hold me as i cry tonight

by **> Evil _ MoNkEy <** » May 1st, '06, 12:57

i cry and cry as time gos by
crying and praying that ill soon die
i feel so empty and cold
so hollow and alone
i need your arms to hold me tight
to hold me as i cry tonight.

i want to feel your body next to mine
and here you say that things will be fine
i need your strength cause i have none
and my biggest struggles are yet to come
i need you here to be my light
and hold me as i cry tonight

by **> Evil _ MoNkEy <** » May 1st, '06, 22:09

memyselforwho wrote::'( very touching, but why are you so sad

u know y

its all ive been able to talk about for the last few weeks.... and i bitch about it on msn

by **neha** » May 1st, '06, 22:33

sorry for askin but i noticed that your always sad....try to make a happy poem :happy:

by **> Evil _ MoNkEy <** » May 2nd, '06, 04:14

neha wrote:sorry for askin but i noticed that your always sad....try to make a happy poem

u want a happy poem? go find a happy person......... ill write a happy poem wen i feel happy.... till then, o well

by **> Evil _ MoNkEy <** » May 2nd, '06, 04:26

memyselforwho wrote:well try to make yourself happy somehow, you know, bein deppresing evidently annoys some people, and is only hurting you

i dont care if i annoy ppl :twisted:

im here to be a thorn in there side.......... and i did do sumthin to make myself happy today.... i went and spent the day with my bestest friend susan and had a really great time, instead of moping in front of the computer..... ive made up my mind to just move on with my life, cus i dont deserv to be treated like dog shit...... and i have friends and family who love me and care about me...... so fuck it..... y should i let him drag me down? :sweating:

and just for the record, i am goin to be working on some lighter, kinda.... motivational.... a little more upbeat poetry.... but mind u, there may still be some dark elements...... but i wrote a happy poem once... it was called ~ love poem ~ but no one read it....... so, im not always such a negative person..... but, wen ur depressed, it takes an effort to see the brighter side in life.... and susan helped me see it :happy:

by **> Evil _ MoNkEy <** » May 2nd, '06, 10:29

Sarah wrote:Aww, so sad to read all these . They are very well done though, i think you have talent . They're sad but good

thank u.... wen i wrote them, i was sitting in my room just crying, and i just... i felt the need to write it all down and get it all out....... and i know my sadness annoys some, but we all go thro down times in r life, and even tho they dont admit it, theyve had to have felt like me at one time or another

by **Ivy** » May 2nd, '06, 23:50

Again, another moving piece of literature. It touches the heart. Just reading it can make me relate to what you're saying, even though I have no relation what-so-ever to the situation you're facing. :yawn:

I guess that's just me though

by **> Evil _ MoNkEy <** » May 3rd, '06, 03:01

TaylorakaTiGGi wrote::loudcry: Again, another moving piece of literature. It touches the heart. Just reading it can make me relate to what you're saying, even though I have no relation what-so-ever to the situation you're facing. I guess that's just me though

thank u sweetness... i try my best

by **ines** » May 3rd, '06, 09:55

good poem, i like to read it

by **> Evil _ MoNkEy <** » May 4th, '06, 08:03

ines wrote:good poem, i like to read it

thnk u

hold me as i cry tonight

hold me as i cry tonight

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