OMG FreeSpeech just dissed the hell out of Eminem!!!

[GenePeer]

I constantly spit sick, I got daily vomit

What a shitty way to throw in Hailey's diss!

It's not facepalm worthy, but yeah I wasn't a fan of that line. It was the only one not directed at Em. I wrote this real quickly, I didn't spend a long time on it, that's why there are no extended rhyme schemes really.

Here, change it to "Em tries to flow sick to no avail, he lost it"

Any wordplay on being sick is facepalm worthy, esp. when it's otherwise embarrassing (got vomit?). That new line is much better!

[vivaldiwasasellout]

How can you say this thing is good?
This is obvious, boring and crap.
The HJ line is just...bad taste

And about the final *explanation

You are so indulgent with yourselves, every piece of crap you wrote seems a miracle

[Master Chief]

The only flaw is that if you (in general) were in a position where Em WOULD hear you and he WOULD care because you're famous/relevant/important enough then you (in general) wouldn't have the balls to put this out in the public. I mean, you dissed Proof AND Hailie. No one in the right mind would do put out a diss with that mentioned because you're fucked on SOOOO many levels.

That's the difference between us and relevant people. The diss itself was real good though.

Why wouldn't he? Beef is all about coming as hard as you can, not holding shit back & saying the most fucked up things possible.

There's a line that if you cross you can get killed or fucked up. Sure you can say that but consequences are sure to come your way.

Proof IS the mayor of Detroit. He was extremely popular in his city. You're gonna have all those people wanting to see you get beat the shit out of. Or worse. If you diss Hailie Eminem WILL kill you and I'm sure his people would jump in for such a jab.

I know I would never diss Eminem with those two things. Even if there was beef and I hated him.

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Now Swifty is going to bite the face off your baby!

[FreeSpeech]

There's a line that if you cross you can get killed or fucked up. Sure you can say that but consequences are sure to come your way.

Proof IS the mayor of Detroit. He was extremely popular in his city. You're gonna have all those people wanting to see you get beat the shit out of. Or worse. If you diss Hailie Eminem WILL kill you and I'm sure his people would jump in for such a jab.

I know I would never diss Eminem with those two things. Even if there was beef and I hated him.

Em ya claim ya mother's a crackhead and Kim is a known slut,
so what's Hailie gon' be when she grows up?
-Ja Rule, years ago.

Ja Rule's still alive. Em won't kill anybody. DZK mentioned both Proof and Hailey, he's still alive (though he's not nearly as big/noticeable as Ja). Em isn't some gangster who will have you killed. Yes, if you were in the room with him and said "hey bro, just FYI, I banged your daughter and I'm glad your BFF is dead" you'd probably be in danger, but he won't do anything about a diss.

[Master Chief]

There's a line that if you cross you can get killed or fucked up. Sure you can say that but consequences are sure to come your way.

Proof IS the mayor of Detroit. He was extremely popular in his city. You're gonna have all those people wanting to see you get beat the shit out of. Or worse. If you diss Hailie Eminem WILL kill you and I'm sure his people would jump in for such a jab.

I know I would never diss Eminem with those two things. Even if there was beef and I hated him.

Em ya claim ya mother's a crackhead and Kim is a known slut,
so what's Hailie gon' be when she grows up?
-Ja Rule, years ago.

Ja Rule's still alive. Em won't kill anybody. DZK mentioned both Proof and Hailey, he's still alive (though he's not nearly as big/noticeable as Ja). Em isn't some gangster who will have you killed. Yes, if you were in the room with him and said "hey bro, just FYI, I banged your daughter and I'm glad your BFF is dead" you'd probably be in danger, but he won't do anything about a diss.

Kill in a diss. Ja got killed in a diss after saying that. Several times.

Eminem will kill someone lyrically not phsyically. But, you could be in danger physcially for Proof because of the following he has (in one of the most dangerous cities in the US).

[buffalo bill]

Eminem won't kill anyone just for saying the truth.

[babyjane]

Aside from the Hailie mention this is really good. I don't agree with going at the kids, this type of thing should be between adults but other than that I actually wish someone would rap this and release it just to hear what Em would come back with. I don't think anyone has ever went hard at Eminem. Truth is he's never really gone hard at any real rappers that could match him.

[Fa-Q]

haha this is lame as shit

[OneDream_89]

LOL i have to say, i really liked that good stuff

[Wreck]

The only flaw is that if you (in general) were in a position where Em WOULD hear you and he WOULD care because you're famous/relevant/important enough then you (in general) wouldn't have the balls to put this out in the public. I mean, you dissed Proof AND Hailie. No one in the right mind would do put out a diss with that mentioned because you're fucked on SOOOO many levels.

That's the difference between us and relevant people. The diss itself was real good though.

Why wouldn't he? Beef is all about coming as hard as you can, not holding shit back & saying the most fucked up things possible.

Cause children never did anything to anybody. It's fucked up.

[Sofi]

that's good

[whiteamerica]

FreeSpeech.

not to be the hypocrite police but didn't you attack eminem for his constant use of shitty punchlines and "metaphors"?

yours is full. full.

of them.

[DOPE]

This is kind of immature to be honest. Specially the Hailey line.

As Master Chief said it, anybody who would go mainstream would never have the balls to put this out on a record. Career suicide, plus half the shit you said would just simply backfire.

[FreeSpeech]

FreeSpeech.

not to be the hypocrite police but didn't you attack eminem for his constant use of shitty punchlines and "metaphors"?

yours is full. full.

of them.

I mean, I've said he's been spitting bad ones recently, yes. He has.

This stupid drug addict’s an oxymoron like living Proof

^Very dope, pardon my dick riding of myself

He thinks he’s bombing, but he’s still a fag like Osama in drag

Better than most of Em's punches, reference to Despicable

I banged his momma, how’s that for a prominent shag?
Yeah Em, you heard right, I son you

Admittedly not amazing, but he's real sensitive about his mom and "son you" is a common phrase when you best somebody.

Simple fact: Roman wants revenge for that shitty track
I need a doctor, I’m sick from you professing your love-

Both are plays on the songs I'm criticizing, both are somewhat dope.

I constantly spit sick, I got daily vomit
Your daughter’s a slut, look there’s Hailey’s Comment! (comet)

That first line is bad, I changed it earlier in the thread. The Hailey's Comment line is nice, I wrote it in a sarcastic mocking manner referencing how he's flipped shit on anyone who's commented on Hailey.

Every video, your feet looking like a Nike shop

Not really wordplay or a metaphor, I'm talking about how he has obvious product placement in his vids nowadays.

Shit mayne, I think you better call the cops
I just stole your self respect. Em: YOU’VE FALLEN OFF

Not a genius punchline or anything, but it hits home.

In conclusion, suck my dick sir.