Otis Remix

[Ticalrecords]

aite so here's my feedback

viewtopic.php?f=38&t=124761


and here's my remix to Jay-Z's Otis. feedback please

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZShhVe-JpZQ

[Solace]

I'll check this tonight, just giving you a heads up

[Vettori]

never been a fan of remixes. for what it is, Quality seems terrible,your flow needs work,
no wordplay or anything that really stood out to me. Seems more of a just for fun track.. Keep at it, maybe invest in some better equipment to motivate you more

[Solace]

Your quality isn't that bad, but I feel as though all you did was record vocals and put it on the instrumental; there's no mixing WHATSOEVER. Post up your lyrics in the future, 'cause not everything is caught. Your vocals peaked at times...Kinda disturbing to listen to. Your delivery isn't so bad, actually better than what I've heard from the beginner artists here. Cut out the heavy breaths while recording and punch in; do whatever you can to fix yourself up you know? Keep droppin'.

[B.A.D.]

I use to love Otis Remixses, but man, this needs work.

you have a "cool" emotion, but weak voice. and you need to do mixing cuz it sounds bad to the ears.

some lyircs were nice. but yeah... practice a bit more

[Ticalrecords]

thanks everyone, i really appreciate the feedback, yeah i did this in my house and i have no idea how to mix thats what im tryna figure out how to do

[Nefarious]

I gave it a listen, i noticed the quality wasnt the best, but i guess you gotta do with what youve got, ive been in the same situation myself, but being able to pull off a listenable track on bad quality just mean's it can only sound better, and if you get urself used to listening to bad quality, you'll appreciate anything more than what you have now.