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Re: The 'N' Word - Possessed

Postby FreeSpeech » Apr 29th, '11, 01:37

I'm not saying this song's bad, but it's really not impressive. The concept's kinda clever, but beyond that it's just BS. I wrote this in like ten minutes:

At the age of nine I got nannies naked
Now I nuke lines like Nagasaki in a nanosecond
You nag over nada, you need to not spit
No one negates my napalm, you a novice
Nations’ navies know my flow’s noticeable
From knots away, no newspaper nixes my notes
Never flashy, no need, the neon’s not me
Nowadays you nerds nervous like neo Nazis
Napping around native Negros in Niger
I’m a natural nightmare, ‘nap Natalie and knife her
No nice gold nuggets, I got a neutral net worth
I’m like nice nicotine nipping your neural networks
I’m nominated as the nastiest, your nouns are not e’Nuff
Other nominees are nonexistent like Nollie’s nuts
I’m nonfeeling, nourished off Novocain
In not long you nuisances will know the name

(I cheated a bit with Negros, but it isn't used in the typical way)

Seriously, these guys do this as a living. I'm a dude in his room bored. It's not that hard to do...
And honestly, my lines were more interconnected as opposed to rhyming random N words.
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Re: The 'N' Word - Possessed

Postby classthe_king » Apr 29th, '11, 01:40

FreeSpeech wrote:I'm not saying this song's bad, but it's really not impressive. The concept's kinda clever, but beyond that it's just BS. I wrote this in like ten minutes:

At the age of nine I got nannies naked
Now I nuke lines like Nagasaki in a nanosecond
You nag over nada, you need to not spit
No one negates my napalm, you a novice
Nations’ navies know my flow’s noticeable
From knots away, no newspaper nixes my notes
Never flashy, no need, the neon’s not me
Nowadays you nerds nervous like neo Nazis
Napping around native Negros in Niger
I’m a natural nightmare, ‘nap Natalie and knife her
No nice gold nuggets, I got a neutral net worth
I’m like nice nicotine nipping your neural networks
I’m nominated as the nastiest, your nouns are not e’Nuff
Other nominees are nonexistent like Nollie’s nuts
I’m nonfeeling, nourished off Novocain
In not long you nuisances will know the name

(I cheated a bit with Negros, but it isn't used in the typical way)

Seriously, these guys do this as a living. I'm a dude in his room bored. It's not that hard to do...


Well for one there's was much better than yours...anyone can write a verse using a lot of words of the same letter and two, this is easily one of their worst songs. Write a Pyromaniac Penmanship and then you can say whatever you want about them.
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Re: The 'N' Word - Possessed

Postby FreeSpeech » Apr 29th, '11, 01:43

classthe_king wrote:Well for one there's was much better than yours...anyone can write a verse using a lot of words of the same letter and two, this is easily one of their worst songs. Write a Pyromaniac Penmanship and then you can say whatever you want about them.

L-O-L at you hating to hate. Their lines were more random and had about the same multis. I'm not acting like mine's amazing, I did it quickly, but to say theirs is much better is just you whining. Show me how it's better? The Nazarene line was the only real nice one.
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Re: The 'N' Word - Possessed

Postby classthe_king » Apr 29th, '11, 01:45

FreeSpeech wrote:
classthe_king wrote:Well for one there's was much better than yours...anyone can write a verse using a lot of words of the same letter and two, this is easily one of their worst songs. Write a Pyromaniac Penmanship and then you can say whatever you want about them.

L-O-L at you hating to hate. Their lines were more random and had about the same multis. I'm not acting like mine's amazing, I did it quickly, but to say theirs is much better is just you whining. Show me how it's better? The Nazarene line was the only real nice one.


