BigBangBazinga wrote:Innovation wrote:Punchlines |3 Liquid
Personals |3 Liquid
Multi's |2 neither -> I'll explain
Flow |1 BBB
Structure |1 BBB
Vocab/Complex |1 Liquid
Other |1 BBB
Overall: Liquid 7 - 3 BBB
I liked this line, BBB. This is why I gave you the "other" vote.BigBangBazinga wrote:"No matter how many times you call me out you're still a phoney
The only tail your hairy shit gets is from a fucking cartoon pony"
Multi vote explanation
I didn't give any points for multi's as there really weren't any. I mean there was like "phoney/pony" and "MySpace/high pace" from BBB. Those were really the best of the match and didn't really deserve the points.
I didn't really see any multi's in your piece, Liquid. I mean there was one I suppose if it flowed right, but it is very slanted. "rusty/punk see"
BBB, you could have really developed on the murder line. I instantly thought of a multi when I read it.
I use my worldplay skills to murder you, see as I
Hid your body, I solved this case, call me CSI
And obviously you got the 3 syllable rhyme there.. "See as I/CSI"
Overall, decent battle. I enjoyed voting on this. You two keep at it, you've got a decent grasp on how to write!
About the "See as I, CSI" line. I know that would've worked, but I felt that was a pretty cheap way to rhyme, know what I mean? Thanks for voting!
Either way dude it wouldn't be a forced multi and I'd have gave you the 2 points there. No problem!
And 7-3 or 7-5, doesn't really matter. 
