Phantom-Pyramid

[Phantom]

song about how i feel life is a pyramid and im on the bottom. let me know your thoughts and ill return the feed no problem.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page_so ... D=10888604




link of feed:http://www.forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=38&t=118504&p=1707146#p1707146

[Solace]

This is really excellent, great work.

[Scrubz]

sick shit. You lyricism is great dude, best on this site by far. Everything was perfect cpt the ending though you over played it a bit to much. You over lays are clean and vocals are loud and crisp, still trying to achieve that my self.
9/10

check out my newest drop!

[Tash8]

this is a great song man, I like your delivery its definitely changed a bit from the last time I heard you. Hook was real sick.. Good job

[BumShiv]

damn bro this is SICK your overlayed vocals and voice are great. Your lyrics and breathing technique are great 2. I really liked the rap rock feel to it. keep up the great work bro and look foard to hearing more .

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[randomghost]

amazing shit bro! its been a while mayne! missin ur stuff! the west coast is back haha overall nicetrack...beat is fuckin sexyyyyyyyy! amazing flowwww with the beat..delivery is nice....good stuff bro...btw am orignally Egyptian one love for them pyramids

[Phantom]

sick shit. You lyricism is great dude, best on this site by far. Everything was perfect cpt the ending though you over played it a bit to much. You over lays are clean and vocals are loud and crisp, still trying to achieve that my self.
9/10

check out my newest drop!

i agree with u about the ending. only thing i can say is that the beat was like that and long but i totally see where ur coming from. i was gonna loop it cus the verse is like 24 bars and like 16 for the hook or something but it was a weirdly structured beat. but thanks alot for the comments. everyone else, the feed is greatly appreciated.

[B.A.D.]

I dont like the beat too much, its well made and very pro... but agh... sounds very wanna be-ish, idk how to explain... but not for me

your quality is beautifull.... so is the hook, but its too lond, I think it could be amazing if you made this a full song. But yeah man, you dont really need feedback this is just gonna be opinions. but you are there man... start to cash in

[Phantom]

thank you ax, if the beat was different i would have tried to put in a second/third verse but i dont think it wouldve sounded correct. and as for your comment on the beat, all i can say is i obviously did like it lol but i didnt make it so i cant really comment on it. i did fix the volume of the hook a little bit after i made a 2nd mix and i agree that its a little loud. thanks for your always detailed feedback man, means a lot to me and im sure it means a lot to everyone else. i believe another collab from us is way overdue

[StoneyLodge]

Beat made me came. Also good work on the flow, it was pretty enjoyable.

[Phantom]

thanks for the listen stoneylodge