Zip And A Double Cup Remix

[classthe_king]

Now, if you want to listen to only my verse I put it first so that you could do that. Now, if you could leave me some constructive (I emphasize that word) criticism for the other two rappers, that would be fantastic. I'm trying to teach them, slowly. I murked it btw


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[B.A.D.]

I dont really think your style fits these beats you have been using... the mixing is not bad, but you sound extra from the beat, like not a part of this song... I like your flow a lot, but hmm... sounds like there's a Punch-In in there... be carefull with those cuz it could kill all you bring to the track, specially on songs like this... Idk how to say it makes you loose the "thing" u know what I mean. other than that, nice way to structure the lyrics... hot shit.

the dude on the second verse is nice, looks very controlled and confrotable and his mixing is spectacular, sounds actually like on a booth... sounds very true. I liked it. a bit wack on the lyrics but I like the style.

verse 3, is hmm.. ok... same thing on the mixing as you. but yeah, def needs practice.

I think your verse was the best due to the fact you bring more than the rest, but you need to watch our for those things considering what kind of ambience you bring to the table.

dope non-the less

[Tornado]

I agree with Ax about your style not fitting your beat selection, not that the beat is bad but i felt i would enjoy your verse in particular more on a different beat, although you do sound comfortable on this as your flow and delievery is ace. I'm pretty sure there were Punch-Ins, maybe mixing wise you'd need to mask it better so it feels like one constant verse and not stop start cause it ruins the flow of the song abit.

2nd Verse guy's mixing was excellent, crisp nice sound but honestly i felt his verse was boring, lyrically simplistic and nothing really exciting. More of a matter of taste though because there was no real fault with his verse if you like that style

3rd Verse, generally i felt the vocal mix was too loud, quality weren't as good as the others and i felt he was like the guy in the 2nd Verse except there was hardly any energy in his delievery, sounding bored. Feels like he needs most practice

Overall, if this was just your track, i mighta liked it more but can't say it was that great.

[classthe_king]

Thanks for all the the feed, I only used one punch in though and I mixed every verse the same