Eminememy wrote:EminemBase wrote:When at his best, he's pretty much the best in every department.
Rhyming, flow, structure, delivery... everything.
But when he's bad? or questionable? well, it's really only the subject-matter that bothers me. He's never been really bad for me, in basically any department.
On Encore he was just lazy, and fucking around. But when he put effort in ("Evil Deeds", "Mosh", "Crazy In Love") he was still good. Not as good, but some great high points, and very consistent. And even at his worst he's often better than a lot of over-rated so called greats.
I'd say his major flaw content wise is self-obsession. Most rappers are self-obsessed but I think he takes the cake in that department. And it's a shame, as now at least... I feel it's a waste of his talent. Think of how ingeniously he can analyze OTHER people as well ("Bully"). So imagine him dedicated to looking OUTSIDE of himself...
It would open up a whole new world and he could practically have a whole new career of excellence. People only sound tired when they keep trying to re-invent the same thing.
And whilst he's always able to successfully create new styles (amazing that he's still finding ways after seven solo albums) - he keeps circulating the same subjects. He finds new ways to talk about the subjects, or put new spins on them, but tales of self woes have become more than tired.
"Mosh" is a great example of him applying his talent to write about something worth writing about, other than himself. And he shines on it. I consider "Mosh" excellent and that was him at his LOWEST point. Imagine if he had decided to write it in 2002.
That's basically the only thing that seriously frustrates me about him. I loved the Relapse style(s) and I love the shouting style. I've only had a problem with the shitty production that is still continuously ruining potential classic songs. But when he utilizes the shouting to the max like on the "Fame" (D12) verse, or in particular "Above the Law", it's like cocaine. So satisfying.
I wish that he'd do repeated rhyme schemes more too, like on "Fame". It sounds brilliant.
So yeah, every time I hear him spit another verse about sporadic shit, mock mysoginy, his past or present status again, it fucking annoys me.
He also treats music too formulaic I think. This works for him when it comes to lyrics and consistency but when making songs, it now works against him. He should be experimenting more as he sticks to this VERSE 1 / CHORUS / VERSE 2 / CHORUS / VERSE 3 / CHORUS structure constantly. I wish he was like Kanye and just asked "why not?" about every element of song making, fucked with choruses and ideas and had inflated, grandeur ambitions.
Think about the amount of song possibilities. Everybody thinks so small and is so lame. Why not just make a 'stream of consciousness' song - fuck sense, fuck logic, fuck 'rules' within rap, fuck sensibility, fuck perception, just let thoughts fly and flow and make it into a cohesive piece of music. Just experiment like this, the possibilities and exciting potential, is endless.
You could make a song called "Confusion" for example and have it be on the topic of confusion, dig into your own and the world's psyche, rap sporadically and manically about politics, the economy, rap music, consciousness, people, society etc. etc. - everything and how it's confusing and tie it into a theme. Treat songs like movies, be totally extreme and try to make the greatest record of your life every time you do it. It annoys me he, or nobody I can think of, thinks like that. Literally try to embody confusion in your execution and the song's beat and structure etc.
I mean even Kanye, yeah he's amazingly ambitious with the production and sometimes he ventures into interesting territory with a line or two but generally speaking it's just: love, money, himself and public perception, bragging, rapping about what he's done etc. it's so fucking lame and repetitive. Think of what petty fucking thinking that is... I just don't get why there basically hasn't been a single rapper that's thought outside of this. I know there are probably tons of very experimental hip hop acts, underground, that I haven't heard or that are more in this area, but even from the more experimental I've briefly glanced at... it's still rooted and formed in a basic structure.
The Marshall Mathers LP was sheer genius due to it being a live provocation on which he assumed that the world was listening, it's a concept record in a sense, it's the only significant dedication to a grand and daring concept I've ever seen in rap. I've heard plenty of daring and exciting LINES, but they're just lines... within basic songs, about basic things.
I don't get why rappers think of creative lines but not creative song ideas. It's so fucking endless, people think so formulaic and realistic. / rant.
I wanna pick your brain cause I would really want to experiment by I can't think of anything... :/
Soooo what would YOU do for a new format.
Maybe something along the lines of Verse 1/Verse 2/Verse 3 with a hook playing in the background? I can't see a song getting big without a hook and record companies would never except something without a hook unless it sell better. Plus, the only kind of verbal formats that exist are hooks, bridges, and verses. Or are you thinking simpler outside of creating a unknown style such as..
Hook/Verse 1/Hook/Verse 2/Bridge/Verse 3/Hook? That would however be the Airplanes Part 2 format which is less used but common enough.
You're still thinking within the formats you know, as if there's rules.
Music is art. There are NO rules in art, throw everything that has ever been done out the window and do everything exactly how you want to do and push it to the extreme, and you will create something that is truly unique.
You could have a song that is say ten minutes long, with multiple hooks that come in at various times, then you could play off each hook - you could make each little hook some kind of wordplay that inspires the next tangent of lyricism...
And you could record different styles and place them all closely together within the song, and just make it a rhyming exhibition say. Challenge yourself to rhyme as many words as humanely possible, no subject-matter, no rules, and you could make it feel live... as in... stop somewhere in the middle of writing and write the next lines in a different style that are responses to the previous lyrics.
