a fucking ghetto broad" ghetto bitches have huge booty, so compared to their big fat asses my dick will look like a toothpick, but you obviously don't understand wordplay do you? lmao.

"You try and sound like pete neslon but you can't even copywrite"

"Robby has a biting hobby but you couldn't Rob a Heist
Copy ass, cop a jack, but you couldn't Copywrite"

Couldn't/can't even copywrite is easy to think of, the only thing that made my line your favourite, obviously cause Copy's name is in it haha. Nah but the only thing that made it good is that it was also mad wordplay on your name and a multi while being a punch, ownage? word. What a moron haha, he thinks I'm stupid enough to steal a lyric from the love of his life. Kid, it's his name, his probably got like 20 lines that wordplay on Copywrite, such an idiot.

[VenomBlackViper]

Great flow & delivery you got that part down.
Good beat (not sure why other people found it repetitive)
There were some great personals but there was also some filler lines that could have been done without.
All in all though it was a great diss, hoping Class responds to this. Let's see this beef taken to some rap shit.

[dead prez]

Not bad, like others said I like others said I liked the Copywrite punchlines. Word, hope class responds to this, and comes back with ether, lol.

[_Steven_]

That sounded fuckin awesome. Awesome flow, perfect beat for this, your new voice is even better. The quality was orgasmic. Great track. The diss aspect of it was pretty average tbh but it still sounds good to listen to. You had some stupid lyrics. Get a ghost writer and you'll seriously be on fire. Waiting for Robby to respond with better lyrics, but less quality and experience.

[Solace]

Umm dude it's 50 bars, it's not a 16 verse lol. Ofcourse the rhyme scheme is going to change. And my flow was like butter for the most part, maybe it was too good and it surprised you that's why it was "weird" for you. lol @ Sticcy Z diss was better, that shit is like 10 steps back lyrically, hell even my delivery is 10 steps back, I barely even had multi's in that. So nice try trying to back up your buddy haha. Completely expected it.

The rhyme schemes changed when the previous ones felt incomplete, I expected to hear 1 more rhyme from a certain rhyme scheme then you changed it up. Maybe it was too good? Lol. I'm cool with both of you. I'm not trying to back him up. Why do you have to get so hostile when someone doesn't like your stuff? Yes, your delivery is 10 steps back in that. I had already said I really liked how your vocals sounded on this. I don't dispute you've improved...But your flow sounded way more smooth on the Sticcy Z one, and your rhyme schemes sounded in order unlike this.

Diss me too if you really think I'm hating on you by saying one of your old tracks (dissing Sticcy Z; another member I was cool with) was better than a newer track.

[Scrubz]

After reading through the lyrics this was legitamately one of the worst disses I've ever read. You didn't even have one personal. You're only decent line was about me biting copywrite but you bit copywrite while doing it

"You try and sound like pete neslon but you can't even copywrite"

Ironic much?

Seriously though, this was embarrassing, you dissed yourself more than you dissed me. Why would you say that your dick was the size of a toothpick?

Lol typical response for someone who just got dissed, why even feed? If he dropped nail in the coffin as a diss you woulda said it sucked. Man up and respond in a song, quit being mad.

[M15HKA]

Shit.. this goes hard man. First of all i did not expect something this good to pop out of no where. I Love it, the flow is sick lyricism is great I like the beat could have played with it a bit more though but this is fire. See how sentus responds but I honestly believe this will probably take the best diss track for 2011.

[classthe_king]

After reading through the lyrics this was legitamately one of the worst disses I've ever read. You didn't even have one personal. You're only decent line was about me biting copywrite but you bit copywrite while doing it

"You try and sound like pete neslon but you can't even copywrite"

Ironic much?

Seriously though, this was embarrassing, you dissed yourself more than you dissed me. Why would you say that your dick was the size of a toothpick?

Lol typical response for someone who just got dissed, why even feed? If he dropped nail in the coffin as a diss you woulda said it sucked. Man up and respond in a song, quit being mad.

Why am I mad at all? This was lyrically the worse diss I've ever seen.

[Kez]

Let's be honest though Class what else are you gonna say? "Oh yeah this was a great diss"?

@X, already told you what I think of the song

[Rapsoldier101]

This is one of the only tracks on here I thoroughly enjoyed listening to. Might listen again. The structure was nice and the bars were good. I like the rhymes too I just dont know the story behind the diss, so I was out of tune with a few of the punchlines. Thats really my only problem, so lyrically this song is dope as fuck great work

[classthe_king]

Let's be honest though Class what else are you gonna say? "Oh yeah this was a great diss"?

@X, already told you what I think of the song

If Cole or someone good dissed me I would probably laugh about the punchlines and say good job but this was just

Honestly not one line cut deep or even bothered me in the slightest. It was all random babble that could have been directed at anyone outside of like 4 lines.

[VenomBlackViper]

Class how's the return diss coming along?

[classthe_king]

I already said I wasn't making on lmao