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One of eminems strongest verses in my opinion

Postby notherwise1234 » Aug 22nd, '11, 21:39

Fly away is one of eminems like wow tracks when I heard it I was blown away I highlighted the stuff in blue that made me :worship:

[Eminem - Verse 1]
Got my self esteem back, got my confidence up
I’ma step up on the stage now, I’m gonna strut
And walk around with my pants hanging over my butt

And you aint gotta tell me notin’ boy, get off of my nuts
It goes one for the money, two for the show
My shit don’t stink, I dont think so
Wipe my ass with a tissue and roll it back up in a roll

Are you ready now, here we go
The bald eagle has landed
I’m back in ya hair, sorry for leavin’ you stranded
Im twice as dread and evil and rancid
They cant sit, I don’t think anybody understands it
Especially when the Worlds silly putty in ya hands, its playdough
I aint got to play though,
they say I died in a fatal
Car crash, shows what they know
Shit if I did, it’d be a trailer not a car
The white trash star
I f-ckin RV up like Brett Favre
Homie you got it backwards, your dippin your soup inside ya crackers
I can carry rap til my back hurts
Set it down go right back to the Chiropractors
Get my back right
Now I’m right back on you bastards
I was chasin’ the dragon, I dont know what happened
It was like the feelin’ I had when I first started rappin’
I just could’nt seem to get back and recapture that magic
So I went back to the lab, thats where I’ve been at when…



[Eminem - Verse 2]
I took a hiatus haters now I’m back to cause trouble
Got the f-cking shape of mushroom clouds for thought bubbles
Im the *bang* you aint f-ckin sick
The hospital won’t even give you cough drops for course cocksucker
You think your hot, you aint even luke warm
My pubes hotter than you
Your soft I use fire to cool me off
I told em I’ll grow up one day and show ‘em I’d be able to choke clouds
Pick up lightenin’ bolts and throw ‘em
Take the world by storm with these words I form

Georgie porgie kissed the girls, make the girls cry for em
Make ‘em swarm, make ‘em fight over the shirts I’ve worn
Sworn over my sweat towels, its mind blowin
Yes Im livin’ the dream homie, cant nothin’ compare
I’m so up, I’m stuck in mid air I’m lovin’ it yeah
Its like these people are steps now, all they do is stare
These haters is so p-ssy they’re afraid to be scared
This is pay back, like I owe ‘em back pay
They spat in my face, now I’m back to do them the same exact way
And leave this rap game with a bad taste,
And slap it back out, before I step back out of this crap thanks
Slap me now I’m slapping ‘em back hey! f-ck it we’ll slap back
But yeh okay now we’ll talk cause I’m smack ay
And I aint looking back infact they can stare at my ass crack
How’s that for hindsight, what the track say?
-Dont Feed The Trolls-
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Re: One of eminems strongest verses in my opinion

Postby Tash8 » Aug 22nd, '11, 22:24

Take the world by storm with these words I form
Georgie porgie kissed the girls, make the girls cry for em
Make ‘em swarm, make ‘em fight over the shirts I’ve worn
Sworn over my sweat towels, its mind blowin

his flow is just incredible here.

Idk i just am surprised this song didn't make an album...kinda reminds me of stimulate.
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Re: One of eminems strongest verses in my opinion

Postby JakeBlack » Aug 22nd, '11, 22:35

This would of been a good closing song to Recovery.
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Re: One of eminems strongest verses in my opinion

Postby the real slim shady » Aug 22nd, '11, 22:38

it is a nice verse, but his verse in drop the world was good, and the flow in his first verse of 'without me' is amazing IMO... most people overlook songs like that, but i think its pretty good :y:
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Re: One of eminems strongest verses in my opinion

Postby Devil'sAdvocate » Aug 22nd, '11, 22:47

i find it average. :sweating:
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Re: One of eminems strongest verses in my opinion

Postby Ku53v » Aug 22nd, '11, 22:52

Looks good, I always thought Fly Away was just another shitty leaked song so im yet to hear it
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Re: One of eminems strongest verses in my opinion

Postby Amaranthine » Aug 23rd, '11, 00:04

Devil'sAdvocate wrote:i find it average. :sweating:

I'm not crazy about it either.
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Re: One of eminems strongest verses in my opinion

Postby Mr Change » Aug 23rd, '11, 00:39

Ku53v wrote:Looks good, I always thought Fly Away was just another shitty leaked song so im yet to hear it


Probably the best one of all the leaks.

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"Soon as I stopped saying I gave a fuck
Haters started to appreciate my art
And it just breaks my heart to look at all the pain I caused
But what am I gonna do when the rage is gone?
And the lights go out in that trailer park?"
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Re: One of eminems strongest verses in my opinion

Postby Mr Change » Aug 23rd, '11, 00:49

C.R.E.A.M wrote:
GoinThruChanges wrote:
Ku53v wrote:Looks good, I always thought Fly Away was just another shitty leaked song so im yet to hear it


Probably the best one of all the leaks.

forreal


For me it's Oh No. :rock:


Yeah I might go with Oh No aswell....

But for me, Fly Away is a definite 2nd I can't think of anything else as good as it
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jinofthewind wrote:And Koolo's sources said... Nothing you idiots Koolo's sources are dead they're locked in my basement

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Haters started to appreciate my art
And it just breaks my heart to look at all the pain I caused
But what am I gonna do when the rage is gone?
And the lights go out in that trailer park?"
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Re: One of eminems strongest verses in my opinion

Postby richard » Aug 23rd, '11, 01:43

it's a great song, i don't think em&just blaze will be finishing it though. pretty sure just blaze tweeted that it'd be scrapped because it leaked. which sucks, because it's amazing, and it'll always be overlooked cuz it came out with a bunch of shitty leaks.
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Re: One of eminems strongest verses in my opinion

Postby Matt Holck » Aug 23rd, '11, 01:52

is leaks how the market kills
or refuses to take words seriously?
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Re: One of eminems strongest verses in my opinion

Postby VinniePazienza » Aug 23rd, '11, 05:41

Yeah I really like fly away
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Re: One of eminems strongest verses in my opinion

Postby I'mShady » Aug 23rd, '11, 08:00

This song is tight, no doubt BUT Just Blaze on the chorus :facepalm2
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Re: One of eminems strongest verses in my opinion

Postby Sam. » Aug 23rd, '11, 11:23

Well ,i am not gonna bitch about the hook or w/e ,but definitely one of his those tracks that were dope but not released ..Sigh.

I just found the 1st Verse a little Ehhh ...till the Bald Eagle line comes on .

Last verse is as creative as "Cinderella Man" .
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Re: One of eminems strongest verses in my opinion

Postby ScottMurray » Aug 24th, '11, 14:21

No where near one of his strongest verses, but its an enoyable song :y:
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