Mat Demaz- Hard Time (Feat. Eedee)

[mdemaz]

Had a few dramas in the studio with recording this.
This is only really a template and concept, tried a Bad Meets Evil thing minus the 2 bar swap overs..
If anyone is wondering why the last hook's volume is quiet, it's a hidden message of Eedees sanity.

He fuses with Demaz Phantom and runs away into the night.
This is really my first try at bar swapping..So..Yeah..I like it so far.
Maybe I should of tried 2 instead of 4...
Mainly my fault Eedee's vocals sound dull, I forgot to enhance them.
It's whatever, youknownomsayin'?


Lyrics:

Eedee:
You dumped me for a reason I just couldn't explain
it jumped me like a grandma walking alone in the rain
it's insane the way I felt for ya I'll tell ya
I can't believe that I loved you my shelter
as I sat on that couch overcome with disbelief
I pleaded with you girl reason a mystery
a victory for you I guess fuck it who needs you
then I break down crying I'm lying so see through
right through me and you snap my hopes like a twig
big fat lie bitch you didn't pick me shit
you're just a fucking bitch who needs your clit
when I have hip hop paper lyrics and a pen
I can vent my anger out everytime that I spit
and tell the world how much of a fucking succubus
you are oh man did I go too far
If my hatred burnt like the sun then you're my shining star

Mat Demaz:
(Chorus)
you know it's a hard time when you sit down and cry
you ask yourself a million times the fuck why
you know it's a hard time when you wither and shake
and you do it until your sick quiver and quake

inhaling nitrous balloons exhaling and inhaling c02
then suffocating it's what I do
my shlong is long and in my hand smoking a bong with my man
talking about em's song same song & dance
see all my friends and old girlfriend with jobs and kids and shit
makes me shake my head your all wasting your lives 'till your dead
taking pictures of coons say cheese now mofo
hah milking suckers for their cream don't have a cow bro

Eedee:
yeah we may have dated for give or take 2 years,
the ways been paved and I can't replace my fears,
yes I fell in love with your smile but so what
I've burned in hell enough while I'm screaming go fuck
yourself you little cunt you sinister demon
trying to convert me like you're Minister Ethan.
no more grievin' but I'll finish your breathin'
I'm seething eric inhibit your beefin'

Eedee:
(Chorus) 2x

Eedee:
so now I'm rid of you I'm sick of you cunt
I said it once and twice I think I've said it enough
been fed lumps of rice by you white lies
all eyes are on you honey the primetime

Mat Demaz:
don't try to hide you emo slut crying bitch
fuck your shit you'll see no blood from my wrists
stupid bitch stop getting my blunts get ready to feel my machete and guns
black betty broke my heart again already it sucks dude

Eedee:
you make me puke, even though it sounds rude,
it may be crude but it's god damned truth.
no excuse for the way you treated me fuck you
which is why I'm doing this in my one man booth!

Mat Demaz:
when will you understand I don't love you
you're my fan ok but fuck you
get out of the vicinity now before I get messy and bow
blow off your arms and get steady blood flow coming out

Mat Demaz & Eedee:
(Chorus) 2x

LOF:
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[Eedee]

Thanks for uploading this mat this was fun to do with ya! Glad the way it turned out!

[Ticalrecords]

aite idk, foreal i didn't like it. few things.. Eedee's voice sounds whiny and breathy its like the worst combination i've ever heard (no offense). i think the delivery is what needs work cuz your lyrics and flow are on point. also, i couldn't understand any of Matt's rhymes even with the lyrics in front of me - i think its the accent i can't get passed. either way, my only advice is rerecord it cuz you;ve got a good concept, its just that delivery thats killing it (in a bad way)


btw i posted a song for review its at the very top of teh audio stage cue, called Keep Runnin'

[Instant Legend]

there are some promising elements to this track: ridin the beat right, a few nice lines, an enjoyable beat.

I think what lacks a bit is the required mic presence and overall confidence and infliction.

Not a bad cut by any means though

BTW - whats the code to directly embed youtube vids here?

shout @ me homie:

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[mdemaz]

Thanks for the feed you guys, anything helps..
I'll shout back..

[Eedee]

Thanks for the feed. Will feed both of you.