Tell me what you think..

[iraqi4life]

2 of my mates:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bjnKeiltXh8

peep the last verse....

[FreeSpeech]

Not horrible, but not good.

Rhymes aren't anything special, very monotone, and more or less just boring. Also, the flow was off.

That said, it's better than this lil homie:


I think they could improve a lot and be pretty decent...

Also people are gonna bitch at you for posting this here. Next time post it in the Eminem section so at least you get more views