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Love

Postby Ivy » Apr 27th, '06, 01:26

The Past few months have been nothing but a lie
I'd say I would forget him and lye in bed and cry
I couldn't erase him from my memory as hard as I tried
I had the chance, I grasped it, and contacted my baby
He's forever on my mind, and all I've been thinking of lately
This isn't a mistake no if's, but's, and's, or maybe's
It's destiny that we're crossing paths again together
We love each other and it's going to be forever
I'd sacrafice everything to be in your arms right now or today
When we seperated you left my heart in disaray
I longed to be with you and craved the touch of your lips
We'll do whatever it takes to be with each other agaisnt our parents
Ever since the day we parted my life just hasn't been the same.
Now that your back my emotions I can barely tame
The self-control I've grown into can't be maintained
The mistakes I've made formed a new me, for the knowledge I've gained
The love that I have for him I could never explain
No one could understand the real me, but all that's changed
You've given me the chance to make the wrongs, right
We can get trough our disagreements and resolve every fight
We somehow see the light through the neverending darkness
I will love that boy til' they day my soul is layed to rest
I tried to be everything, pretended to be something I' not
But you see right through me, and we'll be here, cause we're all we got
I just wanted to take sometime and let you know how I feel
You're my only one, I love you baby, and this time it's a done deal

A friend asked me to write this for her a few weeks ago. So I did. Comments welcome. Hope everyone enjoys all the work I've been posting.
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"My life your entertainment, you watch it while I live it. I walk they folla (ay), I talk they holla (ay), just here for your amusement. My life your entertainment. you watch it while I live it. You waitin' for me to lose it, I guess I'm just here for your amusement..." ~ T.I. feat. Usher "My Life Your Entertainment"
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Postby > Evil _ MoNkEy < » Apr 27th, '06, 08:53

:loudcry: this is just.... u know... i mean.... :'(

i want my baby! this shit aint fair!


pretty poem by the way..... i can relate to it in more ways than one...... :(
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Postby ines » Apr 27th, '06, 08:58

so sweet taylor
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Postby Ivy » Apr 27th, '06, 20:14

:oops: Thanks everybody. Your comments want me to keep on striving and to keep posting my work. Thanks :toocool:
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"My life your entertainment, you watch it while I live it. I walk they folla (ay), I talk they holla (ay), just here for your amusement. My life your entertainment. you watch it while I live it. You waitin' for me to lose it, I guess I'm just here for your amusement..." ~ T.I. feat. Usher "My Life Your Entertainment"
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