The TRshady Forum became read-only in December 2014. The 10 year history will live on, in this archive.
Continue the discussion with the new home for the Eminem and Hip Hop discussion: HipHopShelter.com.

T h e   M i r a c l e

The forum for TRshady family audio songs and albums / mixtapes.

T h e   M i r a c l e

Postby B.A.D. » Aug 23rd, '11, 08:26

YOO

Some of you might know, but for those who don't, I am currently working on a New Album, it will be called "AFTERLIFE" and it will be available for sale around Mid-October (free download only on TR). the first single from the album is called "Evolution" and will also be availbe for sale & free download around
Mid-September. The single is a club track like many of my first singles, but its not the usual shit. Expect a twist from it. :y:
I will post more info soon on The MC Lounge :happy:

------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Here I leave you with my first Promo Track for the album. (if you have serious questions about the subject matter you can PM me)

Image

TITLE: The Miracle
ARTIST: Big Ax-D
PRODUCED BY: Me :y:

http://hulkshare.com/e4aionpy8yx9

(Verse 1)
Too Many Cults have a need to be the life inside you
to many religions and visions see this life has bounds too
they feel the need to lie to you, with the same presition
try to blind you with ambitions before they reach the same position
before they leave builiding its finished business,
stained emitions from Satan's Visions
Whats a God for you, if youre mind's filled with deficience
whats the cost of Love if youre born to witness a Coalition
turn the fitness to convitciton, and convictions to circus shows
fiercely enclosed and youre forced to witness
the death of a Human Being; being judge by their beleifs, it sickenss me
now the plot thickens
what If I told you everythings a lie. even atheism
but you can see the truth's white if you really listen
cuz we're 2 months away from the revelation mission
the coronation's missing, who'se the real King?

(Hook)
I've been in Pain for so Long
I just have to walk the road and save you.. now
The Miracle of Love
Its just another methaphore...
Wait For me....


its all coming full cirlce now

(Verse 2)
have you had any weird dreams lately?
Can you hear him saying, the fear is spraying
the tear is laying on your cheeck, but its fading
well, you didn't live in vein if you came in to the game
if you pray or ain't, if your hard on the paint,
if your smart and your brains can help you puzzle it together
I'll tell you now that everythings a fabrication
an allucination, and your beliefs are imitations of whats real
it could be better if it was up to you right?.. husstling forever
what If i could tell you the exact date you will die
will you walk to the bright?... Just keep your eye to the sky.
Three days with absence of light... earthquakes
then its over.... and its only weeks away.... stay awake mate
cuz if you feel a snowflake in summer then I'm not lying, but its ok.

(Hook)
I've been in Pain for so Long
I just have to walk the road and save you.. now
The Miracle of Love
Its just another methaphore...
Wait For me....


Feedbacklinks:
viewtopic.php?f=38&t=122269
viewtopic.php?f=38&t=122180
User avatar
B.A.D.
Dr.Dre
Dr.Dre
 
Posts: 8908
Joined: Jan 15th, '05, 20:51
Location: Germany/Mexico/Australia
Gender: Male

Re: T h e   M i r a c l e

Postby Tranquil » Aug 23rd, '11, 08:40

:worship: Great track, I have nothing bad to say on it, but this track has kinda got me wondering what your gonna do on the album, I'll be looking out for it man :y: Dope track, 5/5
Image
Straight jacket with a hundred eight brackets, and a strap that wraps twice around my back, then they latch it!
(Formally EminemIsLegend)
User avatar
Tranquil
Renegade
Renegade
 
Posts: 2579
Joined: Dec 29th, '08, 06:26
Location: In your nightmares...
Gender: Male

Re: T h e   M i r a c l e

Postby mdemaz » Aug 23rd, '11, 10:30

SWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG.
Motherfuckers didn't know about that New Millennium Dream shit?
Bitches better recognize breh.

Solid fucken piano shaker snare cruncher bro.
Lyrics are on step and the bars lined up brilliantly.

I also found it cool how you managed to slip in those choir pads in the mix and still keep the vocal mix solid.

The hook could of been better haha, but it's all got that warm compressed feeling to it man.

I'm looking forward to that full-circle shit man.
Afterlife sounds like it's gonna shit all over Die A King.

When did you plan on laying the rest of the joints? Next Month?
October sounds like a good release month though.
ImageImageImage
s/o to Eedee Python CP Horse Snake Pain SaJn Silver Cement Excitaz PK Rolly GW EG Charlotte Kasia Mel Wiz Solace TRex SliK Aone Atone Trimss Menzo Geno Fish Jaba Detroit Blogs Based lil_b IBR DA! Mono ROM NRG Bigray Hesky Francesco Yoda Noddy Raul
Just Silver wrote:I think every guy should massage their prostate at least once

Image
User avatar
mdemaz
Addict
Addict
 
Posts: 10208
Joined: Dec 6th, '10, 12:09
Location: Brisbane, Australia
Gender: Male

Re: T h e   M i r a c l e

Postby Kez » Aug 23rd, '11, 16:09

Oh man this is just brilliance.

