Crimson And Clover

by **Oguchi** » Aug 27th, '11, 20:53

A song I wrote called Crimson And Clover.
I know the singing isn't great but I'd be grateful for feedback on the lyrics, delivery etc.
Link:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rp0hkFo_1J4

Feedback link: http://forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=38&t=123542&start=15

Website · by **Solace** » Aug 28th, '11, 16:12

Tbh, you have really bad quality. It sounds like you recorded with a camera or something. You sure you can't get a better mic? Your flow was on point most of the time, rare slip ups here and there. Your singing was alright. Delivery is okay. I can't comment much since I can't fully hear you. Work on getting better quality bruh, you'll get there. I love Sufjan Steven's "The Dress Looks Nice On You" so the highlight of this track for me was instrumental choice. Remember choosing the beat correctly is as important as any other aspect in rap. :y:

by **Oguchi** » Aug 28th, '11, 18:33

Thanks a lot for the feedback man, yeah I did record that with a camera :sweating:

that's why it's shit quality. I am saving up to buy a proper mic. And yes that beat is excellent, in fact the whole mash-up album is brilliant I presume you've listened to it?. Thanks again for the feedback, hopefully I'll get that mic soon and up the quality and the rapping.