lol, haha... I see what you were going for, but I dont necessarily liked it, your verse lacked mix creativity and the flow was very, well, at least on the first verse, slow. I dont know how to say it. I liked on your second verse the part where you switch up, but seems like there was a slight lag on the recording.
hmm, I dont know. not my thing. you know I personally Love Club songs as much as other types, but even club songs require more than you to pop bottles if you get what I'm saying.
Like you need to transfer much more emotion than this.
It was interesting tho to see you on some new shit tho', but yeah. could be the first and only song from you I dont like. (btw, I was not the one who voted down on your youtube page) lol.
get on msn when you can, I want to ask you something