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Eminem's current wordplay and punchlines.

Postby Devil'sAdvocate » Jun 6th, '11, 16:09

I honestly think Em has improved doing this in the time from recovery up to hell:the sequel,punchlines presentation is more smoother and the puns as a whole are just better,so im just gonna take every punchline from like 6 tracks on hell:the sequel and we gon say if they dope or not.

Welcome 2 Hell:

And this ain't even the tip of the iceberg yet
It's like squirting a squirt gun in the ocean, fuck off (i find this really witty and describing of the bars that come after it)

Thunder and lightning, rain, hail, sleet with a tornado's the kind of brainstorm I get
So when the wind starts blowing, shit, talking about goin' in?
Goin' insane's more like it! (again this sounds very fun and actually great that he thought of it,i love it)

there's too much at stake, and to find someone this raw on a beat is rare (3 puns here,again good)

Tellin' us to pipe down, it's like talking to a meth head (pipe down/meth head,cool right)

David Carrideine jacking his penis in front of his tripod
Choking his own neck, what part you don't get?
I'm saying I die hard! (just sounds so energetic plus good rhyming)

The Reunion:

tryna fix
Her makeup. I'm like "Bitch, you ain't a plastic surgeon.
I advise ya to put up your visor. I'm getting' kyna ticked.
You're blocking my side mirror!" She's like "Yeah, so?"
"I'm like "So? You gon' need a stitch, you keep acting like that, ho. (didnt notice this until amadeo pointed it out in some thread,its actually kinda clever and doesnt bother or interfere with what hes saying)

'Fore I snap back into accents
'Cause she kept asking me to quit calling her "cunt"!
I said "I cunt!" (it made me fucking laugh,i love this part alot,really witty)

Above The Law:

Fucking mistletoe over the world, stuck my ass up under it
Now pucker up them lips and kiss it hoe (dont really mind it,its good and funny)

Choke, cough from all the smoke, I'm tryina' stay on fire
So you know if I hate fucking water sprinklers I don't love the hoes (this is a good one really,hes tryna stay on fire (good) so he doesnt bother with hoes(girls) to distract him,and we have the water sprinklers/hose one)

Came back to annihilate, the game is in dire straits (dire straits means its in a bad time or something)

Can never be no damn wuss, no pussy, never mushy, so you can't squish (aweful tbh)

A Kiss:

But I'm ghost before you can even say boo, hun let alone call me one ( :laughing: and very ironic)

tell Lady
Gaga she can quit her job at the post office
She's still a male lady!
wouldnt fuck her with her dick, you heard it, the verdict's in,
he's allergic to divas, he would take meat cleavers to 'em ( :laughing: :laughing: )


Then I'm gonna put this shit in park like dog shit ( :facepalm :facepalm )

Get suckered into this you gonna jump into my truck
And then try to get truculent? (very dope)

Take From Me:

It just feels like I'm so done with this shit I might as well wipe ( :facepalm :facepalm )

Loud Noises:

Life handed me lemons
I jump back into the public eye and squirted lemon juice in it (when u squirt lemon juice it usually hits the eye,i can relate Em but its awkward a little bit)

They told me to shit, I fell off that pot
Hoped right back up on that crapper and I
Said “fuck it” with a capital I (i dont get how those 2 tie but they are kinda :confusion: )

Girl my headspace is limited, ain’t even room in the back of my mind (witty and clever)
The devil ain't on a level same as him!
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Re: Eminem's current wordplay and punchlines.

Postby Slayer661 » Jun 6th, '11, 16:16

Strongly agree and it was a pretty big improvement too. I'm really excited about his next album.
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Re: Eminem's current wordplay and punchlines.

Postby HereHere » Jun 6th, '11, 16:25

Devil'sAdvocate wrote:The Reunion:

tryna fix
Her makeup. I'm like "Bitch, you ain't a plastic surgeon.
I advise ya to put up your visor. I'm getting' kyna ticked.
You're blocking my side mirror!" She's like "Yeah, so?"
"I'm like "So? You gon' need a stitch, you keep acting like that, ho. (didnt notice this until amadeo pointed it out in some thread,its actually kinda clever and doesnt bother or interfere with what hes saying)


What's the punchline here?
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Re: Eminem's current wordplay and punchlines.

