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Sarah, you don't have to write rhymes in every post?!

Postby Erick » Apr 13th, '06, 21:06

Sarah wrote:Your every post doesn't have to be a poem lol, you're meant to make topics with a poem/rap/rhyme and people give you feedback on it. You don't have to write rhymes in every post

No rhymes?! What's this you say?!
You're on TRShady?! The online lyrical display!
So excuse me, but if I do say so, and I may,
if you're not up to it you better be on ya way!

With me rhymin' is like drinking Chardonay,
I cannot control my lyrical flow and just have to spray.
Sometimes it's even funny, usually it's pigs in a bay,
but whoever steps to me will notice that I'm here to stay!

And with every new day, at every first sunray,
the words mingle in my head, ready for me to say,
usually sophistocated like one Ernest Hemmingway,
but sometimes pretty lame, like the acting of Faye Dunaway.

But be that as it is, and it is like I say,
so far it's all written brilliance that I lay,
while actually my lyrics should pound on the beats of Kay Slay,
accompanied by the voice of some Z, firstname Jay!

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Postby Erick » Apr 14th, '06, 18:51

TruEmFan wrote:i could imagine you getting banned...

to many, ur rhymes are probably annoying...

but like i said, i like it!

it's very entertaining :happy:



Finally somebody with a sence of humour...
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Postby AspirinE » Apr 14th, '06, 18:59

Lmao, u back>
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Postby $0 R3@L » Apr 15th, '06, 01:35

you need a sense of humour to enjoy your stuff erick....that or 2 bottles of vodak
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Postby NEVER ENOUGH » Apr 15th, '06, 20:52

what the???!!! silly :tounge2: :loser:
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Postby Speech » Apr 15th, '06, 20:58

this was lame........ :shifty: .......im bored.....and i had drugs so i wanna get involved in this......NOW!!!
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All that and then some...

Postby Erick » Apr 16th, '06, 01:10

$0 R3@L wrote:you need a sense of humour to enjoy your stuff erick....that or 2 bottles of vodak


You're so real understanding you need a sense of humour
to read what I'm saying so it's more than just a rumour.
Don't ever take me serious you might end up with a tumor
and btw...Isn't vodka what they drink in the sewer?

So whenever people think 'he is crazy, let's ban his ass',
remember I'm like you a nobody out of the stinkin' mass,
it's silly to take it serious, it ain't smokin' grass?!
So do chill, inhale, relax and have a spas it's on me, so why pass?

And when I talk dirty or rude as I am,
think of my mother who never heared 'thank you ma'm',
Another one taking me seriously, don't she know who I am?!
Is it me? Am I not clear enough?! Damn!

It's crap me drivin' by' in my pimped Bentley
at the backseat Lmao sippin' a bottle of Henny
while my driver picks up everybody that's remotly friendly,
but when I'm finished with them being gently,
i'll throw them out! It makes no sense see?
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Postby 4D » Apr 16th, '06, 09:17

I like your shit man, don`t heed all the naysayers. You are good with poetry, but, none of these rhymes resemble raps, but, who cares, do your thing man!!

P.s The purple font colour is still gay! :D
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Postby ThomasAguanis » Apr 16th, '06, 16:06

FORDIE wrote:I like your shit man, don`t heed all the naysayers. You are good with poetry, but, none of these rhymes resemble raps, but, who cares, do your thing man!!

P.s The purple font colour is still gay! :D


i second that haha
i enjoy reading your posts
every now and then you have a good rhyme in them
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I third !

Postby Erick » Apr 16th, '06, 17:50

ThomasAguanis wrote:
FORDIE wrote:I like your shit man, don`t heed all the naysayers. You are good with poetry, but, none of these rhymes resemble raps, but, who cares, do your thing man!!

P.s The purple font colour is still gay! :D


i second that haha
i enjoy reading your posts
every now and then you have a good rhyme in them


Most fontcolors I encounter at TRShady are black, is everybody black?:confusion:

I had it with being called gay cause of my font-color so I changed it to be bit darker....Still purple! But darker. The purple was originated from the backgroundcolor of my website (see my signature) and actually never had anything to do with being gay or not-gay.

And fortunatly I know I ain't even close to being a rapper...But who is at TRShady?:shifty:

That said...
I am a fan of freestylers like Eminem (in the Netherlands there are not many and even then...) that's why I like to talk crap in rhyme...My girlfriend is starting to hate me for it but that's a story for another time...

Also I would like to say that I have listened to 'the introduction' from SoREAL that I downloaded from his website and must say this level I will never reach. Compared to me this is 'pretty serious', I just limit myself to writing sometimes in this section on TRShady after being banned from the 'battlerap' section...

I'm too shy...And don't think the world is ready yet...

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Re: I third !

Postby ThomasAguanis » Apr 16th, '06, 17:56

wow that purple is hard to read with the black skin on...
and do you mean you talk in rhymes in person too?
well i think if you really want to be good at rhyming/raping than all you need to do is keep doing it and you'll improve. like instead of rhyming 1 or 2 words try rhyming 3 words or 2 words from 1 word.
and i dont think you'd be banned from the battle section if you post a call out or anything.
i seriously think you should keep trying and improve.
and don't listen when people say you suck or anything. just take their negative comments and turn them positive. use them to make you improve and want to write better just to prove everyone wrong.
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Postby Erick » Apr 16th, '06, 18:09

It's not that I always talk in rhymes, only when I'm on TRShady...Imagine!..HAHAHAHA! Then I would understand my girlfriend and would seek help...

And it's not really affecting me what people say, I like to start something even if it's this...Also it took me a while to understand that there are a lot of people here that actually have sound equipment at home to create beats and all...I just wish I had, everybody I know with equipment hates rap and they use their precious materials to create Techno house crap...Oooooh Lord...

Also I just really, really like it and it's not my goal in life to become a rapper or so. Only goal might be to have everything ever recorded involving Eminem (and I'm getting closer everyday!).

I would like to write a silly rap for my girlfriend, let somebody here create the beats and rap my lyrics and present this to her on her birthday or something like that...Possible you think? I will do the cover...
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Postby ThomasAguanis » Apr 16th, '06, 18:17

ok haha i thought that was the reason your girlfriend was mad haha

and all you really need to record at your house is a microphone and headphones. then you can download various recording/beat making/djing programs. the only hard part is learning how to use some of the more complicated programs but after you do, they're great.

and i may be able to help you with you seeking eminem songs and possibly a beat. pm me the songs you want/need from eminem and about the beat so we dont have to keep using this thread.
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Mmhh...

Postby Erick » Apr 16th, '06, 18:43

I will have to look into my Eminem listings...Will do a.s.a.p.!

And when I am finished writing/making up a nice ERICK Da Lyric rap I will PM you for sure. I always like the Wu Tang Clan beats...

Is there something I can download from you? That you have createn and written...
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Hey man!

Postby Erick » Apr 16th, '06, 18:46

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G_Kiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiilllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllla, how are you? :wave:
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