The production is just fucking epically eerie. It's got this real dark feel to it and it just pushes all my buttons perfectly. The hook especially is amazing.

The lyrics and content are awesome, I can tell this album's mythos has brought out more unique ideas in you. This is deep shit, and it's a lot like the stuff i've been writing lately. You really put this concept across well; when I do shit like this it just sounds depressing but you make it fuckin catchy to listen to haha. I love it. It just fits awesomly with the "king" theme, I honestly can't wait to hear the album.

I got no real complaints on your flows or anything like that, fits the track fine. Your delivery is great, really captures the feel that you know all this stuff you're talking about in the song and they don't. Doesn't sound the same all the time either, and you keep that half-rapping half-singing thing at times too which i always love.

Hook I have no complaints on, I think it was perfect.

I honestly got no complaints, and I know people will think that's just bias, but nah, I would tell you if there was a critique from me. I just love the track. Fuckin awesome.

That album is gonna be brilliant.
User avatar
Kez
Pill Popper
Pill Popper
 
Posts: 8713
Joined: Jun 1st, '06, 20:04
Location: Japan
Gender: Male

Re: T h e   M i r a c l e

Postby Maybe » Aug 23rd, '11, 18:50

This was different man, at least in comparison to your earlier work. I found the flow pretty damn cool, and the lyrics were interesting to say the least. The beat threw me off at first, but is actually incredibly dope. I'm really feeling this stuff and can't wait for the album.

I can't really say anything was wrong about this song... the whole thing pretty much fit together like a puzzle.
Image
classthe_king wrote:
If you and Siinide don't start recording soon I'm going to fly to where ever you live, tie you up, put the mic in front of your faces and force you to record.
Bronies: Kez, Yoshi, Slimm, Satire, Block, Xray, Dr3, Killa, VenomBlackViper, C.R.E.A.M, SWEET_TOOTH, Fluttershy, Pinkie Pie & all the citizens of Ponyville.
EG. wrote:and i dont even like hot dog
User avatar
Maybe
Soldier
Soldier
 
Posts: 1042
Joined: Mar 12th, '11, 01:20

Re: T h e   M i r a c l e

Postby Tash8 » Aug 23rd, '11, 20:16

beat is dope, but more eerie reverb on the piano would have been nicer. The hook is epic, best part of the song. The lyrics are ok, nice subject though. Psyched to hear you're doing a serious album, but please get better quality by then!
User avatar
Tash8
Addict
Addict
 
Posts: 12522
Joined: Feb 19th, '07, 20:04
Gender: Male

Re: T h e   M i r a c l e

Postby Joel Venom » Aug 23rd, '11, 21:16

i liked the verses for the most part,it was just a little hard to hear what you were actually saying through your accent. but good work. i'd say take off the effect that's on your hook and equalize your vocals a bit more my man.
User avatar
Joel Venom
Trailer Trash
Trailer Trash
 
Posts: 122
Joined: May 4th, '11, 04:04
Location: Raleigh, NC
Gender: Male

Re: T h e   M i r a c l e

Postby B.A.D. » Aug 24th, '11, 05:44

Holy Shit, 85 views in only 1 day. Thanks peeps :worship:

thanks to everyone that listened, its greatly appreciated. Btw, this song is not going to be on the album, its just a promo, pre-lude.

@EminemisLegend.- Thanks my Dude, I appreciate that. Get back to Booth you! :y:

@Mdemaz.- Swag. :worship:

@Sor Mati.- :worship: :worship: :worship: thanks a billion, max-a-million!!!, I appreciate that man, glad you liked it :b:

@Maybe.- haha thanks a lot bro, Glad you liked it and was feelin it :y: :b: :worship:

@Tash.- The rever would've been a good idea, shame I didn't thought of it. Thanks man.. yeah the album has way better quality than this. this song I had some mixing problems actually, but the album is loud & clear, no peaking, no shit like that. :y: :y: thanks for commenting Tamer.

