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On some grown man shit got my kid helpin me out on the hook

Postby Instant Legend » Sep 28th, '11, 18:51

http://youtu.be/Cs0P-YQFwm4

This one just went out to radio with 1975 and Cabin Fever.

A few of you may remember the original - different beat, unmastered. This one is the official beast.

If you dig grown man raps, you can download this here: Cohesive: The Beginning (2011) | Instant Legend

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Re: On some grown man shit got my kid helpin me out on the h

Postby Ticalrecords » Sep 28th, '11, 19:12

i liked it it was catchy, and you definetely have a good delivery. the only negative i have to say about it is the girl in the back round for the chorus doesn't really help - she kinda makes it worse but thats just imo. over all the song was good it got some replay value n thats the best thing for a rap song to have.

i have some other songs you shud check out- i just bumped my All Falls Down Remix to the top of the cue so tell me what u think.
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Re: On some grown man shit got my kid helpin me out on the h

Postby B.A.D. » Sep 29th, '11, 05:09

I gave a listen to Choesive on youtube, Secret's Out was probably my favourite. But good stuff man, a very enjoyable tape.

This song is awsome, I love the feeling and this is something I'd love to hear on the radio. You should even shoot a video for this one, its brilliant. from the flow to the technique. You remind me a lot of Big Boi from OutKast... one of my fav artists.

man, I loved this song :worship: :worship:
the hook is excelent, sounds very joyfull and you can tell there's connection between you.

man, I want to help you, this is what hip hop needs man, I'll start by tweeting and sharing this song.

loved it :worship: :worship:
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Re: On some grown man shit got my kid helpin me out on the h

Postby Instant Legend » Sep 29th, '11, 05:17

Big Ax-D wrote:I gave a listen to Choesive on youtube, Secret's Out was probably my favourite. But good stuff man, a very enjoyable tape.

This song is awsome, I love the feeling and this is something I'd love to hear on the radio. You should even shoot a video for this one, its brilliant. from the flow to the technique. You remind me a lot of Big Boi from OutKast... one of my fav artists.

man, I loved this song :worship: :worship:
the hook is excelent, sounds very joyfull and you can tell there's connection between you.

man, I want to help you, this is what hip hop needs man, I'll start by tweeting and sharing this song.

loved it :worship: :worship:


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Re: On some grown man shit got my kid helpin me out on the h

Postby mdemaz » Sep 30th, '11, 03:50

Enjoyable song.

I thought it was weird with the kids singing and stuff but, it's w/e younawmsayin'?
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I liked the sorta mainstream-friendly vibe to the track.
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Re: On some grown man shit got my kid helpin me out on the h

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Sep 30th, '11, 14:25

you got a very controlled delivery...which is very good...most deliveries are steady/monotone when controlled..but yours controlled and steady but NOT monotone or some.. :y:
flow was very controlled aswell....i used the word controlled already twice..
just lemme say you got a very controlled mic presence/performance... :y: propz on that
you sound comfortable...makes it also comfortable to listen to..
liked the hook....definitly adds to the track... :y:
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Re: On some grown man shit got my kid helpin me out on the h

Postby Eedee » Oct 4th, '11, 15:31

I love your delivery and the kids on the hook. Very... cohesive...

The rhyming was okay, I guess, maybe more internals and multis, but nonetheless, sounded great. :y:
The beat is also very great, but the background vocals got annoying after a while, but that's just me.

Good job dude!
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Re: On some grown man shit got my kid helpin me out on the h

Postby Nefarious » Oct 5th, '11, 00:56

Never heard one of your songs before, so this is a good first impression for me, nothing really bad to say, this song has a nice feeling to it, im lacking a song like this im pretty sure, your one of the better rappers ive heard on here, i usually dont feed much but i made an acception after i listened to this cuz i liked it, awesome delivery, lyrics and beat.
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