Big Ax-D & Tom Chambers - Crybaby

[B.A.D.]

Title: Crybaby
Artists: Big Ax-D & Tom Chambers
Produced by: Big Ax-D
Link in case I fucked up with the embeding thing is:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=U8qgkVXK8dU

Link of feedback:
viewtopic.php?f=38&t=112778

& Lyrics:

(chorus 2)
You Are a Mutherfucking Crybaby, shut the fuck up and listen to this shit

(chorus)
Mamma... I want mamma...

(Big Ax-D)
I'm influent on your thoughts, currently cruel to your moms
so damn insalubre, in school I'm the virus that get you to tombs
I'm sonnin u nigga, calm now, you the sun of a gun
I got bullets in my tongue, lets do it, nigga now run
I'm foolin you, pulling you out of the fruit corridor
tomato n' lettuce haters, let us celebrate the Euphoria
I'm sorry dawg i couldnt decide what to do with you,
I should've just open my eyes before I couldn't do it
cuz homocide is a blind old fashion
I'll get sued and get fined, but I dont mind, its only passion
I'm an assasin of blood vessels, but I liked you.
suicidal thoughts penetrate you, But I ain't like you
so as I go nuts in this state of emergency
medicine makes you an agency of pains and angsty
you see my black jacket, I'm suited to kill in a suit,
I'll see you heart, Jab it. dont you dare weep fucking shook

(chorus)
Mamma... I want mamma...

(Tom Chambers)
when the going gets tough...go ahead and cry me a river//
you can drink yourself to death and go and pry out your liver//
cuz noone will miss you with all the bitching you do//
and its hard to accept the fact that i'm shitting on you//
want the satisfaction of having a gimmik to prove//
but beefing with me will prove that i won't give it to you//
now let me ask you...why do you envy the team//
ax-d...tom chambers...new millenium dream//
you try to be real...i just tend to be me//
bitches love me...i'm piff...if you render in cream//
i can see why you envying me//
we the same species but different pedigree's b//
all this came from hard work and the constant pressure//
one digit...middle finger...its an honest gesture//
cuz in this heart there ain't a fuck to be given//
so self centered...so its fuck what you spitting//

(chorus)
Mamma... I want mamma...

(chorus 2)
You Are a Mutherfucking Crybaby, shut the fuck up and listen to this shit

(Big Ax-D)
now, One thousand times, I've told you to ask me about it
Im knowledged of all, a lousy mind unfolds, I brag about it
Audis on my gargage, but thats 4 cirlces faggot,
I'm bout it, bout it, loud this time...
Fuck a nigga thats nagged about it, I'm not saudi,
but in the south, Arabia's a bit crowded, I'm not shouting,
my voice is just too clouded in sound, oh why?
I'm bound to this shit, I'm to sweet to be sour... dont cry

(Tom Chambers)
ax...i ain't got no time...its show time//
and i can put these bitchy cry babies on front street//
i laugh they hate me for fun see//
got trust in myself so you can't blame me...i'm one deep..sup b/
and losing never be the outcome//
so just remember my whole mixtape be better then ya albums//
the critics hate me...but they high praise me//
so step up or shut up and don't be a cry baby//

(chorus 2)
You Are a Mutherfucking Crybaby, shut the fuck up and listen to this shit

[Tranquil]

Loved it! I didnt really like the Microsoft sam bit, but the "momma" things in the chorus were great The lyrics were good, the flow, the beat and all that were good, i don't really have any complaints apart from the micro sam bit, but it was different and i don't think ive ever heard that in a song before

5/5

[B.A.D.]

hahahaha thanks a lot man Im glad you liked it, althought what the fuck is Microsoft Sam bit?... is that an instrument? lol.... anyways, thanks for listening and commenting, Im glad you liked it bro

[gutawafang]

Loved it. The strength of it.

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

damn....first of i wasnt a fan of the microsoft sam thing neither...
but beatr was hektik really good pace..
flows were delievered...but Ax: you started out fuckin dope man..everything was clean but due the middle your flow sounded sloppy as in uncontrolled...also your "3rd verse" felt a little bit rushed..
big suprise...chambers nailed it...i cant really say nuttin bad about it...i was lovin the flow...
pronouncation was there....overlays supported your delivery even more which was a good extra...
good one guys

[B.A.D.]

@ Guta - Thanks a lot man glad you liked it man

@ C-Riz - whats that microsoft sam thing? ... and about the rushed?? lol, I dont really see anything rushed at all in here .. but yeah, thanks for listening and sharing your appinion Chris, glad you liked it

@ Mc Meltdown - thanks man, glad you liked it as well WHAT THE FUCK IS MICROSOFT SAM, why everybody keeps saying that????.... Computer Sample??.. are you talking about the vocoder?? lol.... anyways, thanks a lot for sharing your thoughts brother, well appreciated

[B.A.D.]

oh lmao... why does everyone call it like that... is there a new autotune program or something? lmao

anyways, thanks for listening and commenting peeps
all the comments are appreciated whether good or bad

[Tranquil]

Microsoft Sam is like a computer thing where you type words in and it will say the words you typed, but it will be in the voice that is used to say "You Are a Mutherfucking Crybaby, shut the fuck up and listen to this shit" that line

[Tornado]

People already said about the Microsoft Sam thing, it gives the impression that the tracks gonna be some sub-par FL level track but the beat is awesome, real headbanger. Only thing which ruined the track is Ax's verses, mainly to do with you didn't sound comfy on the beat, hard to get into what you were saying more than chambers. Again, i'd say pronounciation but it was just a parts where you seemed to rush sentences which ruined an otherwise nice track

6/10

[B.A.D.]

haha, thanks for the feed man, I appreciate it, glad you liked the beat
Chris told me the same about the rushing, but I just can't notice it, I think its better if you or anyone could point me out to where exactly so I know what youre talking about and avoid it on the future.

thanks for listening and feeding bro

[classthe_king]

This was a pretty dope track. If you produced it Big Ax-D, it's one of your best produced tracks I've heard

Ax's verse was pretty good lyrically from what I've seen from him before, although I think if you're going to try to appeal to American accents then you should try and sound like as much of an American as possible, if you're just trying to appeal to Mexico then just keep what you're doing. Just some advice. Chambers did his thing as always, wasn't his best verse ever but it wasn't his worst, just a solid verse. Overall I liked the song but I didn't really like the chorus, it got kind of annoying.

[B.A.D.]

I actually agree about the chorrus, and told chambers that... but we couldn't come up with anything else for it... lol... still I rekon its pretti original. about the accent... thats the thing too... like I still want to have something that identifies me, and by far is my accent and well, my first crowd to please is mexico and the underground mexican scene its even harder than the american, plus I do kinda like my accent.

anyways, thanks a lot for the listen. and yup thats my beat thanks for that.

thanks to everybody that listened, commented.

[Mr. Chambers]

I think the accent especially brings out a darker delivery when you use slow beats with a dark feel to them.

[Scrubz]

Beat was dope as fuck, thought the content should have been harder for this type of track but its no biggy. all three verses were great, amazing mixing and production. The baby sample got a little repetitive and the voice in the beginning was annoying but the song it self was fire. Good job guys.

[Vettori]

Dope beat..definately produced good.....but the rest, no offence cause i know you guys put in work..this wasn't really up to par with the rest of your guys lyrics. Ive heard better. productions getting stronger though. Sorry i havn't much to say.