Da Palace Diss

[Ivy]

A long time ago, like in 03', I was trying to rap and shit, didn't work out, but I tried. And some guys kept getting on me for trying, saying I need to give up. So I wrote this load of bullshit, and they stopped. I don't see it as good, but hey, they stopped and I was proud.


Corny lame ass rhymes is what the HATAS on Da Palace drop//
TR quit holdin' ya dick, ya need to quit mistakin' it for ya 22 pistol glock//
We're lyrical enough to beat you and Da Mafia, hands tied down//
If ya see a shootin' star, that's ya man flyin' down to that ground//
Da Mafia, how bout' lost Omens, who have no idea where their goin'//
I'll drown ya whole crew in the Niagra, and you still ain't gonna be flowin'//
You neva came ova to tha game, ya falldwon like Pez Candy that doesn't dispence//
Claim to be able to compare on our level, but ya can't even jump a 4 foot fence//
Mind runnin' to slow for this complexity?, our words your unable to analyze//
Our punches flow hard compared to ya finga flicks, leavin' ya disordered and paralyzed//
If Urchyn is tha masta, then so is anyone with 14 posts or higher//
We the Gods of "Tha Game", we're alive and fully wired//
You've got to crack tha code, so you can know what level we're truly displaying//
Wonna get past what we're saying, to the intellect we're portraying//
Ya'll rankin' in class 2, vote for crew, then ride their dick//
We failed this class, but ya'll took an "A" home in this//
Tow shots, plus two rocks, and two blocks, equal tha fack you finished//
We'll subract seven from that just to keep you deminished//
B~P~G's raps rip you up and leave you messed ~ with ~ ease//
After all ya battles and ya votes, all tha voters gonna have to check for STDs//
If ya'll fonny ass rappers consider yourselves "Tha Greatest" emcees//
Then "Tha Rap Game" would fit Justin Timberlake and Nsync//
I'm glad you applied to "Tha Game", but its's our job to let you know:Your rhymes are denied//
Not even worthy of family guys, these herbs are just anotha rockstar, they rhymes in disguise//
So audio is not an option for Da Mafia, ya give into textstyle//
Then get a job in the real world, cause everbody in your crew just got exiled//
There'll be a carcus the way we're tossing knives just to blind side ya'll from both sides//
We'll straight out dominate ya'll, like Prince in those cold tights//
This crew'll copy our rymes word for word like their writing documentaries//
We battling in the streetz live, while they wont even be a textyle tournament entry//
Ya'll dont want beef, our shi* is "Lean Quisine" in under 30 seconds//
Ya'll wanna be vets, you still ain't even a probable battle contestent//
We'll make your rhymes stop going unquestioned and cut sections out your small intestants//
Can anybody help them with there comfused rhyme style, cause there now taking suggestions//
We've beaten hundreds of wonnabe's, so 6 in one gets easily layed out//
We gonna do like an audio diss track, and let your faggot asses just fade out//

[Ivy]

lol nice diss . You kicked their ass Taylor

I guess for a rookie and for a girl's level, but shhh, I didn't admit that

[ThomasAguanis]

Da Mafia, how bout' lost Omens, who have no idea where their goin'//
I'll drown ya whole crew in the Niagra, and you still ain't gonna be flowin'//

i liked those 2 lines the best that alone probally shut them up.
you probally embarrassed them when they claimed to be better than you because you were better in the end

you should start battling again
you're really good

[Ivy]

I would, but I don't believe in doing only text. You're only a real battler if you do it in real life and not just through a screen and on paper. You know?!?

[ThomasAguanis]

I would, but I don't believe in doing only text. You're only a real battler if you do it in real life and not just through a screen and on paper. You know?!?

hmm do you mean like record?
because not everyone can battle in person since they may not know anyone else who battles or even raps

[Ivy]

I just don't have the voice or the life to be able to rap. A girl who grew up, not in the suburbs, but in the middle class you has money and doesn't have to worry about that, they really wouldn't be accepted. Atleast, I don't think so...

[ThomasAguanis]

it shouldn't matter where you grew up or how much money you had/have
it should only be based on skill and there are people who just do text rapping wether it's on paper or online and if its battling or just writing songs for the hell of it.
hmm what i'm trying to say that is if you're good at rapping(even if its just writing..which you are) than you should rap/write and become better than you already are..even if its just for fun

[Ivy]

it shouldn't matter where you grew up or how much money you had/have
it should only be based on skill and there are people who just do text rapping wether it's on paper or online and if its battling or just writing songs for the hell of it.
hmm what i'm trying to say that is if you're good at rapping(even if its just writing..which you are) than you should rap/write and become better than you already are..even if its just for fun

True, I might do it every now and then, but I won't make a hobby out of it. Thanks for the encouragement Tom Means a lot.

[ThomasAguanis]

True, I might do it every now and then, but I won't make a hobby out of it. Thanks for the encouragement Tom Means a lot.

ok but you never know..you just might do it every now and then and then get back into it and hooked on rap haha
thats basically why i'm rapping now...i came here and tried because when i rapped in frot of my friends they just laughed and made fun of me but i came here and FORDIE said i had potential so i kept doing it and eventually got into it and didnt care what others thought and kept doing my own thing. and i saw a massive improvement in myself and i know if you keep trying than you'll improve very fast because you're already great now and better than 3/4th of the people here now and probally get hooked into it and make it a hobby haha

well good luck with future writing..i know it'll be great whenever it happens and am looking foward to it