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Postby Joel Venom » Aug 25th, '11, 19:57

I just recorded this song two days ago, had to clean it up a little bit..let me know what ya'll people of Shady think!

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Re: Joel Venom - City Of Dust

Postby BumShiv » Aug 26th, '11, 02:31

Damn. That shit was dope as hell! The beat was really dope along with the production. Now for the lyrics, I didnt catch everything you said (just need more listens from me) but that shit was dope. The chorus is sick too and the background vocal of the girl screaming adds a great effect. Im actually gonna download and listen to this shit :y: Keep it up bro :y: Please try to feed me when you can viewtopic.php?f=69&t=123716

Oh and imma follow you on twitter (@BumShiv) , follow back ? :D
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Re: Joel Venom - City Of Dust

Postby Joel Venom » Aug 26th, '11, 09:00

thanks my man i definitely appreciate you coming through and checking out this new track of mine. and i'll return the favor soon!
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Re: Joel Venom - City Of Dust

Postby B.A.D. » Aug 26th, '11, 10:13

My dude that was wonderful, great energy.

The feedback I can give you is watch out on the mixing process, you are compressing your vocals very wrong, they are very limited. You need to go softer on that and leave a bit of headroom to allow words to be clear enough for the listener.

I like your style bro. Beautiful lyrics. Wish u success :y:
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Re: Joel Venom - City Of Dust

Postby Joel Venom » Aug 26th, '11, 18:03

thanks for the advice with the mixing, it definitely helps foreal,and if you have any songs you want feedback on let me know.
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Re: Joel Venom - City Of Dust

Postby Solace » Aug 26th, '11, 19:57

I honestly have to complaints, I really enjoyed listening to it and it has a lot of replay-ability. :y: You plan on sticking around for a while 'cause it sounds like you could bring some freshness to the Audio Stage :whistle:
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Re: Joel Venom - City Of Dust

Postby Joel Venom » Aug 27th, '11, 02:37

no dizzzoubt my dude, i'll definitely be staying around here for a bit.
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Postby Solace » Aug 27th, '11, 06:27

Haha good, it's a good forum and way to get your music around anyway.
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Re: Joel Venom - City Of Dust

Postby Oguchi » Aug 27th, '11, 13:25

This sounds very professional, you have a voice suited to being a MC I think. I wouldn't bat an eyelid if I heard this on the radio, well done.
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Postby Joel Venom » Aug 27th, '11, 21:07

appreciate it oguchi. much love! and i will be posting more material like this soon.
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Re: Joel Venom - City Of Dust

Postby RainMan44 » Aug 27th, '11, 22:30

You obviously know what you're doing, you sound like you've rehearsed it beforehand, which is good :y:

Your multies are on point, your lyricism is dope, you flow is dope, your delivery is dope, your voice is dope.....no complaints in that department at all, GREAT shit. :y:



Only thing, the mixing is good, I can hear it....but it could be a little bit better. Other than that, good shit man. Dope track, keep going at it :b:
"This dude doing this interview wants me to spin a few,
Lyrics while I tie my tennis shoes in the nude
A romantic interlude in a livin’ room,
In an inner tube with a dude with a bit of lube
Fuck that I’m sniffin’ glue, sippin' gin & juice,
And a little bit of paint thinner with my dinner too,
You better pay me for my bars like your rent is due,
Now hurry up and finish dude before I finish you."




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Re: Joel Venom - City Of Dust

Postby Joel Venom » Aug 27th, '11, 23:01

appreciate it rain man! sticking around for sure!
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Postby RainMan44 » Aug 27th, '11, 23:05

Joel Venom wrote:appreciate it rain man! sticking around for sure!



anytime man :b:
"This dude doing this interview wants me to spin a few,
Lyrics while I tie my tennis shoes in the nude
A romantic interlude in a livin’ room,
In an inner tube with a dude with a bit of lube
Fuck that I’m sniffin’ glue, sippin' gin & juice,
And a little bit of paint thinner with my dinner too,
You better pay me for my bars like your rent is due,
Now hurry up and finish dude before I finish you."




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Postby RainMan44 » Aug 27th, '11, 23:05

Joel Venom wrote:appreciate it rain man! sticking around for sure!



anytime man :b:
"This dude doing this interview wants me to spin a few,
Lyrics while I tie my tennis shoes in the nude
A romantic interlude in a livin’ room,
In an inner tube with a dude with a bit of lube
Fuck that I’m sniffin’ glue, sippin' gin & juice,
And a little bit of paint thinner with my dinner too,
You better pay me for my bars like your rent is due,
Now hurry up and finish dude before I finish you."




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Postby RainMan44 » Aug 27th, '11, 23:05

Joel Venom wrote:appreciate it rain man! sticking around for sure!



anytime man :b:
"This dude doing this interview wants me to spin a few,
Lyrics while I tie my tennis shoes in the nude
A romantic interlude in a livin’ room,
In an inner tube with a dude with a bit of lube
Fuck that I’m sniffin’ glue, sippin' gin & juice,
And a little bit of paint thinner with my dinner too,
You better pay me for my bars like your rent is due,
Now hurry up and finish dude before I finish you."




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