Postby classthe_king » Jun 6th, '11, 16:55

Those are not good at all....
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Re: Eminem's current wordplay and punchlines.

Postby OMEGA » Jun 6th, '11, 16:57

Lello wrote:tbh I'm not a big fan of em's current worldplay and punchlines, but he's improving song by song, atleast he ain't pissin happy meals off anymore hahahah

Anyways, he'll never do anything close to what he did back in the day, such as:

-Doc told me I need a change in sickness, so i gave a bitch herpes in exchange for syphliss
-Put a bulletproof vest on and shoot myself in the head
etc...

damn the wit of those days ^


though enough reminiscing on the past, currently, i've noticed em's worldplay has improved from the post-recovery features he had, good sings of what's to come


Hmmmmm, those lines do not sound either "witty" or "funny" or clever to me.

This on the other hand:


diabolical, till the last molecule, down to my last hair folicle and cuticle
rotten to the core, to the bunghole all the way down to my sock and the hair on my toe
:worship:
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Re: Eminem's current wordplay and punchlines.

Postby Heffernan » Jun 6th, '11, 17:36

best line on the whole CD

before i let another rapper think hes hot, ill bury my head in a stinky twat and go ALALALALALALLA
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Re: Eminem's current wordplay and punchlines.

Postby Slayer661 » Jun 6th, '11, 17:55

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Re: Eminem's current wordplay and punchlines.

Postby Master Chief » Jun 6th, '11, 20:45

Menzo wrote:I'm extremely pleased with the lyrics on this EP - even if his worst punch was the park/dog shit or the shit/wipe one, I still enjoyed them.

I will never forgive him for the shit/wipe punchline. Never :'(
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Re: Eminem's current wordplay and punchlines.

Postby OMEGA » Jun 6th, '11, 20:50

What's wrong with the shit/wipe punchline?

He's done with the shitting (he's done with the rap game), so he might as well wipe (give his farewell and be done with it). :y:
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Re: Eminem's current wordplay and punchlines.

Postby slimsoxshady » Jun 6th, '11, 20:51

"ambush" wordplay in Above the Law is very good
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Re: Eminem's current wordplay and punchlines.

Postby classthe_king » Jun 6th, '11, 20:52

Omega wrote:What's wrong with the shit/wipe punchline?

He's done with the shitting (he's done with the rap game), so he might as well wipe (give his farewell and be done with it). :y:


Because it's corny as fuck. Jesus, some people have the lowest standard for music ever when it comes to Eminem.
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Re: Eminem's current wordplay and punchlines.

Postby Innovation » Jun 6th, '11, 20:53

classthe_king wrote:
Omega wrote:What's wrong with the shit/wipe punchline?

He's done with the shitting (he's done with the rap game), so he might as well wipe (give his farewell and be done with it). :y:


Because it's corny as fuck. Jesus, some people have the lowest standard for music ever when it comes to Eminem.


I'm not the biggest fan of that either, but it's an opinion dude. Leave it as that.
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Re: Eminem's current wordplay and punchlines.

Postby xxTrigger1989xx » Jun 6th, '11, 20:55

"Hey, look everyone, I'm classthe_king and I give a fuck about what everyone thinks about Eminem, even though I don't like him anymore."
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Came back to annihilate, the game's in dire straights, as I await
Word on Satan, as I drop, fall to my knees before this Quija board and I pray
Now I lay me down to sleep
I do this shit in my sleep, I’m sleepin' now, imagine if I awake


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Re: Eminem's current wordplay and punchlines.

Postby Master Chief » Jun 6th, '11, 20:55

xxTrigger1989xx wrote:"Hey, look everyone, I'm classthe_king and I give a fuck about what everyone thinks about Eminem, even though I don't like him anymore."

Someone please make a meme out of this. Please.

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Re: Eminem's current wordplay and punchlines.

Postby classthe_king » Jun 6th, '11, 20:56

"Hey, look everyone, I'm xxTrigger1989xx and everytime I see Class post I begin bleeding profusely out of my vagina and spin into a spiraling rage."
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