What? The fact that you need to ask why there's is better is just laughable. There's was much much more creative. Not one line in your verse standed out as being good.
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Re: The 'N' Word - Possessed

Postby Master Chief » Apr 29th, '11, 01:47

FreeSpeech wrote:I'm not saying this song's bad, but it's really not impressive. The concept's kinda clever, but beyond that it's just BS. I wrote this in like ten minutes:

At the age of nine I got nannies naked
Now I nuke lines like Nagasaki in a nanosecond
You nag over nada, you need to not spit
No one negates my napalm, you a novice
Nations’ navies know my flow’s noticeable
From knots away, no newspaper nixes my notes
Never flashy, no need, the neon’s not me
Nowadays you nerds nervous like neo Nazis
Napping around native Negros in Niger
I’m a natural nightmare, ‘nap Natalie and knife her
No nice gold nuggets, I got a neutral net worth
I’m like nice nicotine nipping your neural networks
I’m nominated as the nastiest, your nouns are not e’Nuff
Other nominees are nonexistent like Nollie’s nuts
I’m nonfeeling, nourished off Novocain
In not long you nuisances will know the name

(I cheated a bit with Negros, but it isn't used in the typical way)

Seriously, these guys do this as a living. I'm a dude in his room bored. It's not that hard to do...
And honestly, my lines were more interconnected as opposed to rhyming random N words.

I don't mean to go against the grain or jump in this argument but I prefer this verse to the Possessed verse.
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Re: The 'N' Word - Possessed

Postby FreeSpeech » Apr 29th, '11, 01:48

classthe_king wrote:
FreeSpeech wrote:
classthe_king wrote:Well for one there's was much better than yours...anyone can write a verse using a lot of words of the same letter and two, this is easily one of their worst songs. Write a Pyromaniac Penmanship and then you can say whatever you want about them.

L-O-L at you hating to hate. Their lines were more random and had about the same multis. I'm not acting like mine's amazing, I did it quickly, but to say theirs is much better is just you whining. Show me how it's better? The Nazarene line was the only real nice one.


What? The fact that you need to ask why there's is better is just laughable. There's was much much more creative. Not one line in your verse standed out as being good.

I’m like nice nicotine nipping your neural networks

Nowadays you nerds nervous like neo Nazis
Napping around native Negros in Niger

^If you don't those are remotely nice, it proves you're just a bitter little prick.
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Re: The 'N' Word - Possessed

Postby classthe_king » Apr 29th, '11, 01:50

OMG lmao, can you explain what is good about those lines?
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Re: The 'N' Word - Possessed

Postby FreeSpeech » Apr 29th, '11, 01:56

classthe_king wrote:OMG lmao, can you explain what is good about those lines?

Can you explain what's NOT? They follow the N scheme perfectly (which isn't hard), they're decent punches.

What's so nice about the other verse? You like it because it's pretentious bullshit about Nastradamus and whatnot? I'm not gonna debate endlessly, all I said was it wasn't a very impressive verse at all. Neither is mine, it's just not bad in comparison.
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Re: The 'N' Word - Possessed

Postby classthe_king » Apr 29th, '11, 02:01

FreeSpeech wrote:
classthe_king wrote:OMG lmao, can you explain what is good about those lines?

Can you explain what's NOT? They follow the N scheme perfectly (which isn't hard), they're decent punches.

What's so nice about the other verse? You like it because it's pretentious bullshit about Nastradamus and whatnot? I'm not gonna debate endlessly, all I said was it wasn't a very impressive verse at all. Neither is mine, it's just not bad in comparison.


They're nervouse like nazis around black people. That's not really a good punch lol, maybe compared to the music you listen to.

And nice job at using the pretentious cop out. That's not being pretentious, that's being creative and not just rapping boring, simple lines like you.

Why am I even arguing about this? I already said it was one of their worst songs.
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Re: The 'N' Word - Possessed

Postby FreeSpeech » Apr 29th, '11, 02:08

classthe_king wrote:Why am I even arguing about this? I already said it was one of their worst songs.

Because you're a stupid lil twit who's jealous that you'll never gain an ounce of recognition due to your inability to sound remotely listenable or ride a beat, and the fact that you'll never see a penny of the $10,000 net career earnings that your bum-like and likely homeless idol Copywrite has made makes you want to defend every rapper who is in a similar, yet infinitely more talented position as you.

"U mad!"

