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Otis Freestyle

Postby l33chie » Aug 26th, '11, 12:24



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Re: Otis Freestyle

Postby l33chie » Aug 26th, '11, 15:33

haha good looks man, it's a sick beat, thanks for the feedback. I'm really trying to elevate in recording and writing. I can't wait for your drop!!! :y:
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Re: Otis Freestyle

Postby Oguchi » Aug 26th, '11, 21:54

This is nice, I'm not a big fan of the original song but your flow is brilliant. I wish I could rap as fast as you. I'll check out the other videos on your channel :y:
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Re: Otis Freestyle

Postby l33chie » Aug 26th, '11, 22:11

Thank you. I'm still sort of new to recording, so I haven't mastered the art of being able to change speeds lol. IDK I get hyped up when I rap and I guess it comes out too fast. It's like as soon as I hit the record button, my heart pounds lmao... idk..
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Re: Otis Freestyle

Postby B.A.D. » Aug 27th, '11, 06:32

Kez, get in here. we need to kill this beat!! lol

Damn son you got a nice flow! Great writing structure. Dope lyrics. And very entertaining. :y:

One thing I could advice you on is the mixing, its very unclear, try different settings and explore different ways to EQ. get rid of the hiss and background noises. also our layovers are way too loud, very very loud, you need to have them lower.

good job non-the less, great writing :y:
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Re: Otis Freestyle

Postby l33chie » Aug 27th, '11, 08:09

Thank you for the advice! I will put it into play my next drop.

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Re: Otis Freestyle

Postby StoneyLodge » Aug 28th, '11, 01:45

Flow was pretty much on-point for most of the time. I like the fast pace of it, and the way you enunciate sorta reminded me of Yelawolf for some reason. Fit the beat though and I enjoyed this, wasn't bad at all.
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Re: Otis Freestyle

Postby l33chie » Aug 29th, '11, 22:07

Thanks for the feedback everyone!

I will def stick around, everyone's been pretty cool since I've been here. :y: :y:
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