"Ghosts Don't Forgive"

[i4ill]

"Ghosts Don't Forgive"
SoundClick Description: A dramatic story that lyrically portrays friendship, fury, agony, melancholy and most of all vendetta. The supernatural element is exceedingly vivid and it's supported via the grunge effect of mine.
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Lyrics:

[Verse]
It's been said that we were born from the same womb
And would share the same tomb, it aint true but you can't blame who
Ever thought so, our friendship brought so
Much attention it wasn't intentional, we never sought no
Popularity, we were the paradigm for solidarity
To bear with the awful lives of ours which had no disparity
We were so much alike people thought we were consanguineous
Or homogeneous we seriously were beyond oblivious
To this world, even God was envious of our relationship
It was an equation of paten sensation I'm not faking sh**
We were the impeccable embodiment of camaraderie
Till I became heartily sick through the veins and from an artery
Coming from a different kind of heart called "friendship"
That never surrendered to any, I lived to defend it, never thought you'd end it
And for what…? For the same old reason
You couldn't even find something more noble? What a shameful treason
You showed feigned cohesion when I was greatly devoted
Until you broke in my own house to waste me with loaded
Guns and maybe you really just wanted the money in my safe
Wearing a mask on your face; you thought I was dummy or what Dave?!

[Bridge]
With that way you walk you couldn't trick my eyes fool
Burning with addiction, I recognized you
Although I couldn't picturize who I deemed as a brother
Would victimize you for the dream of another
Drug shot ignoring the scream of the mother
Of my lonely son who seemed to be tougher
Than ever till that shot was mistakenly fired
I felt expired, the bullet was taking the entire

[Closer]
…Life of mine away; and I'm a spirit now it's time to pay
For the f*** ing crime you made; I'll be haunting you night and day
No need to fight or pray, you just can't deny a nemesis
Cuz unless you're blessed with death I assure you I will never rest.


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[Trimss]

I liked the storytelling, it was original and tells what some people who really are in need are able to do..
Great.


It's been said that we were born from the same womb
And would share the same tomb, it aint true but you can't blame who
Ever thought so, our friendship brought so

Liked these.

Keep doing music!

[i4ill]

^Thanks man, I appreciate the honest feedback...Drop any links here whenever you post something new (I already feeded your latest track)

[mceddie]

some of the flows and multis were just amazing man, quality could be better, but that sometimes cant be helped of course..... man, you got a lot of potential. keep it up!

[preest]

sometimes I felt like the words werent pronounced as well as they could have been but I absolutely loved the feel of the track, it felt kinda unique and dark!! lyrically it was dope! it was also pretty catchy so it kind of accentuated the dark feel of the track and made it listenable to all listeners, the story telling was just chilling!! man I look forward to hearing more tracks of this quality by you - good job!