[Bum Shiv]- Cooldown-(Future/Hip Hop)

Website · by **BumShiv** » Aug 10th, '11, 03:18

New Beat I made :happy:

please leave any type of feedback and i will def do the same.

Youtube-
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2KJzBPYz ... ideo_title

Soundcloud-
http://soundcloud.com/bumshiv/cooldown

by **Slovinec** » Aug 10th, '11, 04:40

I like the structure, but i hate the generic sounds that you have. Try to use maximus or fruity reverb to make it sound more cleaner:) Also use some better drums

or better yet use the ones that come with the studio and resample them. I would keep some hi hats going , instead of a pause, the layout you have now can be for the hook do drop in. Keep it up :y:

Website · by **BumShiv** » Aug 10th, '11, 08:10

iight thanks bro :worship:

i have trouble adding my own drums to samples

any adivice?

by **mdemaz** » Aug 10th, '11, 09:04

Quantize can cut samples so they line up man..Or just download loops.

Website · by **BumShiv** » Aug 11th, '11, 04:18

mdemaz wrote:Quantize can cut samples so they line up man..Or just download loops.

thanks for the feed :y:

and what do you mean? quantizing it didnt do anything for me :unsure:

Website · by **BumShiv** » Aug 11th, '11, 05:35

oh ok

damn wow that advice actually helped alot :y:

thank you

by **Eedee** » Aug 13th, '11, 11:39

I like this one. Yeah, it sounds generic, BUT, if you look at it from another angle, everything is trying to sound different nowadays, so THIS is the different beat. Haha. Nah but seriously, I like this one. Could I write to it and record it? Maybe you could master the vocals a bit and this could be a freestyle? Anyway, keep up the good work dude.

by **Eedee** » Aug 13th, '11, 12:27

Okay. I just wrote to it for 1:43. It was getting WAY too repetitive with the sound, but I think the amount of lyrics/bars I have is enough to sound catchy but not get TOO annoying, so let's stop it at 1:50 and let the beat just play out for a few seconds then end it there. Here are the lyrics and I'll record them ASAP. If you could send me the file or something, that would be great, and I'll just adjust the volume and maybe try my hand at equalizing or something (I'm so inexperienced with mastering and production... I just write the lyrics and record them, really lol) or you could do that job.

This is such a simple beat that I couldn't help but love it! Good work :y:

The verse starts at the first bar when the deep string kicks in. So around 4 seconds.

LYRICS:

Generic is the trend.
Barbaric till the end.
Numeric like the ten,
Atmospheric like the wind.
Eedee grabs the pen,
And spits his shit again.
This time with a twist,
It could be a hit or miss.
Going slow for a change,
Is makin' his brain go WHOA,
I'm feeling so deranged,
This feeling is so strange,
Tearing this paper up,
Daring this baker scrub,
To bake me a fucking cake,
Cuz today I'm makin' a name,
For myself like a proud parent,
Who's child will inherit,
His lyrical skill's hysteric,
That kid's name is Eric.
That happens to be my name,
Damn those trumpets are insane,
Fuck this one syllable shit,
What a killable, dribbleble kid.
Without effort he inks the lines,
Devout expert, instincts are ripe.
Sharp as hell like a knife.
Embarks on a hip hop life,
Remarks are so un-nice,
To the haters who hate his tracks,
Step on a crack and break their backs,
They're motherfuckers so they're pretty much one. (The beat stops for a second during this line. )
Enraged at the fact
that the battle has begun.
Bring a mic to the gun-
fight and light up everyone.
His shit is so ill-matic,
Like a pill bottle to an addict,
His flow is so erratic,
You could swear he's a fanatic,
Girl's crotches are so wet they cling,
Gives another meaning to hydro-static.
I'll haunt you like an attic,
Your shit's old: geriatric.
Probably sick of the same sound.
So I'm ending this shit right now.
Haha. (Just a sort of "For fun" laugh there)

Website · by **BumShiv** » Aug 13th, '11, 19:30

damn bro sick shit :worship:

i really liked your flow :y:

im gonna edit it so it cuts round 1:45 1:50 and pm it to you. I have no experience what so ever at mastering and mixing vocal so i have no idea on how to do it. You cud try or mayb we could get someone else on this forum to do it :y:

by **Eedee** » Aug 13th, '11, 23:31

RecoveryEminem wrote:damn bro sick shit i really liked your flow im gonna edit it so it cuts round 1:45 1:50 and pm it to you. I have no experience what so ever at mastering and mixing vocal so i have no idea on how to do it. You cud try or mayb we could get someone else on this forum to do it

Thanks! Got your message. Will download those soon. Keep up the good work, man! :y:

And I think I'll just play around with it a bit in Audacity. This track is just for fun, so no need for going overboard in mastering, me thinks. Maybe a cool little effect or something. But I'll play around with it for a while.

Website · by **BumShiv** » Aug 13th, '11, 23:52

iight bro thanks :y:

by **Eedee** » Aug 13th, '11, 23:59

RecoveryEminem wrote:iight bro thanks

No problem. Just focus on the MJ beat and I'll fiddle with the Cooldown Freestyle.

by **Eedee** » Aug 14th, '11, 05:51

http://www.looperman.com/tracks_detail.php?tid=115412

I finished it! Mastering isn't the best, but hopefully it doesn't sound cringeworthy!!

This was a fun side project while I worked on my album with my producer. Thanks for this, bud! Nice work! :y:

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