@JoelVenom.- sup bro, I actually equalized the hell out of this vocals cuz I was having some mixing problems, I get rid of all the booming low frequencies and actually cleared a load of peak glitchin with just a ParametricEQ. and on the hook, I guess its just personal preference cuz I most of the time do them like that. I think this particular song had some kind of problem. (hence why it didn't make the album). but cheers for your comment man. Glad to see new faces around :y: :b: :smoking:

Thanks again to everyone :y:
User avatar
B.A.D.
Dr.Dre
Dr.Dre
 
Posts: 8908
Joined: Jan 15th, '05, 20:51
Location: Germany/Mexico/Australia
Gender: Male

Re: T h e   M i r a c l e

Postby mdemaz » Aug 24th, '11, 10:24

Hey Ax, I know what you mean man...If the sub bass is too high, you get harsh distortion..It's annoying.
ImageImageImage
s/o to Eedee Python CP Horse Snake Pain SaJn Silver Cement Excitaz PK Rolly GW EG Charlotte Kasia Mel Wiz Solace TRex SliK Aone Atone Trimss Menzo Geno Fish Jaba Detroit Blogs Based lil_b IBR DA! Mono ROM NRG Bigray Hesky Francesco Yoda Noddy Raul
Just Silver wrote:I think every guy should massage their prostate at least once

Image
User avatar
mdemaz
Addict
Addict
 
Posts: 10208
Joined: Dec 6th, '10, 12:09
Location: Brisbane, Australia
Gender: Male

Re: T h e   M i r a c l e

Postby B.A.D. » Aug 26th, '11, 10:14

mdemaz wrote:Hey Ax, I know what you mean man...If the sub bass is too high, you get harsh distortion..It's annoying.


yup, sucks lol :y:
User avatar
B.A.D.
Dr.Dre
Dr.Dre
 
Posts: 8908
Joined: Jan 15th, '05, 20:51
Location: Germany/Mexico/Australia
Gender: Male

Re: T h e   M i r a c l e

Postby l33chie » Aug 26th, '11, 12:22

I think everything was awesome, the hook was sick, the beat was pretty dope. Your flow was pretty dope. I also have pretty bad speakers so I can't really comment on the quality but it sounded pretty decent. Good Drop!
l33chie
Closet Cleaner
Closet Cleaner
 
Posts: 30
Joined: Mar 16th, '11, 01:16

Re: T h e   M i r a c l e

Postby B.A.D. » Aug 27th, '11, 06:32

l33chie wrote:I think everything was awesome, the hook was sick, the beat was pretty dope. Your flow was pretty dope. I also have pretty bad speakers so I can't really comment on the quality but it sounded pretty decent. Good Drop!


thanks a lot my brother, I appreciate that :worship: :worship: :y:
User avatar
B.A.D.
Dr.Dre
Dr.Dre
 
Posts: 8908
Joined: Jan 15th, '05, 20:51
Location: Germany/Mexico/Australia
Gender: Male

Re: T h e   M i r a c l e

Postby Solace » Aug 28th, '11, 03:31

Cover is pretty cool, great concept you used. The chorus was beautiful. You're on beat, you have little to no breath issues, you've got a good delivery. I really liked how you incorporated singing into rap verses. That's unique, and needless to say dope. I liked the ending, it was really sweet. You sounded really into it. The was one miniscule thing that bugged me about this track. I know nothing of mixing in general, but your mixing sounded weird. I mean, I know you've had tracks where you were clearer. Maybe this is intentional and how you like your tracks to sound, but it was a bit odd to me. Maybe it's just me and I'm not listening properly, get back to me on it. Great track overall, well done getting people hyped on your next album.
Image
User avatar
Solace
Bad Influence
Bad Influence
 
Posts: 19901
Joined: Apr 25th, '08, 03:12
Gender: Male

Re: T h e   M i r a c l e

Postby SajN » Aug 28th, '11, 17:28

Wow Ax, I am positively surprised! The first second the beat didn't sound nice, but then it became better. The way you rapped was awesome, really liked it! I was listening to it loudly, and my littlebrother didn't like the hook, but I actually enjoyed it. I get some dark feeling while listening to this, which is good.
! Is He Nuts? No, He's InSajN !
User avatar
SajN
The Almighty
The Almighty
 
Posts: 14943
Joined: Oct 19th, '06, 18:04
Location: Norway
Gender: Male

Re: T h e   M i r a c l e

Postby Mr. Chambers » Aug 29th, '11, 06:13

i really enjoyed this one. your flow was pretty spot on for both verses. i wasn't really feeling the hook tbh. not one of your better works in that aspect. but that beat was pretty wicked. really liked the vibe it gave. overall it was an enjoyable song. can't wait for the new album
Image
Image

so much WIN!
User avatar
Mr. Chambers
Soldier
Soldier
 
Posts: 1743
Joined: May 28th, '09, 02:03
Location: pittsburgh
Gender: Male

Next

Return to Audio Stage



Who is online

Users browsing this forum: Google [Bot]