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Eminem ft Royce Da 5"9 - Fast Lane (Discussion Thread)

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Re: Eminem ft Royce Da 5"9 - Fast Lane (Discussion Thread)

Postby classthe_king » Apr 29th, '11, 01:59

Master Chief wrote:
classthe_king wrote:You're fucking dillusional :laughing: It's not even close the warning, listen to both songs back to back :facepalm

Copy's quality is much worse than Eminem's but his delivery is way better, Copy has one of the best deliveries in Hip-Hop, I don't know how you can say otherwise lmao. And Eminem's multis were horrible, forced, and not nearly better quality nor quantity wise. "Spitteded" lmfao

That line is horrible. We wouldn't say that about old Eminem because he would never spit such a garbage line. As soon as he said, in other words, it automatically made it corny as fuck.

I did, yes it is. It's the closest we've ever gotten to it. Oh well.

You said Copywrite's delivery on HE is better than Fast Lane. That is a fucking lie. His delivery on that almost made me not like the album. Nowadays, he has a fantastic delivery. Eminem's multis weren't horrible, wtf. They weren't fantastic but just because something's not absolutely flawless doesn't mean it's horrible (your logic). He never said spitteded. Listen again (you won't cause Eminem sucks in other words, you're cool).

Someone just HAD to complain about "other words" :laughing: :laughing: :laughing: :laughing: :laughing: :laughing: :laughing:

What an awful reason to hate that line.

Why am I even arguing with you? God, it's such a waste of fucking time :facepalm


Again, the closest thing we got doesn't mean it was close, because it wasn't. At all.

No lmfao. Copywrite had something called emotion, it makes you want to listen to the track more than once. You should look it up.

Show me one line with good multis lmao.

That's not an awful reason to hate a line. The line wasn't creative or good in the first place but the set up and presentation of a punch is just as important as the punch itself. Eminem fails miserably in that department
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Re: Eminem ft Royce Da 5"9 - Fast Lane (Discussion Thread)

Postby Sla » Apr 29th, '11, 02:00

Lol, who thinks part of the beginning of the beat was taken from Bill Contis Rocky song beat? Image
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Re: Eminem ft Royce Da 5"9 - Fast Lane (Discussion Thread)

Postby classthe_king » Apr 29th, '11, 02:02

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Master Chief wrote:You said Copywrite's delivery on HE is better than Fast Lane. That is a fucking lie. His delivery on that almost made me not like the album. Nowadays, he has a fantastic delivery. Eminem's multis weren't horrible, wtf. They weren't fantastic but just because something's not absolutely flawless doesn't mean it's horrible (your logic). He never said spitteded. Listen again (you won't cause Eminem sucks in other words, you're cool).

Why am I even arguing with you? God, it's such a waste of fucking time :facepalm

Im pretty sure he said "spitted".
@Class how can you even say that the mulites are forced? You dont just magically happen to say something and have mulitple syllables rhyme perfectly on accident. You cant complain about "forced" multies and then complain if there isnt any. What do you want him to do?


The whole part where he was studdering?

Forced as fuck.
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Re: Eminem ft Royce Da 5"9 - Fast Lane (Discussion Thread)

Postby whiteamerica » Apr 29th, '11, 02:04

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Why am I even arguing with you? God, it's such a waste of fucking time :facepalm

Im pretty sure he said "spitted".
@Class how can you even say that the mulites are forced? You dont just magically happen to say something and have mulitple syllables rhyme perfectly on accident. They have to be "forced" (even though I hate that term). You cant complain about "forced" multies and then complain if there isnt any. What do you want him to do?[/quote]

we want him to be better....


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Re: Eminem ft Royce Da 5"9 - Fast Lane (Discussion Thread)

Postby Master Chief » Apr 29th, '11, 02:07

classthe_king wrote:Again, the closest thing we got doesn't mean it was close, because it wasn't. At all.

No lmfao. Copywrite had something called emotion, it makes you want to listen to the track more than once. You should look it up.

Show me one line with good multis lmao.

That's not an awful reason to hate a line. The line wasn't creative or good in the first place but the set up and presentation of a punch is just as important as the punch itself. Eminem fails miserably in that department

And anger isn't emotion?

Really I belong inside a dang insane asylum, cleanin’, try them trailer parks
Crazy
, I am back, and I am razor-sharp, baby
And that’s back wit’ a capital B wit’ an exclamation mark, maybe
You should listen when I flip the linguistics
‘Cause I’m gonna rip this mystical sick shit
You don’t wanna become another victim or statistic of this shit

He was also including a series of one syllable internal rhymes that I didn't highlight.

The line was good. It was funny, it's not the greatest punchline of all time but again that doesn't mean that it sucks. How the hell was the presentation of the punch bad?
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Re: Eminem ft Royce Da 5"9 - Fast Lane (Discussion Thread)

Postby 12characters » Apr 29th, '11, 02:08

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Re: Eminem ft Royce Da 5"9 - Fast Lane (Discussion Thread)

Postby classthe_king » Apr 29th, '11, 02:10

Master Chief wrote:
classthe_king wrote:Again, the closest thing we got doesn't mean it was close, because it wasn't. At all.

No lmfao. Copywrite had something called emotion, it makes you want to listen to the track more than once. You should look it up.

Show me one line with good multis lmao.

That's not an awful reason to hate a line. The line wasn't creative or good in the first place but the set up and presentation of a punch is just as important as the punch itself. Eminem fails miserably in that department

And anger isn't emotion?

