Lello wrote:rhyming is not everything, lyrics (words) are more important, I'd take Beautiful over any song after Refill.
Even Going Through Changes and 25 To Life?
Lello wrote:rhyming is not everything, lyrics (words) are more important, I'd take Beautiful over any song after Refill.
Lello wrote:I like it more than them, but those tracks are one of the few 2010 em tracks I actually love
Lello wrote:I was negating Master Chief's saying that N9na is one of the FEW who are able to beat new em on a track
FreeDoom wrote:lello was right tbh. hundreds of rappers would drop a better verse than Eminem nowadays. Sadly he made the mistake of saying it on a Eminem forum.....
momentsgolden wrote:By Innovation's logic, If I Had is LAZY rhyming and a bad track because it uses the Word I alot.
Master Chief wrote:Anyone who believes that Beautiful is better than Deja Vu, Going Through Changes or 50% of Recovery is insane. Lazy rhyming
Innovation wrote:The If I Had comparison isn't accurate at all for what I was trying to point out. I wasn't complaining about him using a word a lot of times. I was simply stating that him using "back up" at the end of the line three times as apart of rhyme scheme is lazy.
FreeDoom wrote:lello was right tbh. hundreds of rappers would drop a better verse than Eminem nowadays. Sadly he made the mistake of saying it on a Eminem forum.....
Master Chief wrote:Lello wrote:I was negating Master Chief's saying that N9na is one of the FEW who are able to beat new em on a track
Eminem CAN be bested on a track. So could the Old Em. Scary Movies and She's The One anyone? Revelation? When The Music Stops? He didn't get killed like he did on Fast Lane but Royce & Proof did better on their respective songs. Name one tracks where Eminem has been killed as badly as he did on Fast Lane? Yeah
momentsgolden wrote:On If I Had he uses it at the START of the whole song so the position of using the words is the problemI'm neither here or there about either rhymes but there seems to be an inconsistent way of rating complexity/effort in your valuations.
momentsgolden wrote:@Freedoom Actually, no. Eminem was on "The Anthem" in '99 at the PEAK of his powers and people still to this date debate who stole that show. From common consensus, Krs-1 had the best... at least at the time.
People always say Eminem ethered Jay Z on Renegade but its only because Nas said so. jay held his own.
As Master Chief pointed out, Eminem would have inferior verses alot on D12 tracks (When the Music stops for example) and we all know none of those guys is AMAZING
Royce held his own and even bettered Eminem (at least some people reasonably believe so) on old BME tracks
People still argue Biggie had the Better verse on Dead Wrong
So, no, your assertion that Eminem never COMPETED with other rappers in his prime is wrong. Truth is, like Royce said, when someone raps at a certain level, its all a matter of opinion and preference.
Now, @Innovation- how is that irrelevant? Its using YOUR judgement of lazy rhyming and applying it across the board so as to see if its objectively true or a subjective application of opinion. To answer your question, no, i dont think its lazy rhyming. Its not lyrical greatness by any means but the repetition of a word is consistently used for emphasis and that is what the whole track is about. It serves its purpose.
Lello wrote:@DA, first of all yes em did have better vocabulary, em now fill's his rhyming and bars with cusses when he has nothing to say, and most of the time none of his sentences are cohesive.
Shit Flow, is that horrible flow em has now, what else is their to be explain? flow can't be explained why it's good or not.
Fucked Up Strcuture:
the rhymes are inserted at random places, no organisation in the verses, in the same verse instead of:
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his sentences became like this:
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with the pauses to fill in the gasp of words or the unessecary cuss here and there.
B.o.B was not fuckin generic, he had great verses, the reason why eminem didn't take it, was cause b.o.b's verses were better
and about punchlines, first of all, a punchline should NOT be based on a corny subject, what the punchline is about affects it's quality
"I'll piss a happy meal off" that's the equivalent of a child saying: i will turn your happy face into a sad one
Worldplay is essential in a punch, it all depends on what words you are playing.
And the type of punchline: xxxxx in other words yyyyyy, is lame, just as lame as the young money type of punchline, i'll xxxx - something related to x (i'll kill your mama - orphan)
shock value increases in the quality of a punchline but it's not always necessary.
example of a punchline I love from new em (from underground): cut your fucking head off and ask where your headed off too, get it? headed off too? (witty, shock value, funny, and good)
How is a good punchline delivered? --> question makes absolutley no sense. if you got the right type of punchline with good wordplay, it's a good punchline, what does delivery have to do with it? delivery affects the quality of a song not of a punchline
(though yelling out the part you want noticed does take it down a notch, she' still a MALE .... LADY!!! though i like the punch)What do you have against the recovery tracks you dont like bar Not Afraid? What is their biggest flaw?
do them individually if you please.
Do them individually? like I got the time to go and disscet every line of every track @12:30 am, just to argue with you about it? lol
as a whole:
-Big quantity of punchlines, most of them not that good
-Horrible Delivery (shouting) and bad flow and bad structure
-Gay beats & features
-Bad execution of the tracks (except some great ones though)
lol @u thinkin i give a flyin fuck enough to waste my time on this
and chief, I dodn't know that by fast laned you ment completley humiliate, I thought it just ment outshined, and Em was better on scarymovies IMO
Lello wrote:em should not use big words from the dictionary, he just needs to know how to form sentences again.
Lello wrote:did I say EVERY song?
Lello wrote:he just needs to know how to form sentences again.
Lello wrote:most of the time yes, but doesn't apply to every song
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