Nah, I don't take pride in writing BS lyrics and acknowledge my verse is nothing jawdropping, but it's fun to shoot down lil argumentative nerd's dreams. Toodles.
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Re: The 'N' Word - Possessed

Postby classthe_king » Apr 29th, '11, 02:11

FreeSpeech wrote:
classthe_king wrote:Why am I even arguing about this? I already said it was one of their worst songs.

Because you're a stupid lil twit who's jealous that you'll never gain an ounce of recognition due to your inability to sound remotely listenable or ride a beat, and the fact that you'll never see a penny of the $10,000 net career earnings that your bum-like and likely homeless idol Copywrite has made makes you want to defend every rapper who is in a similar, yet infinitely more talented position as you.

"U mad!"

Nah, I don't take pride in writing BS lyrics and acknowledge my verse is nothing jawdropping, but it's fun to shoot down lil argumentative nerd's dreams. Toodles.


:laughing: :laughing: :laughing: :laughing: :laughing: :laughing:

You're a drake, kanye and nicki minaj fan, I care about anything you say because...?

And nice job at shooting down my dream :y: :laughing:
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Re: The 'N' Word - Possessed

Postby ThomasAguanis » Apr 29th, '11, 02:12

This thread has officially gone to hell, and it's not coming back.
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Re: The 'N' Word - Possessed

Postby FreeSpeech » Apr 29th, '11, 02:17

classthe_king wrote:
FreeSpeech wrote:
classthe_king wrote:Why am I even arguing about this? I already said it was one of their worst songs.

Because you're a stupid lil twit who's jealous that you'll never gain an ounce of recognition due to your inability to sound remotely listenable or ride a beat, and the fact that you'll never see a penny of the $10,000 net career earnings that your bum-like and likely homeless idol Copywrite has made makes you want to defend every rapper who is in a similar, yet infinitely more talented position as you.

"U mad!"

Nah, I don't take pride in writing BS lyrics and acknowledge my verse is nothing jawdropping, but it's fun to shoot down lil argumentative nerd's dreams. Toodles.


:laughing: :laughing: :laughing: :laughing: :laughing: :laughing:

You're a drake, kanye and nicki minaj fan, I care about anything you say because...?

And nice job at shooting down my dream :y: :laughing:

Being a Kanye fan isn't embarassing whatsoever. You like Cudi, placed his album in your top 10 and Kanye >>>> Cudi.
I'm a fan of Drake's early mixtapes, yep. I don't like his BS Young Money style now, but his early stuff was nice.
Not a Nicki fan, I've repeatedly said Pink Friday was cat vomit and I couldn't finished it. I had her in my sig once, along with a dozen other dudes I was listening to, and I was listening to her early unsigned shit which is fairly good.

If I put a bunch of laughing smileys, does that make me look better? You seem to think so.
ThomasAguanis wrote:This thread has officially gone to hell, and it's not coming back.

Darn, now we can't wack off to a bunch of British dudes picking words that start with N out of the dictionary. Might as well shut the website down guys.
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Re: The 'N' Word - Possessed

Postby classthe_king » Apr 29th, '11, 02:19

I never placed it in my top 10. I placed it in my top 10 albums I would keep because it's the best smoking album. And no, Drake is garbage always has been. Same with Kanye.

Your music taste is dreadful so honestly nothing you say bothers me in the slightest.
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Re: The 'N' Word - Possessed

Postby FreeSpeech » Apr 29th, '11, 02:30

classthe_king wrote:I never placed it in my top 10. I placed it in my top 10 albums I would keep because it's the best smoking album. And no, Drake is garbage always has been. Same with Kanye.

Your music taste is dreadful so honestly nothing you say bothers me in the slightest.

:( you...you think I have bad taste? But, but, what do I do now....?

I guess I'll start posting a bunch of dope rappers I listen to in order to validate myself and feel cool? Will that make me cool class?

The only "bad" rappers I listen to routinely are older Wayne and Drake, and maybe 50.

Other than that, it's Common, Kanye, Lupe, Blu, Nas, Jay, Em, Monch, Rakim, Tupac, Biggie, Outkast, Mos Def, etc.

Common's Be > Any of your sub-par produced arrogant, faux-intellectual bullshit rap.

I'm not saying your racist, but it is weird taht like 90% of your music is white in a black-dominated industry.
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