Solace - Inadequate

[Solace]

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Hi guys, me again. I hope this doesn't get locked. Lol.

[Verse]
Please try to understand that I've tried my best,
...I know it's time to rest,
I'm always thinking of what lies ahead,
Beating every limit that my time has set while I'm a mess,
I'm losing grip, every day is grey,
And I fade away with all the mistakes I've made,
My mind is focused on the false and true
I'm never truly sure in my solitude,
I got ripped by your sharp claws,
I'm pathetic, I've been fighting for a lost cause,
Now I'm nervous...By now I've lost purpose,
Look me in the eyes, and then say I'm not worth it,
I deserve it, thinking back to you and I,
I get tipsy, with a glass of suicide,
At last my emotions break the surface,
I'm sorry, I'll try harder just to make me perfect.

[Chorus]
I say shut the fuck up to every lie in your head
Fuck it, (fuck it) I'm just trying my best,
Shut the fuck up, yeah I've had my moments,
But who the fuck are you to diss me at my lowest?

[DƎRDYPK]

that was tight as fuck
very short but sweet


*downloads and tags as S0LACE*

[Solace]

Haha thanks.

[B.A.D.]

That was dope.

Its good what you do, its easy to listen to you because you seem to focus on the listener side aswell. Youre very creative and have perfect pronunciation and know how to flow. the hook is dope too. The only thing I didn't liked a lot on this one is that it seems that your voice is changing, and you are starting to Elongate words? (I dont know if you understand what Im tryng to say). Anyways, you do have a good voice for hip hop so try not to mess with it much.

Props on the Quality too

[Solace]

That was dope.

Its good what you do, its easy to listen to you because you seem to focus on the listener side aswell. Youre very creative and have perfect pronunciation and know how to flow. the hook is dope too.

Props on the Quality too

Thanks.

The only thing I didn't liked a lot on this one is that it seems that your voice is changing, and you are starting to Elongate words? (I dont know if you understand what Im tryng to say). Anyways, you do have a good voice for hip hop so try not to mess with it much.

I don't notice my voice changing, and I'm not doing it on purpose. I think that's just puberty bruh lol. However I stretched out the end rhymes seemed to fit perfect for my flow so I don't see anything wrong with its use here. I hope I do have a good voice lol; it sounds horrid when I listen back to it. Thanks a lot for peeping.

[Joel Venom]

for one i thought you shouldnt have left that much space inbetween your bars at the start the flow was good, but you want something to fill in every spot to make the track even more official just some advice. besides that beat and lyrics were on point keep it up famo.

if you can return the favor on my song: viewtopic.php?f=38&t=123695

[Solace]

for one i thought you shouldnt have left that much space inbetween your bars at the start the flow was good, but you want something to fill in every spot to make the track even more official just some advice. besides that beat and lyrics were on point keep it up famo.

Well that was the point of the adlibs, since I know it's boring to listen to empty space inbetween lines. That isn't usually how I flow, but for this I worked on structuring the verse to suit my breathing. You know? Thanks for taking the time to listen man, I commented on your track too.

[Kez]

I enjoyed it, your voice is sweet.

I got no complaints really and I aint gonna go in great detail on a one verse/hook song. But I liked it.

[SG.]

I really liked it. The only problem I had was the voice change between the verse and the chorus. It's a very-easy-to-listen-to song and I really like your style.

[Solace]

I enjoyed it, your voice is sweet.

I got no complaints really and I aint gonna go in great detail on a one verse/hook song. But I liked it.

Thank you Kez.

I really liked it. The only problem I had was the voice change between the verse and the chorus. It's a very-easy-to-listen-to song and I really like your style.

I assume it's because it was a higher pitch I did the chorus at or something. Thanks Zabe. Oh yeah and if anyone has a Youtube account you should all totally add mine.

[SajN]

Don't know why, but the general sound of this track reminded me of Sadistik... a lot. Not that it's a bad thing though, it just reminded me of him.

Anyway, I agree with the others, you do have a good voice.
While listening I didn't think that I would want to hear a 2nd verse as well, but when the hook kicked in, I wanted more... So yeah, would be cool as a full track.

Nice one

[Solace]

Thanks SajN, always appreciated

[Solace]

Thanks for checking it, will try and work on smoother transitions

[Oguchi]

This was an enjoyable listen, my only fault was the elongating of words, it's been mentioned but I picked on it in the first few lines. I thought the transition to hook was fine, towards the end of the verse I thought you sounded sort of like one out of the guys out of Hollywood Undead. (Not in a bad way).

[Solace]

I love HU Thanks for peeping it man.