balls lock this or something lolz

[Ka0t1c]

what the fuck's your problem Ka0tic, if you have nothing constructive to say G.T.F.O.

Like I always tell you, I love the style and again the voice fits the beat perfectly, the hook is absolutely marvelous, but the verse not so much, sounds like you had some trouble flowing it, I suggest you try re-recording it, but the lyrics and structure are great. fucking beautiful

I suggest making your verse longer aswell

i didn't wanna come off as a dick but at the time i felt that this piece wasn't worth posting, however, i added my feedback, now keep away ax-d

[Solace]

work on your words, try to up your vocab and maybe throw some strong multies also, more lines.

It's a snippet, I have an entire song written out, so 'more lines' isn't helpful. This song is partly about a break up I'm going through, I've never believed technicalities such as multies and vocab in rap should be forced into something of this sort (though I do believe it's much more than sufficient considering I have even a 6 syllable multi couplet and no one is going to be pretentious in a song like this other than Canibus). Thanks, at least this time it's constructive. I don't really see how this wasn't worth posting considering I have a 3 minute song of this but wanted to get feedback before I complete it. Everything is purely for my benefit, and not for your listening pleasure.

[Ka0t1c]

my bad bout the snippet part, but you need something that sticks out in the song that grabs the listeners ear, maybe the way you express it on audio, like your attitude, maybe vary it somewhat.

[Solace]

No one's actually commented on the attitude, so thanks again

[Kez]

The verse was awesome, nothing to really fault. But I thought the chorus sounded a bit too bland, like there aint enough emotion going into it especially considering the beat. You fixed that on the verses but the hook, not so much.

Sounds promising though.

[Solace]

Kez complimented the verse That's crazy, 'cause the way I've seen it so far most people like the chorus a lot and think the verse is blegh. Thanks for checking it Kez.

Also, I've scrapped the song as I've switched my priorities to another song of a similar concept, and just reused a lot of the lyrics in this as another verse in the new track. So if any beginner here wants to just use the chorus to give it some use that'd be cool.

[B.A.D.]

Also, I've scrapped the song as I've switched my priorities to another song of a similar concept, and just reused a lot of the lyrics in this as another verse in the new track. So if any beginner here wants to just use the chorus to give it some use that'd be cool.

dope man, can't wait for that one then

[Solace]

I feel as though I actually have someone that cares about my tracks

[Instant Legend]

this track fuckin SCREAMS potential. beat is awesome, really like the control you have over your voice, you've got some memorable lines in here

production is clean

im diggin it

return the favor please

viewtopic.php?f=38&t=121587

[Solace]

Forgot about this!

this track fuckin SCREAMS potential. beat is awesome, really like the control you have over your voice, you've got some memorable lines in here

production is clean

im diggin it

return the favor please

viewtopic.php?f=38&t=121587

I'll feed that tonight, the features look EXTREMELY promising, thanks for commenting!

You got a lot of potential, I prefer this to a lot of music. It relates to me at some point. Powerful snippet, I'd dig a full version

I love hearing I have potential Well I'm glad you can relate, that's the key to music. I'd dig a full version too but I scrapped this so sorry mang. Props for taking your time to check it out.

[Solace]

Doesn't anyone see the clear "Scrapped"

Thanks for checking Geno, I'm glad you think that I know what I'm doing (I really don't lmao)

[Tash8]

i'm upset you didn't finish this track, had a lot of potential...your quality is nice though

[Solace]

Oh yeah..I did see that, but I kinda forgot by the time I posted.

Oh well lolol

i'm upset you didn't finish this track, had a lot of potential...your quality is nice though

Didn't know I was on Tash's radar Lol my quality is nice, well thanks. Never thought I'd get that compliment.

For the fuck of it, I got MC Anonymous on the 2nd verse and PK on the bridge of this track. So technically, it'll get finished. Also hope you like some track I got with 2 other artists coming in a few days.