Really I belong inside a dang insane asylum, cleanin’, try them trailer parks
Crazy
, I am back, and I am razor-sharp, baby
And that’s back wit’ a capital B wit’ an exclamation mark, maybe
You should listen when I flip the linguistics
‘Cause I’m gonna rip this mystical sick shit
You don’t wanna become another victim or statistic of this shit

He was also including a series of one syllable internal rhymes that I didn't highlight.

The line was good. It was funny, it's not the greatest punchline of all time but again that doesn't mean that it sucks. How the hell was the presentation of the punch bad?


What anger? Lolz

And thank you for proving with those lines how bad this verse was lyrically.

And you really don't see how the set up was bad? You don't even know enough about rap to have a solid opinion when trying to talk to me.
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Re: Eminem ft Royce Da 5"9 - Fast Lane (Discussion Thread)

Postby whiteamerica » Apr 29th, '11, 02:12

i don't think masterchief understands what a coherent verse is.....


he must think eminem's in this is a good example
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Re: Eminem ft Royce Da 5"9 - Fast Lane (Discussion Thread)

Postby Master Chief » Apr 29th, '11, 02:13

classthe_king wrote:What anger? Lolz

And thank you for proving with those lines how bad this verse was lyrically.

And you really don't see how the set up was bad? You don't even know enough about rap to have a solid opinion when trying to talk to me.

Listen again and admit you are wrong, little buddy.

Gee, I couldn't have predicted that response.

EXPLAIN YOURSELF. Explain yourself or just stop arguing. All you do is provide statements that you do not back up. Lol @ the classic Class assumptions.
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Re: Eminem ft Royce Da 5"9 - Fast Lane (Discussion Thread)

Postby Master Chief » Apr 29th, '11, 02:14

whiteamerica wrote:i don't think masterchief understands what a coherent verse is.....


he must think eminem's in this is a good example

whiteamerica wrote:I was really liking eminem's verse (relative to other new stuff)

Yeah. Shut the fuck up, bitch.
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Re: Eminem ft Royce Da 5"9 - Fast Lane (Discussion Thread)

Postby classthe_king » Apr 29th, '11, 02:15

Master Chief wrote:
classthe_king wrote:What anger? Lolz

And thank you for proving with those lines how bad this verse was lyrically.

And you really don't see how the set up was bad? You don't even know enough about rap to have a solid opinion when trying to talk to me.

Listen again and admit you are wrong, little buddy.

Gee, I couldn't have predicted that response.

EXPLAIN YOURSELF. Explain yourself or just stop arguing. All you do is provide statements that you do not back up. Lol @ the classic Class assumptions.


I already listened once, that was easily enough to hear the delivery lmao. You need to get your head out of Eminem's ass and admit you are wrong.

Gee, I couldn't have predicted Eminem could have possibly put out a horrible verse

Saying a phrase, and then saying in other words, and then saying the phrase again except with wordplay is HORRIBLE execution. Maybe if you stopped listening to Eminem, Royce and Tech N9ne for once then you would know what good lyricism is.
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Re: Eminem ft Royce Da 5"9 - Fast Lane (Discussion Thread)

Postby Master Chief » Apr 29th, '11, 02:20

classthe_king wrote:I already listened once, that was easily enough to hear the delivery lmao. You need to get your head out of Eminem's ass and admit you are wrong.

Gee, I couldn't have predicted Eminem could have possibly put out a horrible verse

Saying a phrase, and then saying in other words, and then saying the phrase again except with wordplay is HORRIBLE execution. Maybe if you stopped listening to Eminem, Royce and Tech N9ne for once then you would know what good lyricism is.

You need to go die if you can't hear the anger in the second verse. You obviously didn't because you're denying the anger.

Gee, I couldn't even remotely think of Class making a better verse.... ever.

It's not horrible execution at all, it's just been overused by Eminem. It's not very good but that does not automatically make it horrible. Lol @ implying 3 of the best lyricists have bad lyricism.
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Re: Eminem ft Royce Da 5"9 - Fast Lane (Discussion Thread)

Postby whiteamerica » Apr 29th, '11, 02:22

whiteamerica wrote:i was really liking eminem's verse (relative to other new stuff)..... but then he said he was kicking shell cases like soccer balls.... LOLOLOL NT lil shady


l2quote bro.....


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Re: Eminem ft Royce Da 5"9 - Fast Lane (Discussion Thread)

Postby Master Chief » Apr 29th, '11, 02:23

whiteamerica wrote:
whiteamerica wrote:i was really liking eminem's verse (relative to other new stuff)..... but then he said he was kicking shell cases like soccer balls.... LOLOLOL NT lil shady


l2quote bro.....


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So you hate a verse because of a line? Yeah, you are fucking stupid.
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Re: Eminem ft Royce Da 5"9 - Fast Lane (Discussion Thread)

Postby limea » Apr 29th, '11, 02:23

Master Chief wrote:
classthe_king wrote:I already listened once, that was easily enough to hear the delivery lmao. You need to get your head out of Eminem's ass and admit you are wrong.

Gee, I couldn't have predicted Eminem could have possibly put out a horrible verse

Saying a phrase, and then saying in other words, and then saying the phrase again except with wordplay is HORRIBLE execution. Maybe if you stopped listening to Eminem, Royce and Tech N9ne for once then you would know what good lyricism is.

You need to go die if you can't hear the anger in the second verse. You obviously didn't because you're denying the anger.

Gee, I couldn't even remotely think of Class making a better verse.... ever.

It's not horrible execution at all, it's just been overused by Eminem. It's not very good but that does not automatically make it horrible. Lol @ implying 3 of the best lyricists have bad lyricism.

Erm, what? :unsure:
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