So the end result could be this big, exhilarating lyrical conversation that bounces between styles, surprises you at every turn, boggles minds with the amount of styles and sounds erratic and exciting in the execution, with voices all over the place... and you could even have the beat change up to fit the style and then go back, make it bizarre. And call it "Schizophrenia".
And on from that, you could make a song called... "Bipolar" and try to embody the mental disorder with the music and lyrics. You could make it perhaps, a conceptual, fictional 'airing' of your thoughts. So don't even acknowledge the song, the listener or the fact it's a track anywhere in the lyrics, write complex, psychological lyrics that sound as if they're realistic thoughts that are just spilling everywhere...
It could be say, two very long verses with a huge orchestra of madness in the middle as a chorus to capture the mood instability and madness. The music could be dark and menacing... the first verse could be the mania... so it starts off happy, so the lyrics would be egotistic and emphasized, constant tangents and mock philosophy, business ideas etc. then you would write the lyrics to start to logically go towards the negative, for the second verse.
As they become more negative the music gets more dramatic, the orchestrated, epic chorus kicks in and you just have vocal recordings of morphed thoughts in between the sounds, then the second verse = depression. So then you totally embody and express the darkest, deepest and most extreme and sincere depressive thoughts and lyrics humanely possible, obviously it'd be better if they got worse as they went. Then the end of the song - you kill yourself.
But the lead up to it could be epic, like a movie.
Another idea... you could write a song where you begin to storytell about a lyricist / rapper / artist, describing each detail lyrically more and more, the life of the aritst, his ambitions etc. then as the song progresses you could realize (in the song / lyrics) that you're talking about yourself. But then even when you realize, act as if you can't stop, and write lyrics that comment on what you're saying in the song, as you're actually saying it...
And go insane on the song because of it. Kind of like a musical Stranger Than Fiction or something. That idea could be played around with and maximized well.
I wish I could use Eminem as a puppet and just create what I wanted with his talents. Or, imagine creating opera rap. Imagine taking a fast, manic, dazzling Mozart or Bach symphony, turning it into a hip hop production (a grand, thumping, rich, deep production) and having Em rap a ridiculously detailed first person, crazy as fuck murder tale or fantasy on it.
As the symphony gets more manic the details get more gruesome and the story climaxes in insane ways, he could work wonders with that.
Such a fucking waste. Instead? non-stop dick puns and mock misogyny. Brilliant. I've never seen a single artist truly reach their potential or dig deep and abstract and think TOTALLY outside of the box. Not just 'yeah that's pretty original' or 'cool', I mean, just... throwing every rule out the fucking window and creating pure magic. Kanye is certainly trying now, with My Beautiful Dark Twisted Fantasy... "Hell of a Life" is one of his better ideas. That's more like the kind of thing he should be doing, it's true art.. he just had an idea and ran with it. And commited to it.
As for labels and hits etc. - fuck all of that. If I was an artist that wouldn't enter my mind for a second. If they wont let you do exactly what you want? just be independent. And if you can't make enough money from it, make money from something else but still do the music / art exactly how you want it. Art is not worth compromising, even a TINY bit, for money.
I'd rather be broke and creating things that I pour my every thought and ounce of effort into and that I think could potentially change the face of music rather than creating shit, compromised, formatted music that is more like a product. Or even just 'good' music, it's pointless. If you're doing it for the money, or hits, you're not doing it for very good reasons.
And Em has absolutely zero excuse. He's rich as fuck and doesn't need hits. Firstly, he has all the power - not only does he have his own label, but if Interscope or Jimmy try to 'force' him to make X hit or do whatever, he can just say "okay, it's either my way, or I quit

So really, he can do whatever the fuck he likes. And in some senses he does, you can tell he isn't compromising his thoughts. But he's definitely looking to appeal to people and he clearly tried to fit in with Recovery. I don't really think that was the label making him do it though, I think he just likes to be liked and couldn't handle the criticism of Relapse. So wanted mainstream praise.
I can't believe he seriously thinks he's gonna shock anybody or surprise anybody with any single thought he can think up now. Not a fucking chance. When he was new and morons were tying to figure out if he was joking or actually like that, that's why it worked. Now? no way, nothing will. Unless it's something genuinely racist or deeply offensive which he isn't joking about. Which is just pointless, he's more than a silly shock artist.
So he should forget choking bitches and dissing pop stars now. Whilst on occasion, such as "Almost Famous", he takes it to beautiful heights, and I fucking love that track but overall, he should be thinking a lot bigger. Fuck lines, fuck formats. Just forget it all, let your mind open up and see what's inside it, if I was in his shoes, it's NOW when I'd be doing the craziest, most experimental ideas I could possibly think of.
As he has the respect, the legacy, he's rich for life and has the freedom to do what he likes. Even if the label dropped him, if all he's doing it for is the music, he could just fucking put it out on the Internet, who cares. As long as people hear it. And he's so huge he could have a career like that too, and probably still have no.1 hits from his fucking bedroom.
Now that he has all this attention back on him and he's huge, I'd totally flip the page now and try to create groundbreaking material that outshines anything anybody has ever done. And whilst you'd assume that's always his intention... clearly it's not. He seems to treat songs like jobs, like 'okay done X kind of song, let's do Y kind of song'. You don't have to balance fuck all, you can do what you like, if you wanna do 20 songs about one thing do it. The more extreme the better as the more extreme it is, the more different and unique it is.