Mat Demaz- Freestyle 8 (Prod. By Jason King)

[mdemaz]

Haven't put any shit here for a while.
Hate or love it, I don't give a shit.
All in one take, 48..Uh, 44 bars of sheer death.
Get at me if you wanna collab, I'm bored as fuck.


Lyrics:

Niggas on my balls man
saying I'm full of shit
check this shit right off the dome man
ayo jason on the turntables

I'm quitting rap fuck my fans I'm done
I'll kick a pregnant lady in the belly and her man then run
drink a bottle of vodka grab your niece and drop her
hop in a car full throttle go off a cliff bitch needs a doctor
on some skylar grey shit I'm crazy no doctor can save shit
feels like putting some hollow tips into some crazy snitch
haters want me dead 'cause I'm getting money
I'm vested up g firing at the first slut who tests me dummy
I'm committed to a mental asylum but they already declared me dead
snuck out the back jacking off to the severed heads
woke up my head feeling like a brick wall
that prick paul snuck some pills into my shit time to call
the cops wait they wont do spit at all
prolly arrest me for being high put me in a rehab crib near the mall
my life is played out like some jersey shore shit
fucking a handicapped bitch rubbing my turds into the whores lips

ayo jay new beat breh

motherfuckers think I'm not serious and this shit is a gimmick
come near me and we'll see bitch give me your wallets dimwits
I'm like a fucking time bomb so try to be calm hun
or else shit's gonna explode I'm gonna buy a gun
I'm sick enough to frame you for attempted murder for fun man
shooting myself in the knee then placing the gun in your hand (laughing in the background)
grabbing your chick by her tits like it's a discus throw
you pricks should know I shut shit down like windows
xp (laughing in the background) hey your girl is sexy let's see
if she'll take 12 grams of ecstasy and pop her cherry free
fool why are you sitting next to me
ass-kisser get me some hennessy
I'm a menace to society I'm like a fucking deity
hell yeah I'll let you drive because I feel like a dive in the sea
jason king and demaz up in that spot
fucking everything up with metal rap and rock

yeah heheheheh
one more time jay
hit it

people made me insane are who I would like to thank
now I can do shit like this to prove I have what it takes
all they did is say that I couldn't do this and that
now my discography is bigger than your bitches tits and ass
lemme hit that blunt I wanna shoot people
I'm releasing so much shit you'd think I'm the beatles
there's red spots on your head from the guns like you got measles
my rap style is psychotic while yours is rotting and feeble
lyrical death I'm spiritual on meth
it's a miracle you wack rappers left you're all hypocritical and full of lead
wake up and smell the roses
wake up five minutes after sneak in inject morphine ya posers
ah don't worry hahaha

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[Elision]

reminds me a lot of wax's old shit (look up one take in the basement)

good shit, but here's a quick tip: there's a lot of syllable cramming you're trying to do, which is awesome, but you seem to have a hard time fully enunciating all of your syllables -- so if I were you I'd sit down and practice chopping for a few days until you get it down, and (while it is hard to perfect) it's not too hard to learn after enough practice.

You definitely have the writing style for it, just learn to do it vocally

[Alex2012]

I like, lyrics are great and crazy.

dope freestyle, kangaroo man.

[mdemaz]

reminds me a lot of wax's old shit (look up one take in the basement)

good shit, but here's a quick tip: there's a lot of syllable cramming you're trying to do, which is awesome, but you seem to have a hard time fully enunciating all of your syllables -- so if I were you I'd sit down and practice chopping for a few days until you get it down, and (while it is hard to perfect) it's not too hard to learn after enough practice.

You definitely have the writing style for it, just learn to do it vocally

Thanks for the tips bro.

Thanks for listening Alex.

[Trimss]

feedback isn't my thing but ..

the lyrics were kinda funny. But you kinda sound shy on the mic, your delivery lacks energy I think. Sometimes your double time flow fucked up your prononciation and I feel like your voice isn't loud enough.

I think with that said, it was funny and cool to listen to. keep at it

[mdemaz]

I hate having a loud voice in songs haha, it sounds annoying on the speakers and shit, I'd rather have a mello voice blending with the beat sometimes really...But sometimes I have to turn the vocal mix up if the beat is complicated.

Thanks for the feed man.

[B.A.D.]

well that was entertaining.
Its hard to give feedback on this type of freestyles, but it was creative and pretti awsome, good delivery and your voice is funny lmao. Just try to work on perfecting the way you structure rhymes and syllables so that your flow is more steady

[mdemaz]

well that was entertaining.
Its hard to give feedback on this type of freestyles, but it was creative and pretti awsome, good delivery and your voice is funny lmao. Just try to work on perfecting the way you structure rhymes and syllables so that your flow is more steady

Yeah haha, it was just full-on 16s and shit.
90 percent of it was premeditated..

I personally didn't think my structure was bad considering it was off the dome haha, maybe the last verse derailed because I was getting tired and stopped the verse at 12 bars..

Oh well.
Thanks for the feed man.

Yo, I used 2 bar multis in the past 4 songs really..It's sorta my signature flow but w/e..
If some future shit I'll try to do some 1999 Eminem shit.