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RAW Shit Dedicated To Proof

Postby SNaKe » Apr 16th, '06, 18:25

First i wanna say it's the first rhyme i ever wrote (In English) and i must admit
im not really super at this. but i was bored and wrote this shit...and like to share it with ya'll so please gave me your honest opinion what you think if it...


This goes out to proof who was one of the realest in the game.
You brought the flow in shady records and always stayed the same
thats why i love you, and always will, your one of my favorites in the D
Cause you thought those wannabe rappers dont fuck with me in this game
or ill cut your fuckin face and leave you with no name or identity,insanity
thats me im fuckin crazy and finish you in my killing spree
it
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Postby SNaKe » Apr 17th, '06, 00:05

Sarah wrote:That was pretty good Snake ;) . Specially for your first rhyme you wrote in english. Very good :flower:


thnx Sarah i really appreciate it......... :8)
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Postby polluted » Apr 17th, '06, 08:27

fuckin spooky :worship:
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Postby SNaKe » Apr 17th, '06, 11:51

Angie wrote::D nice snaky :flowers: keep at it twas real nice of u to write that up


thnx Angie..........and polluted...
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