All Falls Down Remix

[Ticalrecords]

heres my feedback link viewtopic.php?f=38&t=126700&p=1766281#p1766281


here is my song,

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mwdtmv1L3a8

i just need to know a few things, flow, delivery, and most importantly is does it have replay value

[Ticalrecords]

come on yall...bump. as in this song is bumping yall shud comment on it

[Eedee]

Ehhh. Not liking the track man. Lyrics were great, just your delivery sounds the exact same on each one of your songs. Plus that sample you had in the background really annoyed me when I was trying to concentrate on your lyrics. And "can you hear the hate in my voice?" No. Haha. I can hear the sarcastic seriousness and it doesn't mesh well with the sample or the lyrical content (to me). You also trail off at the end of bars, so you're saying something and I'm like "yeah yeah yeah boy! rhyme it!!" then you trail off and can barely hear your rhyme and I'm then like Good beat too, enjoyed that part of it. Great lyrics as I said, just delivery... wasn't bad, just... change it up from song to song perhaps?

Feed me back? viewtopic.php?f=38&t=127354 Thanks!

[Ticalrecords]

bump one more time

[Nefarious]

I didnt like the beat but i was surprised to hear someone rap on that lol, I was digging your lyrics and your delivery had something i couldnt pin point, i think you mightve put to much emotion into what you were saying, i dont know why that would be bad, but it might be delaying what your trying to say and making your bars longer, or just maybe the beat wasnt very complimenting or something, still it was a good listen keep doing ur thing.

[Ticalrecords]

thanks guys i appreciate the feedback